Date: 03/21/09 02:20 am Title: Chapter 2
hahahahah oh god... psychotic Bill its strangely hilarious! he had in me in stitches! i love it! pleeeaaaseee continue!
Date: 03/17/09 12:16 am Title: Checking In
hehe I loved the animal bit, it's cute.
Poor Andi :[
I love the story so far. Keep it up :D
Date: 03/16/09 01:27 pm Title: Checking In
aww, the thing with the pets was cute ^^ it was a nice break, so the story isn't stuck in the hospital forever, you know. It also lets us see that Gustav is actually a human being, and not a psychiatrist (and a cold one ! :o) all the time.
I liked the different POV's too ! Lets you get inside their heads a bit more, and I kinda feel sorry for Andreas now. I didn't after the first chapter. Now I see how he thinks, and he's just a poor guy like the others .. But I loved that ! You should do the POV's in the next chapters too, if you want :D I think it would be great, though ^^
Looking forward to seing where this is going, and this was a very good chapter!
Date: 03/10/09 02:56 pm Title: Checking In
yeah, nice beginning ^^
I would really like to see what happens ! Smart-Tom was cool ;D
But I don't quite like bitchy&arrogant Gustav .. But that is because I never like bitchy&arrogant Gustavs x3 So that part is really not your fault ..
But you have to continue this ! :D
Author's Response: Gustav's only bitchy because that's how he is in real life. I just added the aroogance to use for later.
Date: 03/09/09 04:38 pm Title: Checking In
Seems promising.
Please continue! :D I'd like to see what happens...