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Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:12 pm Title: 1. Adventures

Damn you, let me dream! :-( I know it's gonna get worse before it gets better. I just worry that they won't come out whole. :-(

Author's Response: Physically whole, yes. :)

Reviewer: spilled milk Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:07 pm Title: 5. God

i don't understand what the fuck is going on lol, none of this makes since

Author's Response: Huh o_O Where are you confused? I know I write all over the place sometimes but I'm not sure where it got hard to follow. Just let me know and I'll try to clear things up?

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:01 pm Title: 5. God

Oh god. Twin issues much? o__O

BILL! He's knocked out at the bottom of the stairs. HELLO CLUE #3!!!!! Take your brother and LEAVE that blasted place. OMG!!!



Author's Response: Aw, unfortunately I don't think they'll be leaving any time soon ;(

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 12:27 am Title: 4. The First Punishment

Oh god..this is going to be good! .. poor Tomi! D: .. oh ur going to make me suffer with this story..I will be waiting 4 more!! :D

Author's Response: :D Why thank you! And sorry for making you suffer, you surely aren't the first to tell me that XD Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 09:07 pm Title: 4. The First Punishment

Oooh oooh oooooh. More!!!!

Author's Response: :) Thanks for reviewing, the new chapter is already up! <3

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 06:30 pm Title: 1. Adventures

I got one too!

What a lovely quinkydink.



Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 06:25 pm Title: 1. Adventures

Pitchfork.

Author's Response: Adler has one ;D

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 06:23 pm Title: 4. The First Punishment

...I am feeling afraid.

Very, very afraid.

They have no fucking IDEA what his psycho is capable off. Cutting Tom's hair is child's play! He knows how to get them to bend to his will and fuck if I know that's where he's going with this. He wants them broken. Pretty boys are meant to be broken and he wants these two to be broken by him.

Yes, very very afraid. *whimpers*

If anything, the dedication and th reason behind it scare me shitless.



Author's Response: ;) I love that I can rattle people with simple words *0*

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 05:36 pm Title: 4. The First Punishment

update soon plz

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 01:27 am Title: 1. Adventures

;-)

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 12:58 am Title: 1. Adventures

Damn.

No make up sex then!



Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 12:26 am Title: 1. Adventures

But...if you don't cut Tomi's fingers, or any body part, I can totally overlook everything else... <333

Author's Response: hmm...

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 12:11 am Title: 1. Adventures

*sniffles* You're playing with my emotions. I'm not sure how much our relationship is going to last!

Author's Response: *sniffles*

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 12:07 am Title: 1. Adventures

O_____________________________________________O

 

TOMI!!!!!!!

Jesus...omg, omg, omg. BILL! What the fuck? You can't let them touch your twin. WTF??

 

....meany.

 

Bitte? I love Tomi's hands. How is he supposed to give his brother proper handjobs if he's missing fingers?



Author's Response: Aw, it's not as bad as you think ;P The update will be tomorrow or later this weekend, that's for sure. And I promise, it's not as bad as I made it out to be :D There are other things than fingers that you can mess with ;D I promise, it's not that bad, don't leave me!! D:

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 12:01 am Title: 1. Adventures

*counts how many letters the dots could possibly have to decipher future Tomi torture, browses dictionary*

Author's Response: starts with an M, ends with a Utilate? >:D

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 11:57 pm Title: 1. Adventures

OMG! You fiend, you devil! You stealy, robber-like person you! *cries* Please...not permament damage torture. I'll take anything except Tom's broken fingers or a slash to Bill's throat!!!

Author's Response: LOL YOU JUST GAVE ME ANOTHER IDEA! poor Tom XD! But I already have many many many plans for the twins >:D I already basically ********* Tom in the new chapter I haven't posted yet! >;P

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 11:54 pm Title: 1. Adventures

*whimpers even more*

Author's Response: ;P

Reviewer: Destiny95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 08:43 am Title: 3. Introductions

This is good! I'm so glad I started reading it.. xD Write more for me, pleeaaseeee..? (aa)

Author's Response: Aw! Thanks so much for reading it! I'm go glad that you are :D And I shall update soon! I have most of the chapter written but you know me XD I got ADD and updated MCC ;P

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 09:10 am Title: 3. Introductions

I like it very much! Very interesting indeed!

Author's Response: :) Thank you!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 07:20 am Title: 3. Introductions

Omgomgomg. If anything, this creeps me out even more. If the twins are supposed to love each other by the time the 4 months are done, it means that this is gonna come down to attacking one twin on front of the other. Fuckfuckfuck. I'm so scared. Get the fuck out NOW!!! *covers eyes*

Author's Response: Hmm, actually, you just gave me that idea >:D I shall use it!

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