Date: 04/03/09 05:19 pm Title: Conclusion
This is the end?! I loved this story. I always looked forward to a new chapter. I thought the ending was perfect. Thanks for posting it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/29/09 09:05 pm Title: The Plan
Georg rocked in this chappie. ehehe, I loved it. The rest of it was great too. I hope Jost doesn't ruin him totally
Author's Response: Haha, Georg's such a dork. I love him.rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/29/09 01:18 pm Title: The Plan
Aww! I'm glad they are happy together! I hope Jost stays away from them from now on and the rap version of Monsoon does well!
This: "You sure you don’t want to give us another shot? We were so good together, babe." really made me cringe. Jost is a bad, bad man. =(
Author's Response: Yeah, I definitely have no sympathy for Jost in this story. He is an unrepentant asshole.rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/29/09 01:51 am Title: The Plan
aww=] update soon plz thx so much!!!!
Author's Response: The next part is coming soon! Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/28/09 11:50 am Title: The Plan
Well done billy!
I hope things are getting better for both of them.
Author's Response: I think things are looking up for them.rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/28/09 04:25 am Title: The Plan
GIVE ME MORE!!!
I love it plz give me more soon!!!!
I hate Jost! :( I want to kick his as!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 03/28/09 04:16 am Title: The Plan
PLEEEEASE UPADTE!!! that's all I have to say. ^_^
Author's Response: Haha...the next part is coming soon.
Date: 03/28/09 12:31 am Title: The Plan
Aww that is just amazing!! *squeals*
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/28/09 12:19 am Title: The Plan
ahh thats amazing!!! im so happy for bill and tom :D
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/27/09 10:13 pm Title: The Plan
you go bill :D
Author's Response: Haha, yes he does.rnrnThanks for the review!
Author's Response: Haha, yes he does.rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/27/09 09:42 pm Title: The Plan
they are just so sweet *^^*
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/27/09 09:19 pm Title: The Plan
Ooooh, interesting. Bill's a smarty pants xD Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/25/09 10:36 am Title: Saved?
Tom is being so nice *pets tom*
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/24/09 11:05 pm Title: Saved?
*smile* what's Bill's idea :D
Author's Response: You'll have to check back and find out!
Date: 03/24/09 10:36 pm Title: Saved?
Whoooo!
Sex already? Wowzers ;) It was nais, though. Verrrr nais.
I wonder what Bill has up his sleeve ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: 03/24/09 10:16 pm Title: Saved?
Oooh! What's Bill planning? Ok, it's offical. I think I'm taking you of my tracking list. I think it's safe to say you've moved up to favourites XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 03/24/09 07:17 pm Title: Saved?
ooh plz update soon plz thx so much=]
Author's Response: It'll probably be on Friday. So check back!
Date: 03/24/09 06:26 pm Title: Saved?
Woah! I don't know how I missed chap 5 (probably since I'm old-school and distrust the Tracked Stories feature xD ) But anyway, review for both chapters! Tom's got some balls, and I like that. Finally someone stands up to Jost! And the sex, well, that's always good ;) but you wrote it beautifully, which is a problem with some writers but not here. Ooooh, I really want to find out what Jost will do! And what Bill will do! Gaaah! Update soon please! =D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked both chapters. I was definitely nervous about the sex scene, so it's nice to hear that it turned out okay.
Date: 03/24/09 04:52 pm Title: Saved?
Very good chapter. I like how you handled the delicate situation after the fight in the studio and the sex was really sweet and delicious. I especially liked the line:
“Oh, Tom. I knew you’d be sweet.” He sighed. “You’re no more a gangster than I am.”
It made me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/23/09 02:32 am Title: In the Studio
so proud of tom
Author's Response: Me too! Thanks for reading!