Date: 04/15/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter six
Oh yes! Very sweet chapter! It made me fall in love with the story once again :) (not that I ever fell out of love...)
Tom got a new horse! Yey! I hope he will love Pearl as much as he did Bruno!
Pearl! What a wonderful name for a horse! That was an excellent choice! And not at all predictable, I didn't get it until he said the name out loud, near the ladder!
Nice moment when Tom was feeding the horses and Jeremiah was adamant he didn't get enough food... :)
Tom realising his feelings and dreams about Tokechester Hall, was a defining moment for Tom, I think. And the offer to replace Saki and Tobi once in the future... made me think that I was right in my judgement of Jörg. He isn't the thickhead You made us all think he was...
You made that bed sound absolutely amazing, I wish I had such a nice bed...
"He shivers as his entire backside touches the sheets. It’s like water"... Yummy!!!!
The sex scene... Or the ultimate Love scene, as I like to call it! I don't know what to say really... It is such a fine moment for them... Making Love!
Made me hot and bothered... very hot and bothered! And a tad bit envious...
Tom's "breakup" with Elizabeth... Sad and joyful at the same time... Sad, because Tom gives up his lifetime of hidden love, and joyful, because he now can concentrate on his all encompassing love for Bill. And I must say... Very honourable of him too... And courageous, very courageous!
I think this particular incarnation of Tom is the best I've ever encountered! (in a alternate universe) He is honourable, courageous, honest, kind, hard working, helpful, true to himself and the people around him, romantic, passionate, and very, very lovable!
A masterpiece from the mind of Firelucy!
Very nice of Bill to except the proposal... :)
Well... Enough beating around the bush...
Bill are Elizabeth! I knew it! Well... I reasonably knew it anyway... Well, I had a strong suspicion... A nagging feeling in the back of my head... Oh all right, I was clueless... Well... maybe I did know it in a way, after all....
Now it remains to see WHY????
It is impossible his parents doesn't know about it!
Why would the Kaulitz'es want to hide a son?
There are this whole idé that they knew Bill was interested in boys very early, and tried to help him somehow... But that is very far fetched... and very improbable!
They mistook him for a girl at birth? And didn't want to admit their mistake? More likely... But still...
Very curious indeed, I am!!!!
Nitpicking: "Saki tells him what him and Jörg have been talking about."
It should be: what he and Jörg...
Thank You! It's been a pleasure to read, and now I'm looking forward to the epilogue with great enthusiasm!
Thank You once again!
love
Anders
Author's Response: I am absolutely positive that Tom will love Pearl as much as he loved Bruno ^^ lol, and thanks, I’m really glad you liked the name ,p I felt it was maybe a little too feminine, but with horses you can really give them a name fitting their personality more than their sex, I think. I love that you love the details ^^ - Lol, you’re changing your thoughts about Jorg again, I see ,p I think he’s one of my better characterizations, with both good and bad traits. I guess he’s proud. - Actually, I pondered for a while about writing this story without the graphic sex scenes, but it’s something I feel comfortable writing (which is pretty weird) and I feel better about my fics if I can truly say that there are parts of them I’m secure about. And I like writing soft porn, so… ,) - You have no idea how much it means to me that you like the characterization of Tom in this. I worked hard on him, trying to give him the typical traits of a good person, but base them mostly around the fact that he’s a child, not make him a Harry Potter hero or something. I’m sort of disappointed that the only bad trait I could place on him was his dislike of Andreas without him even knowing Andreas to begin with, but I hope I’ll get better at making the characters more realistic in the future. - Lol, and I love that you have so many questions ^^ helps me know what I need to answer. - As always, thank you for the nitpicking ,) - I’m really sorry for the late reply to your review, by the way! I hope I’ll never be this late again. - Much love, yours Luce
Date: 04/15/09 05:43 am Title: Chapter six
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, la la la !!! *happy dance*
It surprised me that Tom didn't apprear more phased to do the naughty in someone else's bed but I can't say I complain ^^
Now I wonder what Jorg will have to say about this wedding. But maybe he'll be relieved to have someone accept his son/daughter.
But why, why would Bill pass himself for a girl, that's still a mystery.
Only the epilogue left, that's sad, I'll miss this story.
