Date: 02/14/11 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 4 Why I'm Falling
It was amusing :) there's definitely something up with Bill. You can definitely tell and i can't help but feel sad for him when he seems idk um just sad or hurt :( and shoot she shouldve token all 15 dresses!! :D but seven is cool.
Author's Response: Bill is having a bit of a rough time......and I so would have taken all the dresses! XD
Date: 02/14/11 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 3 Throw Me A Lifeline
Bill is such a cutie ;) why do I have a feeling that there's something bothering him? Hmm :-/ but anyway Omg! the transformation of Clare had begun!
Author's Response: Maybe there is something bothering him.........
Date: 02/14/11 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not Pretty Enough
I can picture Toms puppy dog eyes XD hahaha silly. Oyy she agreed, no no no this will complicate things. She's in live with Tom this will definitely make things harder on her. What will happen to her and her feelings once this is over? If it's just for PR then it will eventually be over/done with :(.
Author's Response: Tom has the best puppy dog eyes in the world. ;)
Date: 02/14/11 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
Omg :( I feel bad for her :,( he didnt mean it. Try both said regretful things in a fit of rage. Why did it start to begin with? :( *sighs*
Author's Response: All will be revealed! :D
Date: 02/13/11 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 7 On the Top of the World in a Coin Laundry
this story caught my attention and after read it i absolutely love it!!!! I can't wait to read more and i hope,pray that you update real soon on this story i just HAVE to read more and know how all this will play out. So keep up your magnificant writing and upate real real soon!!!! :D
Author's Response: Aww shucks, you're making me blush! :D I hope you enjoy the new chapter! Thank you for your review!
Date: 02/13/11 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not Pretty Enough
=)
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 02/13/11 08:30 am Title: Chapter 7 On the Top of the World in a Coin Laundry
a new chapter! yay!
first of all i'd like to apologize. i guess i'm one of those people who don't leave reviews after reading stories. in all honestly i simply forget about it.
now please give us more! pretty please? i practically squealed my way through next week after seeing ur update.
Author's Response: Awww! I love new reviewers! Thank you so much for leaving a review! Your wish is my command, more is on the way! :D
Date: 08/20/10 05:16 am Title: Chapter 6 A Vision of Love
cute date! definitely looking forward to their 2nd date. haha pls keep on writing :]
Author's Response: Im trying, it is happening slowly! Thank you for your review. :)
Date: 08/19/10 06:33 am Title: Chapter 6 A Vision of Love
FINALLY!!! An update :-)
I love how Bill is playing dress up with both of them haha I can actually picture hehe
MORE MORE!!!!!!
Author's Response: I suck at updating. :(
Date: 08/17/10 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 6 A Vision of Love
I just read the whole story, I loooove it! The beginning was so interesting and now, can't wait to read what happens next! I believe Tom has a thing for her too and same for Bill !
Updateee xx
Author's Response: We'll have to wait and see what happens. ;) Thank you for your review!
Date: 08/17/10 09:44 am Title: Chapter 6 A Vision of Love
I really enjoyed this update. It is probably one of my favourite stories on here. I was enjoying all of their playful banter throughout. My favourite part was when Tom said to Clare that he could see her legs and then she said the same thing back to him. =]
I loved it!
Author's Response: That was one of my favourite parts too. ;) Thank you sweetie!
Date: 08/17/10 05:04 am Title: Chapter 6 A Vision of Love
YAY! you put a HUGE grin on my face when you update!! But I'll have to agree with you!! You're horrible!!! What was that!! took you long enough that I forgot about the story!! *fumes mumbles and grumbles* And it was so short !! it's already over *cries in desperation* .... okay okay it was well worth it!! I loved ever thing about it (except the wine part... *whispers shyly* Waiters open the wine bottle at the table and pour in the glasses in front of the clients and leave the bottle on the table ... *runs away before you kill me*) I laughed so hard at so many places, it's so light, so lovely, *hugs fic close and smiles wide with eyes closed while rocking it from side to side* makes me all happy inside!! now MORE MORE MOARE!!! ^.^ Here *unloads truck of cookies for fuel* This should help :D *sits down with a pack of cookies and prepares for the long wait*!
Author's Response: Hehehe. I did their lunch by the glass because I figure that a whole bottle between them for lunch would make them legless. ;) Thank you for you reviews sweetie, you never let me down!
Date: 07/18/10 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
i love your writing, and this might be my new favorite ^_^ i love diva-bill, he's adorable!!
Author's Response: Awwwww, thanks honey! I love Diva!Bill too, he's so much fun to write!
Date: 06/27/10 08:08 am Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
I think Bill likes Clare
Author's Response: Hehehe, you'll just have to wait and see. ;)
Date: 06/13/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
I like the first chapter, even if i diden`t get everything. But I hope the next one will be more reveling than this one :)
Author's Response: Hopefully it will all come together and make sense in the end! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 05/17/10 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
MORE! now.. hehe
Author's Response: OKAY! XD
Date: 05/11/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
Aww you updated! Yay! It's okay Hun I'm sure we're all patient readers who understand And the ending had me cracking up =) see ya at the next update!
Author's Response: I am such a terrible updater, I really need someone to scream at me to write. And I don't know how I deserve people to be so patient! Thank you so much sweetie!
Date: 05/11/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
I love it! :D Usually I'm more into slash fictions but sometimes I like reading a good het story and your fiction is definitely one of those good ones! :D It's original and I already love your characters, especally Clare.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Thank you so much! That is such a nice thing to say! Next chapter is coming up now!
Date: 05/10/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
Oh Bill the diva broke a nail. I hope their casual expensive lunch goes well....ooooooooo
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: SOON SOON SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Date: 05/10/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
I love it! I wanna know what happens next =D
Author's Response: Update coming up! :D