Date: 03/02/09 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
I have to say, that was quite heart breaking =( Seeing as how I can pretty much relate to the situation.
I loved it though :) Please update soon!
Author's Response: Aww! *Cuddles* I know I have definitely been there and it's no fun. I"m sorry to hear you know what it's like too. I'm glad you still liked it though! The update is coming very soon!
Date: 03/02/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
omg really good update....
Author's Response: Whoa! Thank you! Update is coming! :)
Date: 03/02/09 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
Oh man. I loved it. Please update it soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! And update is on the way! :)
Date: 03/02/09 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
I WANT TO HEAR THE REST! :]]
i like it
Author's Response: COMING SOON! I PROMISE! And thank you! :)
Date: 03/02/09 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
Goooooooodie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: XD THAAAAANK YOOOOOU!
Date: 03/02/09 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
Oooh I'm a fan of this!
... this wouldn't be inspired by a certain JB song would it?? lol
x.
Author's Response: No! Oh no! What could have made you think that? *Shifts eyes* :) Thank you for your review! :)
Date: 03/02/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
I belive that you must continue it becuase it's mysterious and verry very intressting :D
Author's Response: XD Thank you, and I think I shall! ;)
Date: 03/02/09 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
Wow, I thought it was really good.
I love the story line, it's very interesting.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I wasn't sure if anyone else would like it. :)