Author's Response: lol, should I feel sad that I almost didn't manage to fool anyone ,p but I guess the whole concept was pretty cliche ^^ would you have been phased to do the naughty in someone else's bed if it was Bill Kaulitz wanting to do the naughty with you? ,p yay, you got it, the thing about Jorg being relieved he'll have someone to marry Bill ^^ not many caught that one. I'm really sorry for responding so late to the review! oh, and I have something for you today ^^ much love
Date: 04/14/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter six
*_*
Oh, so it's almost over! Noooo! :(
This chapter was great =] I love how Bill seemed to know what Tom was doing, without turning around ;)
And proposing? That was sooooo sweet! I mean, I figured he'd do it, but not right then ;) That was adorable, especially Bill's reaction :D Fantastic, darling.
Author's Response: guh, SORRY for not responding earlier, I love, love, love you for reviewing !!! lol, as for the spontaneous proposal ^^ yeah, I didn't know he'd do it either until suddenly, it was there on my computer ,p I swear, those boys manipulate me ^^
Date: 04/14/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter six
Oh wow!
It's bautifull!
But now of course I'm wondering!
Bill IS a boy, is he not?
But then, why does he dress like a girl? Perhaps he's a girl., but that's not possible, since we have witnesses (Tom) who can assure you that he's a boy!
Author's Response: thank you so much! yes, Bill is a boy ^^ LOL love how you call Tom a witness ,p so cute! I'm really sorry for replying so late, know that I appreciate your review so much <3
Date: 04/14/09 06:36 am Title: Chapter six
Oh no way, just the epilogue left? *whines* Well, I always knew Tom was in love with the real Bill, not the mystery that was Miss Elizabeth. I was happy when Tom got that new horse, because as much as it hurts losing one; thinking you'll never be able to have one and loving it again, I think Tom needed a horse. I can imagine him on one, and he is very hot. ;) So, lol, about my new story; no, it's not very fluffy at all. It's not as angsty as the prequel, though. XD Anyway, this update has been a lovely one, and I am looking forward to the epilogue. :)
Author's Response: goddess, I am so so sorry for the late reply to this -.- I've seen pictures of Tom and Bill riding and believe me, they look so cute ^^ and I think you're right, he did need one! thank you so much for reviewing me Becca (despite my epic fail of responding, guh) love <3
Date: 04/14/09 05:37 am Title: Chapter six
*jumping around in happiness for the revelation* It's cliche but I don't care cuz it's ao sweet and I always love a happy ending.
The bedroom scene triggers nosebleed, not only there's sex, but the two are so innocent it's almost like underage erotica.
But will the stable boy get though the father for bill's hand in marriage?
Author's Response: yeah, it's cliche, I know ,p but not the entire fic, right? lol, I live for the happy endings, love ^^ thank you so much for reviewing, so sorry for the late reply!
Date: 04/14/09 05:36 am Title: Chapter six
*jumping around in happiness for the revelation* It's cliche but I don't care cuz it's ao sweet and I always love a happy ending.
The bedroom scene triggers nosebleed, not only there's sex, but the two are so innocent it's almost like underage erotica.
But will the stable boy get though the father for bill's hand in marriage?
Author's Response: yeah, it's cliche, I know ,p but not the entire fic, right? lol, I live for the happy endings, love ^^ thank you so much for reviewing, so sorry for the late reply!
Date: 04/14/09 04:44 am Title: Chapter six
nah, not cliche. though i knew t from the first chapter. =) i love this story, i cant wait for the final explanation. keep up the great work!
Author's Response: good, glad that you think so ^^ hope you will like the final explanation and how everything turns out in the end ,)
Date: 04/14/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter six
yay
i was almost sure that Bill is Miss Elizabeth
i'm so happy for them
Author's Response: hihi, thank you so much ^^ I'm glad you're happy for them! much love
Date: 04/14/09 01:03 am Title: Chapter six
yayness! i had figured bill was miss elizabeth, but on ecan never be sure about these things. i've been tricked before. that was cute and very sweet, we will get to find out why bill dresses as a girl right? i hope so. also, will jorg approve of tom marrying him? despite being head of the stables one day, he is technically still the hired help. i suppose i'll find out next week.
Author's Response: lol, I've been trying my hardest to keep it a secret, but I figured a lot of people would get the picture early on ,p cute and sweet ^^ it makes me very happy that you think that! I hope you feel that your questions were answered in the last chapter! sorry for replying so late!
