Date: 04/27/23 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 05/12/10 09:36 am Title: Chapter 10
ohhhh i like it so much but it seems incomplete i mean the end you should go on or something.
Date: 12/29/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
I have to admit that I'm as lost as Tom. What did he do wrong??
Date: 12/29/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
haha!! Tom felt in love with the brother he planned to kill. It's look like nobody have seen Bill before.
Date: 12/29/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill is lucky in is bad luck :)
Date: 03/20/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
lol did you notice that bill had "sun bleached light brown hair" in the first chapter, but now, all of a sudden it's near black? and how did that happen?
Author's Response: Bill has gone over to the dark side & is sleeping with his brother wahaha! No just kidding must have slipped my mind sorry I was writing another fix at the same time & must have confused them
Date: 03/17/09 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
I liked the ending (though a little more bill/tom action would have been nice). Elam got what was coming for him. Over all nice job.
Don't forget to mark this as completed. (It's easier to find again when I go looking for it, if you do)
Author's Response: Oh yes thank you! I forgot to check the finished block I cannot believe it's finally finished!rnThank you for always reviewing!
Date: 03/17/09 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm sad to see it finished. Are you going to do a sequel? Please say yes. Please? Anyways it was really good!
Author's Response: No I do not plan on making a sequel but I do like to write period pieces and have already started up another one. I will post it after I am done with Angels and Demons. rnThank you for always reviewing!
Date: 03/17/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
i love the story, love the setting, but i did just want to mentions omething...er....homosexuality wasn't exactly looked down upon byt the persians....or many other nations at thi time.......but hey, its your story, and i love the way you've written it.
Date: 03/15/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm hoping it's Tom? I'm assuming this looks like rape (I can't decide if it is or not). Where'd Elam come from anywho?
Date: 03/15/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well, Tom took that badly. At least Bill told him the truth though. there really wasn't much else he could do.
Date: 03/15/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
More!!!! I want to know what happens. Also you update really fast!
Date: 03/15/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Tomi!!!! I hope he accepts Bill for being a boy. Update soon please!
Date: 03/15/09 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
I guess that clears some stuff up. I wish you'd update sooner. They fell in love pretty fast btw.
Date: 03/15/09 01:37 am Title: Chapter 7
You lost me. I don't even know what this story is about anymore. Sorry :(
Date: 03/14/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
Love it. When is Tom going to find out about Bill being a boy? Anyways update soon please!!!!!
Date: 03/10/09 01:26 am Title: Chapter 6
More! Loved it!!!!!! Update soon!
Date: 03/09/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm a bit confused too. I thought Bill was ok playing the part of a girl, and that he liked Tom why'd he run away? And what was so embarassing?
Date: 03/08/09 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
This chapter was very good. Better written I think than the others and I liked the sort of other side I saw of Tom, plus the additional information was nice.
Date: 03/08/09 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
I loved it! Update soon please!