Date: 02/18/10 09:05 pm Title: Epilouge: Graduation
That was sooo sweet. Totally loved it!
Date: 02/18/10 08:53 pm Title: Bushido and Dunja
Didn't you use Simone as Tom's mother earlier in the fic? Now she's Bill's?
Date: 01/24/10 09:18 pm Title: Moving
Oh my god... No lie I was JUST about to listen to that song!! Isnt it Lollipop Luxury by Jeffree Star?!!?! Lol I love this story!!
Date: 01/24/10 08:35 pm Title: Moving
Oh my god... No lie I was JUST about to listen to that song!! Isnt it Lollipop Luxury by Jeffree Star?!!?! Lol I love this story!!
Date: 12/14/09 12:40 am Title: Epilouge: Graduation
yay :D
Date: 09/21/09 06:43 pm Title: Epilouge: Graduation
This was just amazing. I loved everything about it, and I am sitting here with tears pouring down my face from the sweetness of it all! Just fantastic, well done! *favourtied*
Date: 08/18/09 04:00 pm Title: Epilouge: Graduation
awww, that was beautiful!! i absolutely love them as a couple in this fic.. x
Date: 07/21/09 06:18 pm Title: Epilouge: Graduation
Amazing!! The flowers and letters was so adorable plus it tugged my heart when you mentioned it again at the end.
Date: 07/17/09 04:12 pm Title: Epilouge: Graduation
yay! haha i love ryans cheer. i cant believe this is over! d:(
Date: 07/17/09 04:09 pm Title: Reunited
i knew it! smart aren't i? lol
Date: 07/06/09 12:11 pm Title: Epilouge: Graduation
WOW idky it took me so long to read this, but i thought i did and then i saw that i didn't! yay! thank you sooo much!! =]
Date: 06/23/09 01:52 pm Title: Near Collison
Loved it! It could have hade some detailed sex-scenes though. And there were some moments were I got bored, but the great story made up for that!
Author's Response: I wrote this and wanted to concentrate more on the love instead of the sex. I'm not one to be shy about writing smut but I didn't want it in this story so I purposely avoided it.
Then the boring parts... Well... Sometimes I get into blanks and they come outta no where and I know they're shit but they're just there to connect major events.
THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!
Date: 06/21/09 10:52 pm Title: Purple
The drive was a short ten minutes and the driver of the Escalade saw the tire marks from that morning. He briefly thought back to the beaming smile that he had seen at lunch and gave a soft smile of his own. Bill had been the happiest person he’s seen all day and it made Tom a little bit happier that at least someone had not asked if he was moving. – well that’s at least one nice memory!
Then slowly the perfect solution settled in his mind and he sat straight up and he picked up his cell phone to set his plan into action. – prob not but ok suspended disbelief!
He quickly scribbled out something on a small piece of paper and went up to Tom’s locker. He had no idea how Gustav had gotten the locker combination but he wasn’t going to ask. Without further thought, Bill opened the locker and placed the item in delicately then shut the door and walked off with a small smile – I’m curious to know what it is?
I like the lavender roses too!
“Well who ever she is has it bad for you my man… And purple… huh… you’ve got yourself a freak Tom.” – lol
Date: 06/21/09 10:28 pm Title: Audition Sheet
His breath caught for a moment as he looked side ways at his crush, drinking in his appearance quickly. – awh so pathetic!
“I know!” Bill let down his guard and let his pure joy and excitement show as he smiled brightly and bounced a little. “This is so awesome!” He bounced over to Gustav and hugged him tightly. “Thank you, thank you, and thank you for drilling me on those lyrics. I love you! Marry me! Have my kids !” – that’s a little gay even for Bill.
“Congratulations on the solos. I can’t wait to work with you.” – and bill faints! Here!
Date: 06/21/09 10:21 pm Title: Rumors
But you know you gotta leave with a big bang. Maybe you should finally get with Victoria and break up with her in front of the entire school your last day. – ha ha great andi!
“Tom Trumper is moving because his dad is going broke.” – lol!!!
Gustav had to resist the urge to roll his eyes, recognizing it immediately as a rumor. Plus he also knew Bill would get sucked in and become too dramatic for him to handle at the moment. “I bet he isn’t moving Lauren. It sounds like a whole bunch of bogus to me. Next time tell us something you hear directly from the boy himself.” – good job Gustav!
“But it’s true. He’s also going to date Victoria,” Lauren defended her accusations against the short teen. – ha ha ha
“Now who’s going to try to win over Tom even if he’s moving away?”
The raven haired teen raised his eyes, a look of uncertainty but determination rested in their depths. “Me.” – awh!
Date: 06/21/09 10:03 pm Title: Near Collison
It took all of Bill’s strength to keep from squealing with joy and doing a little dance as he sat so close to the boy he had been admiring from a far for nearly five years. Better yet he was riding in Tom’s car. He didn’t think life could get much sweeter. But the teen would never tell his secret. Why would playboy Tom Trumper ever be interested in the outcast Bill Kaulitz? - awh so cute!
He could never bring himself to tell Tom how he felt. Never. - until something faitful happens *grins* Something that brings them together.
What he didn’t know was how many people would know by the end of the day. Or how much chaos it would cause. He didn’t realize the extent of his popularity or the effect of his potential move would have on the student body. - wow he must be important...why?
great start. I'm down!
Date: 06/19/09 06:00 am Title: Epilouge: Graduation
oh thanks for the dedication!
Date: 06/15/09 07:54 pm Title: Concert Rehearsal
I am reading this story and loving it. I just had to comment on this chapter though.
They were piling onto the bleachers, near Georg and Tom when the girl grinned. “Girl, I think my butt getting big.”
“Oh, it’s getting hot in here, so take off all your clothes.” Bill wiggled with the girl and then busted out laughing at their inside joke. “Let’s never do that in public again.”
I almost cried when I read this. I was laughing so hard! I can not believe you put Nelly in this. I love you for it.
Date: 06/15/09 02:01 am Title: Epilouge: Graduation
awww T-T its over! but it's been amazing reading this :)
Date: 06/11/09 06:05 pm Title: Epilouge: Graduation
i luved every chapter of this story