Date: 07/12/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god.Oh my fucking god. That was amazing. And it makes me wanna cry.
I love how Bill was portrayed here. And I love the style of writing you used. So calm, yet so full of something.
Brilliant. Keep it up!
Date: 04/24/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
AMAZING! I love this so much. The imagery and all of Bushido's thoughts... very believable and perfect and exactly as I would think a man bearing so much regret would think. Bill's and Bushido's relationship... Bushido and Fler's fight... All of it, awesome, to the end. You have a fantastic writing style that moves me to tears.
Thank you!
-BRE
Date: 03/19/09 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay.
This built inside of me like a sick dread; I can read a dead person walking. The thoughts that suddenly become clear that have twisted and turned destiny until you arrive at the one place you realize will be the end of you.
And then... something happens to give you hope, to give you some sort of chance, and to have reality snatch it away.
I cried, at the end. The death was horrible and pointless and poignant and drawn out and rushed and so very real.
Just... absolutely fabulous.
Date: 03/19/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I actually would love to leave you a great, long review, quoting every single line that moved me and broke my heart. But see, I'd have to quote the whole damn thing. And frankly, I'm shaking and hurting, because it was so, so damn good. You girls are absolutely amazing. Amazing.
Date: 03/15/09 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg. how depressed am i now?
Date: 03/02/09 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh god i should not have read this! i am going to fucking bawl in a minute here, oh my god...this is the most heart breaking thing i have ever read and it was so fucking well written and beautiful and i can't make a complete thought right now, all i can say is that i am going to cry and hardly anything makes me cry!
Date: 03/02/09 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Thats really all there is to say.
Date: 03/02/09 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
FUCK!! wow!!
I ...er ... Uh .. Uhm ... WOW!!!!!
That was fucking brilliant!! I loved it!!!