i like this story i really want to see were it goes

hah, I get FC ! :D because I'm so nerdy I sit here for hours a day .. but don't think about that x)

Now, actual review: this is kinda cute ! your writing is good, which makes it so much better to read and like. The plot is interesting too, cos right now I have no idea where this is going x3 But that's great, just makes you want to read more and find out ^^ I found one or two typos, but that happens to everyone once in a while ^^ just watch out so they don't get too many, that can be irritating .. *trying to give you constructive critisism, please don't think I'm trying to be bitchy ! (a)*

but I wish you good luck, and keep up the good work ! :D

Author's Response: lol, I understand, my hands are fast when I type so, yeah. Thanks for the review! XD