Date: 05/24/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 11
I agree..................... what will happen to tom and bill now? Poor gillian..... something needs to happen.... hurry! xD
Date: 05/19/09 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh God, that was so sad, I almost cried... how can they be so oblivious to the fact that they're perfect for each other >.
Date: 05/19/09 12:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh gosh.... :'( I'm bawling my eyes out right now, and the only thing that is keeping me from sobbing (there is some difference mind you) is
The two of them had fallen silent again, except that no tension no longer hung in the air between them.
I don't know, I started to laugh and cry at the same time. And I reread it like twenty times, because my dull mind can't understand if it just has no twice in it, or it is a double negative... I don't know!! It just sounded weird, and I huccuped and cried my way through it, but OMG!!!
I am so loving it though!! Maybe it is horribly sick that I like having all this angst, but I love reading it, and I'm crying so much and somehow that is making me get all the stress out in my
day :) so thanks :)
He finally drove off, watching Gillian waving her hand as Bill carried him on his rear view mirror,
then this was the only other mistake I saw, not sure if it is the only other one, it might not be a mistake, and I'm just so out of it, I don't know what I'm saying, but idk how Bill can carry Tomi on his rearview mirror...unless I'm reading that wrong...
Oh my gosh, this is where I started bawling...
Both of their eyes were already red and swollen, and the sight of Bill’s plush lips wet with saliva and tears made his belly grow warm, yet again he willed himself to ignore it since he had no right to touch Bill anywhere else unnecessary.
I wanted a kiss right there, so badly, so so so badly, but it didn't come, and now I'm thirsting for it :) lol, that's sort of pathetic on my part... but whatever, it makes me want it so much :) The book, the book, the book...Gillian gave Tomi memories, and maybe it will make Mr. Tomi realize that he needs to come back to them, because he does right? To be with Bill, and Gillian, and be Dada Tomi :')
“I don’t want another daddy!!” She cried over and over
I thought Bill would hear this, and my heart stopped. I'm not sure why, but I thought if Bill heard this, Gillian says she just wants Tom... but I didn't need to worry :) which was good :) lol, I love you updating unbeta'd you update faster than :) hehehehe :) *squeal*
Author's Response: LMAO!! Ahahahaha... You know, when I started reading the first line you mentioned, it DOES sound weird!!XD Better go rephrase that. Bahahaha..XD And the next one! Ack! Me and my jell-o brain bahahaha..XD Supposed to be 'her' not 'him,' ne??XD Dang it. I feel lazy (and tired) proofreading and even when I try to, my eyes can't spot them easily lol..XD Thank God for people like you pointing out errors!!^^
rnSpeaking of kiss... I actually thought Tom would, but he didn't..>.< Baaaaahhh.. Maybe next time, ne? We'll see...*wiggles eyebrows* THANK YOU SO MUCH for the revieeeeeewwww!!! *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
Stupid boys. Andi is othing, not nearly as much as Tom, and all three of them are stupid boys. The only smart one in the whole kit-and-caboodle is Gillian, and she's only a child. That's says alot for our boys, doesn't it?
Great chapter, and I love this fic. Well done!
Author's Response: Heeee... Gillian is the only smart one around.XD And you're actually right. Andi is like.. Whatever. Bill is just dense and Tom.. Well yeah.. They're all stupid...XD But no matter how stupid they get I'm glad you're still reading this fic.. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
=((((((((((((
this almost made me cryyyy
awwwww
TOMMMMM
T.T
wonder whats gonna happen nexttt
Date: 05/18/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
Super
Thanx for posting so fast
Date: 05/18/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
aaagh, you almost got me to tears. Why are they making everything so difficult for themselves...
Update soon? *puppy eyes?*
Date: 05/18/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
update soon..plz i rly luvz thiz..and ooh wats on the last page??
plz update soon thx=]
Date: 05/18/09 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
I think the last page has something very special! ^.^ Kay, I love/hate you know. Atleast Bill and Tom made up...XD As always marvelous chapter.
PS. GILLIAN IS SO GOD DAMN ADORABLE!!!!!
Author's Response: I think so too. Although I really haven't seen the last page yet ahahahaha.. I will go sneak out and take a peek at it later..XD Und ja... I love Gillian too!! So cute!!XD At least now you don't hate me more.. HeeeeXD THANK YOU SO MUCH for the review!!*mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
WHY CAN'T THEY KISS ALREADY? D:
Author's Response: ACTUALLY... I was thinking of that too. I was like, "Tom!! Why can't you just God damn kiss him already?!?!" Ugh... They like to make things complicated. Stupid..>.< Haha.. Don't worry. SOON...^^ THANK YOU for the review!!!*mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
TT___TT so freaking sad i tell you i didnt cry but I feel like I did. I dont get it... but yeah MORE!
Author's Response: I know that feeling...*pats faerylxjae89* Lol... I'm still writing the next one. I suddenly got a sore throat right now and the rest of my body just don't feel well..>.< How stupid is that.. Anyways, THANK YOU SO MUCH for always reviewing!!!XD -hands out Tomi bunnies- Thank you!!^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!
I'm crying. Like, really crying. ALL because of you.
Please, please write fast and stop my tears ...
Oh, wow, that was kindda poetic, wasn't it?
Author's Response: *grabs box of tissue* Noooo... Don't cry..T^T I'll try to update as soon as I can, okay?? Thank you for the revieewww!!! *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
I didn't think he'd actually leave! :(
He should just tell Bill how he feels! This was a well heart-wrenching chapter, I shed a tear because of it. Glad they made up, but Dada Tomi! He can't leave Gillian and Bill.
MAKE HIM COME BACK. D:
please?
Author's Response: He still left..>.< And I totally agree. He should have just told Bill how he feels and kiss him. Bahahaha..XD I'll do what I can to have them back together... I guess I'll have to ask Georg and Gustav's help.. Better go find the G's now. Heeee..XD THANK YOU SO MUCH for the review!!*mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Can these two frustrate me more? They can sure try!!! *headdesk*
When the man you love is crying cause you're leaving him, that's a DEAD GIVEAWAY that he's terribly in love with you!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry that the boys are frustrating you a lot... I'll go talk to them now.. And maybe ask the G's for help too..>.< Lol..XD Those boys are oblivious..
Thanks for the review..^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/18/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this story.They are so sweet to each other.I hope they will be together soon.Update soon.
Date: 05/17/09 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
waaa. well Tom is just acting like a normal person in love who wants to let his lover go, coz knows what let him go means, let him be happy after all.
It's hurts but is how our minds are fuck up.
I really like your story, I stared reading at my job XD and finished today and I feel like i'm going to cry for them, it's so beautiful.
Keep writing ^^
Author's Response: I guess love makes us really stupid, ne? But then I wish he could just tell Bill how he feels and make their lives easier..>.<
You read at your job?!?:O Hope you didn't get into trouble..>.< But thank you so much for reading and for reviewing!!^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/17/09 01:20 am Title: Chapter 10
*eep*
...
...
...
...
STUPID BOYS!
Date: 05/17/09 12:27 am Title: Chapter 10
xDDDD ohhh nooo!!
I can't wait for more D: !!! I need to read more now JAJAJAA xD ...
oK i'LL WAIT!! n_n Please upload soon!!!!! I really like ur fic ...By the way, when Bill says Boss to Tom xD It sound sexy jijiji