Date: 05/22/13 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
It has been over a year please please PLEASE update :(
Date: 10/31/11 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
Please update Sweetyjay :( your stories are so awesome :(...I love the way you write..*sighs* I wish I wrote like that :(...
Update soon!! Don't leave this story behind even if it short :(
PLEASEE
Date: 04/21/11 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
i really like this fic....please update soon
Date: 03/01/11 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
wonder what Tom and Bill were thinking...
Date: 02/25/11 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
Oh my I wonder what that twin eye conversation is all about. Uh oh maybe Bill knows that Claire could be falling for someone else. OR maybe tom likes her now and is all upset! Ugh! You got me on the edge of my seat!
Please please update again soon!
Date: 02/25/11 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
OMG! yay!!! you finally updated woot woot *does happy dance* I absoulutely loved it. This Joe character I like him I think it'll add a twist to this story. I'm glad you back and can't wait to read more and find out what will happen next. Please keep up your magnificent writing upate real soon :)
Date: 02/25/11 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
Oh my god! 2 updates in a really short periode of time !! I didn't even have time yet review the other one!! Haha that's how I like it! ^^ And I like Joe messing up with Tom's plan too ^^ Awww this is interesting I can't wait to see what's gonna happen ^^ Welcome back :D can't wait to read more :D
Date: 02/25/11 11:54 am Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 02/25/11 07:57 am Title: Chapter 8 Heaven Help My Heart
i sense something... hi joe.
Date: 02/21/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 7 On the Top of the World in a Coin Laundry
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Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews sweetie. :D
Date: 02/17/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 7 On the Top of the World in a Coin Laundry
Loved it!
Author's Response: I am sensing a theme with all of your reviews. XD Thank you for all your support! I hope you enoy the new chapter!
Date: 02/17/11 04:32 am Title: Chapter 6 A Vision of Love
Loved it!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 02/17/11 04:13 am Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
Loved it!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 02/16/11 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 4 Why I'm Falling
Loved it!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 02/16/11 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 3 Throw Me A Lifeline
Loved it!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 02/16/11 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not Pretty Enough
Loved it!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 02/16/11 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1 Underneath the Smoke
Loved it!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 02/15/11 12:36 am Title: Chapter 7 On the Top of the World in a Coin Laundry
Omg! The Katy Perry thing lmao! Bahahah XD poor Tom. But let me get this straight, Tom seems to be going with this ok oblivious to the fact that it's for PR I mean I know he knows but he doesn't seem to care or worry about that. Clare might actually get the chance of having Tom fall in love with her if it weren't for her always mentioning "THIS SHOULD MAKE A GOOD PHOTO" what if Tom is falling but seeing as to how Clare keeps reminding them what it's for he might just keep quiet and stop himself from getting to attached because that's all he ever thinks Clare will see him as. Ugh! (sorry for my run on sentence)
Anyway this story is amazing I noticed there was like 7 updates from 3/09 to 2/11 that's just torture woman! Please please update this story more frequently, I couldn't help but have a big smile on my face at how all the scenes were playing out just perfectly. The pace and flow of your story is just perfect. :)
Author's Response: Hehehe, I think Clare knows better than anyone that love does not always make you act rationally! I am, admittedly, a terrible updater when my personal life turns upside down, like it seems to have done several times over the past few years. I'm trying to be better! Honest! Thank you so much for your lovely reviews, it really made me smile!
Date: 02/14/11 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 6 A Vision of Love
Lol Bill dressed both of them XD haha! Omg Tom wants to go out with Clare again but not as a fake date!! Aah there's a start! Maybe Bill does have something up his sleeve 'maybe'.
Author's Response: Hehehehehe! Bill dressing them was my favourite part of the chapter. He so would do something like that. And maybe Tom is sweeter than we think......
Date: 02/14/11 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 5 Just An Ordinary Day
God Bill is such a diva! :P lol and Clare is a red head sexy ;) I agree with the hair dresser she should go with her natural hair color.
Author's Response: Heeee! I think red hair is awesome, she should be proud of herself!