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Reviewer: MoichiMindfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 04:37 pm Title: Realizations and close calls.

Sweet! Loving the suspense secrecy between the twins. :D

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: SilverDawnMari Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 07:06 pm Title: Realizations and close calls.

oh wow this was great! i like how it kinda built up to a really intense moment for tom, then let him off the hook lol. Im intrested to see how he deals w/ the whole situation, and im intrested to see bills side of the story as well. Great start =D

Author's Response: :D Yah, i love you guys now! Thanks.

Reviewer: xSchreix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 06:36 pm Title: Realizations and close calls.

Aw this is cute :)
"Think of all the hot American pussy" made me laugh!
I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: ahaha, you'll have to excuse that. it was 12 am and I was blazed on NyQuil when i wrote that. :D thanks!

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:34 am Title: Realizations and close calls.

I love how you described everything in this...it was very poetic. I'm really excited to see where this is gonna go!

Author's Response: :D thank you.

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 12:39 am Title: Realizations and close calls.

Oh my, I like!! more please :)

Author's Response: oy, thanks. :D

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