Date: 07/01/11 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
BEAUTIFUUL! :3
hi! I really like this *w*
Well, really I'm from Argentina, so I don't speack English very well
But I understand all the fic and I love this!
Date: 10/02/09 12:29 am Title: Chapter 1
ahh dont stop there...
Date: 03/13/09 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
oh i am about to cry...nut shuts the door huh?a sequall to this i hope is being thought of*hint hint lol jk* i can allready see it already ithout words OHHHHH TOMMMMI!luv this story
Date: 03/04/09 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Short and sweet. That was beautiful. :) Great job.
Date: 03/04/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was ok, there were parts that were good, like Bill's struggle after Tom leaves, but it was too dramatic (like a bad play) and Tom's explanation was not good enough for me.
Date: 03/04/09 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice you should write a asequel seriously lolz
Hearts
Date: 03/04/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww that was sad i think it needs another chapter to be honest
Date: 03/04/09 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is quite good. You could've put some more emotions or doings into it and get a longer fic. It seems a little rushed, but your idea is great! Sorry to say that, but I can't help it! Please forgive me! It really is a good story!
Author's Response: No, I totally agree. I thought it was a bit rushed myself.rnThanks for ur comment :)