Date: 04/14/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter six
Oh my god. I think this has been the first fanfiction story that had kept me interested, without skipping chapters. Your writing is truly amazing =)
Author's Response: OO it is? wow, that means a lot to hear! I'm very happy you stuck to the story and got through it, that makes me smile ^^ thank you
Date: 04/14/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter six
I think I'm the only dumb block who didn't try to link Bill and Miss Elizabeth as the same person, even though there were so many nagging suspicions. xD So my reaction was probably the same as Tom's.
Well, I've always liked the thought of Bill in a dress. Now I'm just wondering why the family does it, as well.
Can't wait for your epilogue!
Author's Response: you're not dumb ,p I've been doing everything in my power not to let people see that they were the same person and it makes me soooooooooo extremely happy that I at least managed with a few ,) it would have been a total bummer if everyone had just seen the whole mystery from the first chapter -.- thank you so much for reviewing me, I hope you know how much it means to me! and I'm really sorry for responding so late, I've been crazy busy
Date: 04/13/09 10:56 pm Title: Chapter six
So I was right! You brat! Lol, leading me on like that, making me dout myself! This chapter was so nice though, and I've been put through hell by that doll story, don't get me wrong, it's amazing, but you gentle, nice, calm, comforting writing is a huge relief right now.
I really want to know the story of why Bill dresses like a girl though.
Also, Pearl is amazing, I got all these images of magestic horses, romantic I suppose but none the less...
Author's Response: lol, well, I had to make you doubt yourself, or else it wouldn't have been a surprise ^^ the doll story is killing me, too, I love reading it, but you know how I handle big amounts of angst...I don't ,p Pearl is inspired by a horse at the stable where I go riding, and I've always loved dapple horses so I wanted him to be like that ^^ good goddess, this reply is really late, and I'm so sorry about that! thank you so much for always reviewing me, girl, and for asking questions and not being scared to tell me what you think! I haven't written you in ages, but I'm going to! I have my exams next week and then a couple of more papers to write and projects to finish and after that I'm off ^^ love you <3
Date: 04/13/09 08:15 pm Title: Chapter six
Eeeeee oh my goodness. Everything about this chapter was heartwarming.
Author's Response: hihi ^^ thanks darling <3
Date: 04/13/09 08:00 pm Title: Chapter six
Yes! I am so happy this happened. But, is this whole marriage thing going to work out? And why does Bill's family dress him up as a girl? I have no idea what's coming next. I'm so happy Bill accepted Tom after waiting for, like, YEARS.
Author's Response: sorry for the amazingly late reply! I guess by now you've read the last chapter and got an answer to your questions ,) thank you so much for reviewing <3 much love
Date: 04/13/09 07:49 pm Title: Chapter six
WHAHAHAHAHA I knew IT!!!!! I feel like Nancy Drew oh yeah!! GOOOO ME! Awesome chapter by the way =D
Author's Response: aw, dammnit ,p and here I was trying to write a good enough story to fool you ^^ thanks darling
Date: 04/13/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter six
I KNEW IT!!! This chapter just made me so happy. While I love angst as much as the next girl, sometimes I just want nice and romantic and sweet. I'm so loving this story!
Author's Response: lol ^^ nice, romantic and sweet is love! I'm sorry this response comes so late, thank you so much for reviewing this, it means so much to me !!!
Date: 04/13/09 07:27 pm Title: Prologue
Uh! Lamesauce! The thingy cut off my review...
As I was saying:
Loved the bedroom scene b/c the boys seem to permanently be stuck in bunks or hotel beds. Them on a mansion bed was adorable/hottt and ily for that, lol. Can't wait for next Monday, Luce :)
Author's Response: aw, bad thingy ,p well, I'm very happy you came back to write it over! it was so odd writing them in an oldstyle english bedroom oO this is why I love AU so much, it gives me the freedom to really explore with the scenery ,p hope you'll like what I'm posting today, it'll be the final explanation to everything and I really want it to turn out good! much love <3
Date: 04/13/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter six
I liked it all buuut
I really loved the bed scene
Author's Response: ^^ that makes me happy to hear! thanks addy <3
Date: 04/13/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter six
*is so full of squee she can't leave a better review....continues squeeing that she's sure would be heard in Germany*
Author's Response: I wonder what the boys think that sound is xD thanks girl