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Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/10 10:28 pm Title: WWDD? What Will David Do?

This is funny! Expecially Gustavs part!!! LOVE IT

Reviewer: Tenshi Inuzuka Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 03:10 am Title: its only the beginning.

Nice start, try and work out the typing errors like adding smaller words so the sentance makes scence and typo's makeing sure the word is the correct one.

Reviewer: dubblebubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 02:32 am Title: Me Caveman, You Fucker

I love this, I really want more. This is funny as hell. You guys are doing an awesome job. Keep it up.

Reviewer: thecatenator Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 10:30 pm Title: its only the beginning.

NEIN! SCHREI NEIN TO THE PRON STACHES!
xDD I love you, To-Hos :D Great story, keep at it!

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 08:55 am Title: its only the beginning.

the story was okay, but that banner is worth a thousand words XD -- i love it!

Author's Response: I faerylxJae89 made it whoo... I think tis grand. :] Thnx for reading.

Reviewer: 1fish2fishredfishbluefish Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 03:40 am Title: its only the beginning.

very nise, you got some giggles outta me xD. Kudos for the effort! And constructive criticism? Girl, keep goin'! i wanna read about Georg! :)

Author's Response: thank you. =] I am working Georg right now... I need to get it done though but its POV xD ... and I am working with another person because this was our conversations that brought this on. so dont worry there is more soon. =D 

Reviewer: kailey_khaosx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 11:59 pm Title: its only the beginning.

Oh God, Bill with a moustache? I don't know whether to laugh or cry rofl.
You have successfully amused me. XD

Author's Response: please laugh I condone laughter. Anyways there is more to come XDD..

Reviewer: traut-a-lot Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 10:10 pm Title: its only the beginning.

HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK!!!
NEIN! NEIN! GAIA IS NOW INFECTING MY FANFICTION!!

Author's Response: WHAT?? you I am A GAIAN RIGHT!... XD this yeah I had to... >.<

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