Date: 05/25/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
“Damn it, Bill!! Wake up!! Or else I’m going to have to kiss you, damn it!!”
WHY NOT?! xD poor Billy..... Get well soon!
Date: 05/24/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I haven't read this type of stories where Bill has a kid. Anyway, its really great. Usually when I read a story like this I just skip it. But, this is somehow addicting.
Date: 05/24/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this story is really great! I'm putting this on my favorites!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!!!^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/24/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lol, the sneezing part was funny. I love where this story is going dude.
Date: 05/24/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
Noooo!!! Noooo!! I thought there was going to be another chapter man... NNNOOO!! Poor Bill... Man, this chapter made me cry man.. I really hope you update soon. This is a really great story dude. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'M ANXIOUS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Author's Response: I'm sorry about that..>.< I'll try my best to update soon. I hope you can wait...^^ Thank you so much!!^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/24/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 11
Fudge... That was so sad... I'm like crying right now... This story seriously like need to be featured. It's really impressing.
Date: 05/24/09 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Noooooo.... DRAMA! I hate drama... But that what makes this story so interesting.
Date: 05/24/09 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
Man... Tom is moving out. I would probably do the same thing... OMG I'M SO INTO THIS STORY!!
Date: 05/24/09 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Totally, my heart broke for Tom too.
Date: 05/24/09 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awww.. Man this story is incredible. I feel bad for Bill... Well at least he had a bright future.
Date: 05/24/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwww... Poor Tomi... LOVE THIS STORY BY THE WAY!
Date: 05/24/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lol, the sneezing part was funny. I love where this story is going dude.
Author's Response: LOL it's my way of breaking the ice when the word aaaawwwwkkkwaaaaarrdddd comes up lolol..XD Thanks dude!^^
Date: 05/24/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
OOPS! cut myself off. anyhoo, this is so pretty! love love love! and Bill... where the tomi come from???
oohhh billa like tomi... *g* yay! i squealed when i saw you had updated! that's how happy it made me *nods* i love this and i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Lolss it's okay dear!^^ I was anxious I wouldn't finish this on time. Gaaaaagghh..>.< I hope you guys can wait for the next chapter. It's getting busy around here but I'll make sure I'll get to update! Thank you so much!! *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/24/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww *sniff* sadness! that was srsly too cu
Date: 05/24/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh gosh :'( I kept being pulled away during this to help with this or that, and I was coming into the room crying, and everyone would look at me and go, "What the hell is wrong with you?" And I'll go, "Billa's dying damn it!" And then they'll mumble and walk away.
But seriously, I loved this, Tom is back, he's hugging Billa, Billa called him Tomi, and everything is going to get better right? Gosh, wow, Billa has a horrible past, I just, I'm amazed. I kept wanting Bill to see Tomi in the dream and save him, but it didn't happen :(
“Damn it, Bill!! Wake up!! Or else I’m going to have to kiss you, damn it!!”
:') Sleeping Beauty :) lol, hehehe :) I wasn't laughing at that part when I read it, but when I go over everything and look at it, I'm smiling and going, he woke up :) But then on the same second I'm going, damn it Bill, you should've stayed in the dream for another few paragraphs of descriptive, and then you would've woken up to a kiss :)
He could only hear the sound of his own heart heart beating furiously as he drove as quickly as possible late that night back to his old house.
hehehe, heart heart :) lol, Tomi has two hearts!! lol, sorry... :) You know what made me even sadder? When Tomi leaving wasn't the main reason Bill broke down, but because he saw his step-mom. Maybe that is sort of stupid for me to wish, but I wish he had been pushed over because Tomi left... lol, hehehe :) I want more!! I'm always waiting for this one to be updated, because you always have some twist that makes everything more interesting, and more to ponder in my boring life :)hehe, like I said, love you updating unbetad, just because it gets up there faster :)
Author's Response: You made my day. ahahaha..XD
Ooohh, I believe I have some explanations to do on the next chapter..XD Bill's a sleeping beauty alright, but I didn't want to use that again in this fic. It's already on my other fic lol.. But yeah, Bill should have stayed longer and Tom should have kissed him. But KISS him.. SOON..*evil laugh, cough,cough* And oh, it wasn't a step-mom. It's Bill's real mom. The son-of-a-bitch is Bill's step-father..>.< Crazy pedophile.. I don't know when I'll update again but I hope it's soooon..^^ Thank you so much for the review again!! *mwahhuggZz*rn
Date: 05/24/09 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this story is really great! I'm putting this on my favorites!
Date: 05/24/09 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
-dances- Happy but does that mean Tom is comming back to live with them? I dont know what else tosay but "happy-ish."
Author's Response: LOL.. I don't know if that meant Tom is coming back. But he said he won't lose Bill. Ahahaha.. So what does that mean? Bahahaha..XD I'll update as soon as I can. Thank you so much!! *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/24/09 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yay!!! I love you!! You hasve redemmed yourself... Poor Bill, I wanna hug him, but I cant...XD Again, another fabulous update!!! I have found a mistake though :D "He could only hear the sound of his own heart heart beating furiously as he drove as quickly as possible late that night back to his old house." I hope you feel better!! *huggles*
Author's Response: Yay!! *glomps Bwlover* I already edited the line, and a few others I saw lol.. Stupid meh..XD I was half-asleep finishing this update lolol..XD I really hope to get better soon! Can't wait to update this too!! Thank you so much!!*mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/24/09 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope you two feel better. Get well soon.
Wow, what a chapter, huh? Bill has his demons that he battles on a daily basis, and I feel for him. Maybe Tom can help him in the healing process, just like Lillian did. I hope he heals, and doesn't remain fractured, like he is now.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!^^
Like what Tom said, he'll be there for Bill. Let's see if he keeps his promise.@___@ Thank you so much for the review!*mwahhuuggZz*
Date: 05/24/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Where DID the Tomi come from??! Good question indeed, but OH, Bill sick and full of nightmares makes me cry! :((((((((((((((((
Tomi, please don't leave!
Author's Response: Hahaha..XD I really wonder where it came from. Ayeeee...XD Tom said he wouldn't leave. Let's see if he keeps that promise. And he said he wouldn't lose Bill. OOOhhh-kay..^^ Thank you for the revieeeeewww!! *mwahuggZz*