Date: 05/05/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 8
This story is absolute amazing! I have never read anything like this in my life. I really hope you update this soon I really love your characters and the setting of this story. ^^
Date: 02/10/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG OMG OMG I WANT MORE!! Poor Bill, and Georg....and Gustav....and Tom...and well Dave cause well because I said xD anyways I loved and I needs more!!
Date: 11/05/09 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
I feel like I'm not saying this enough..Or at all actually...I'm starting to wonder if I've just been thinking about writing it everytime I read this but never actually do it.
Oh well, here we go :) Better late than never.
I love this story! I really, really do and I get extremely happy every time I see that you've updated.
Honest to God, I did a little happy dance when I saw you updated this chapter. I then read it, thought I left a comment and then I came back now to read it again. LOVE IT! It's different from so many other stories here and that makes it more fun to read.
Awesome :D
Date: 11/01/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow- powerful story. I like the whole Bill thing...Andreas obsession with him and how Bill reacts to people...like hating Tom and hating Andreas...more please!
Date: 10/27/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh holy shit...
Date: 10/26/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG!!!
I have been waiting for an update!! ULTIMATE LOVE O_O
MORE.... MOOORE _> XDD
Date: 09/23/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 7 painful memories
haha behind tobii! XD hey i wanna know what tomi cooked!! did he do a mess?! i want him to explode something n get such a cute face none of the G's can get mad at him! XD
Author's Response: Lol, that would be funny, but the next chapter is focused more on the hospital and the guys there.
Date: 08/15/09 05:16 am Title: Chapter 7 painful memories
yay a update!
your story's good as.
please update soon.... or at least not in another 5 months :)
Author's Response: lol, yea... Well I got my laptop back and Momma Tina lets me on it whenever I want, so I'm almost done with the next chapter actually... =^.^=
Date: 08/14/09 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 painful memories
O_O. Oh wow.. poor Gustav c.c
it was totally worth the wait =]
Date: 08/14/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 7 painful memories
O_O
MOOOOOORE
Date: 07/22/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
make tom fuck gustav not gustav him pritty please :)
Author's Response: ... i think i can work something like that... maybe...<.< >.> you'll have to wait and see
Date: 05/20/09 03:27 am Title: Checking In
Ohlalala! Finally... some interesting story!!!
Date: 04/26/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Hello!
First off, this is a wonderful story- i like all of your characters' personalities for some reason or another and I look foreward to seeing how they interact in the future.
It seems to me like Gustav is potentially a nutcase...given the right nudges in the right places. I like that subtle irony, if it was intended!
The only thing i would fix are the tensee you use. It is very confusing for a reader to switch points of view (even when we're told who we're reading about). That being said I suggest (and ask) that you (please) stick to the third person omniscient. That way you can still get everything said about everyone without confusing your audience. More on this can be found on the site under "Guides- Points of View".
Please keep up the work- i like reading this so far.
Date: 04/24/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
*MOANS*
Author's Response: O.o; REALLY NOW???
Date: 04/24/09 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love the new character
and the ending >:D, haha.
good job :3
Date: 04/24/09 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
Uh, this is a really good story ;D
I really love it, even though I feel like breaking Bill's neck. Sorry, but he is some handfull in this story. :S
Update soon please :)
Date: 04/04/09 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story is amazing.. please update! I love how Gustav is the main character, and all the other characters are described so well. I'm dying to know what happens next. please update soon =[
Date: 04/02/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
What?! NO!! There's nothing more!
Update please!
Date: 03/21/09 09:43 pm Title: Checking In
Awwwh this is so good!!! :D
Date: 03/21/09 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love love love this story! ^_^