Date: 03/15/09 05:29 am Title: The Contract
shit, i truly enjoyed this chapter. Bill wants to be friend with Tom, but this fucking Jost wouldn't let him, i guess. please update soon
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 03/15/09 02:18 am Title: The Contract
Ooooh... Love the backstory, explains most of my questions =D I'm excited for what comes next! Will you ever feature any tension between Jost and Tom over Bill sizzling for a long time? That would be way interesting :)
Author's Response: I'm glad this chapter answered your questions! The tension between Jost and Tom will definitely be mounting in coming chapters.
Date: 03/15/09 01:22 am Title: The Contract
very good.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/14/09 11:24 pm Title: The Contract
Man! I can't believe Bill's ex would do that! All for his job?!?!?! I wish tom can save the day for Bill...anyways update soon please. I really like this!
Author's Response: Yeah, his ex was definitely not a winner. rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/13/09 12:35 pm Title: The Meeting
I really like your characterization of Bill -- he's not just a woe-is-me,-I'm-so-angsty-and-troubled victim; he's got a lot of character and strength and a cute attitude -- he's very interesting ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I wanted the relationship to be slightly more complex than Jost just being abusive and Bill crying all the time, or whatever. I'm glad it's coming across okay.
Date: 03/12/09 10:27 pm Title: The Meeting
Oooohh! Me likey! :D
*wantsmoarnoa*
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be up this weekend.
Date: 03/12/09 06:37 pm Title: The Meeting
Yay! Good chappy! Please update soon! =D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/12/09 06:29 pm Title: The Meeting
Poor Bill ): I really hope Tom will make Bill feel better, and get him out of his relationship with Jost. Great chappie! Update soon?
Author's Response: Yes, poor Bill. Thank goodness Tom is there!rnrnThe next update will be this weekend.
Date: 03/12/09 04:53 pm Title: The Meeting
YAY! An update! Too bad it's a bit short, but it's at least something and I liked it no matter what. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry it's so short. I'm putting chapter three up this weekend to make up for it.rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/12/09 04:50 pm Title: The Meeting
this is really different :)
i like it a lot!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it...and I'm glad you think it's different. That's great to hear!
Date: 03/12/09 04:46 pm Title: The Meeting
This is good. You've done a nice job setting this up and I hope to read more soon. I'm worried for Bill, but i think Tom can do something about it. We will see.
Can't wait for the new chapter:0)
Author's Response: Yes, we'll see. Poor Tom is a bit reluctant to get involved...rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/12/09 03:56 pm Title: An Invitation
I must have missed the first chapter! I'm glad I caught the second one, I love it already :'D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/12/09 03:35 pm Title: The Meeting
oh, i love it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/10/09 04:10 pm Title: An Invitation
needs more chapters
Author's Response: Coming soon...maybe Thursday.
Date: 03/09/09 11:02 pm Title: An Invitation
Ooooh, I'm very intrigued as to how this will go =D Great beginning! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update soon.
Date: 03/09/09 06:16 pm Title: An Invitation
Love this. Sweet Bubbly Bill dealing with abusive posessive boyfriend. Tom will save him.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope Tom will save him...
Date: 03/09/09 06:10 pm Title: An Invitation
I like it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/09/09 04:34 pm Title: An Invitation
ohh I like this idea!! cant wait for more.. see how this turns out! jost is scary...
Author's Response: Thank you! Check back to see what happens...
Date: 03/09/09 03:49 pm Title: An Invitation
This is a really good start, and I can't wait to see what is going to happen!
I am so glad that this story is already completed so I won't have to wait that long for the next updates!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be updating soon, so check back!
Date: 03/09/09 03:49 pm Title: An Invitation
Oh, I like how this little story started out and I'll definitely come back for more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Please check back for more...