Date: 04/26/09 10:40 am Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story
Even if you almost know since the beginning what will happen to Tom and Bill, it's a real pleasure to read.
Your writing is smooth and fluent, so esay to follow. I read and finished without realizing.
The characters are so endearing, that even during the worst moments, you know they deserve to be happy together and that they will be.
I really loved the strange relationship between Bill and Tom. Despite the few times they see each other over the years, it grew so strong and beautiful.
That goes to show that love can grow in places, times and ways that normally don't allow it.
Even between two boys.
I say it again, it was a wonderful story.
Kiki
Date: 04/25/09 03:13 pm Title: Epilogue
Hey babe, thank you for the wonderful birthday email. I was so happy to hear from you. I owe you about a thousand times over, not to mention I'm still trying to send that ppt I made you. I'm being stubborn and refusing to take pics of it b/c there are some... interesing pictures I put in that need close inspection tobe fully appreciated. ;)
I loved this last chapter. Not only was it perfect but it totally answered all my questions w/o going overboard or beind too wordy about it.
You should totally become an author so you can write amazing books (that I would read btw).
Jorg was a bit terrifying, it fit but it was still frightening. Poor Andi, I don't like him but I felt kinda bad for him. Does he know Bill's a boy?
This was totally perfect!
Love you,
You Queen
Date: 04/25/09 05:50 am Title: Chapter one
roflROFL!! Lady Buhsida BWAHAHAHAAA!
Date: 04/23/09 03:29 pm Title: Epilogue
Wonderful simply wonderful. God this is just the kind of fluff/romance that makes all us fangirls squeal. :)
Date: 04/23/09 01:33 pm Title: Epilogue
I adored this story, but of course, that's not surprising since I love everything you write.
Your stories are always so cute and fluffy (and smexy ^^)
I love that there's no angst and suffering, that's refreshing.
I hope you still have lots of ideas, because I definitely want to read a lot of other stories from you.
Keep the awesomeness up ;-)
Date: 04/22/09 09:30 pm Title: Epilogue
this was wonderful!! thanks so much for this story, i loved it!!!
Date: 04/22/09 03:03 pm Title: Epilogue
I enjoyed this one a lot. Thanks. I'm definitly going to read all your stories. You're a natural talent . Don't stop writing pretty please.
Date: 04/22/09 01:21 pm Title: Epilogue
I liked this story very much, and I'm not generally fond of AU. It was refreshingly original.
Date: 04/21/09 11:25 pm Title: Epilogue
Sorry I didn't have a chance to review the past couple chapters. This was a great read. I loved that Bill ended up being Miss Elizabeth. And it was a perfect ending too.
Date: 04/21/09 08:52 pm Title: Epilogue
Aaaw... I'm sad it's over now. Such a good ending though!
Date: 04/21/09 08:28 pm Title: Epilogue
And they lived happily ever after! haha I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you =D
Date: 04/21/09 06:27 pm Title: Epilogue
Perfect ending to a perfect story - thanks for writing this:)
Date: 04/21/09 03:26 pm Title: Epilogue
Love the ending! I really do! Most definitely!!!
It sort of fades out to black... I almost expected some credits appearing on the screen...
Tom: Tom Kaulitz
Bill/Elizabeth: Bill Kaulitz
Jörg: Jörg Kaulitz
Andreas: Andreas (last name unknown)
Saki: Saki Pelka
Tobi: Tobias Balewski
Dunja: Dunja Haaima
Written, Produced and Directed By: Firelucy
An early birth... Yes, quite probable...
I take back what I said about Jörg in my last review... He is a total asshole and a right pons! A cruel one at that! Denying Bill his birth right just because he MIGHT be weak... Pisshead! But then again... It should be looked upon with understanding of the times in which the story is set... And I have no doubt that those things did happen... Well, maybe not making the child a girl, but choosing not to give the inheritance to the first borne because of health issues...
But thank the goddess they made Bill a Girl! That way he was able to fall in love with Tom and break out of the prison Jörg had made his life! That would have been quite impossible if Bill had remained a boy!
The scene with the serious explanation, of the emotional trauma Bill had suffered and how he had been robbed of his future, really, was lightened by the antics of Saki and Dunja. I was caught of guard when Dunja slapped Saki over his head for being rude and it made me laugh.
"The last thing they hear before the door to the cottage closes behind them is Saki asking curiously, “How does that even work?” and then the telltale sound of Dunja’s palm meeting the back of his head…again."
The "again" makes that line really funny! LOL
As it is written in presence tempus, the story evolves around me instead of before my eyes, as a story would do when written in imperfect. And with this story really painting itself around me, with its flowing descriptions of nature and happenings, You have taken reading Fanfiction to a new level!
It is with some sorrow I now leave this story. It has been a great pleasure to read, with emotional roller coasters and epic tales of heroism and love!
I am looking forward to follow You through the next Twin tale of Yours. As long as You make them as good as this one, I am in no doubt You would ever have to take that journey alone!
Not much else to say really...
Excellent! Everything!
I'm in heaven!
Thank You!
Love
Anders
Date: 04/21/09 01:42 pm Title: Epilogue
Aww! This story was so cute! I'd love to know about their life after they get married..*hint* xD
I love that Bill was Elizabeth. Genius =P
Date: 04/21/09 10:26 am Title: Epilogue
This was so amazing, so beautiful. I love you.
Date: 04/21/09 10:15 am Title: Epilogue
Okay, that explanation of the Bill and girl thing is interesting. Not in a bad way, because that just solves the confusion I had. That Jorg would go to such lengths... wow. I'm gonna feel a lil' sorry for Andreas, being a cripple. But I'm all for Tom now.
I'll take any journey with you! Thank you for this story, it has made my Tuesdays easier to live.
Date: 04/21/09 06:54 am Title: Epilogue
Aw man, this is such a perfect ending. Jörg is not my favorite person in the world in here, but I suppose you have to see it from his point of view as well. Anyway, the explanation Bill and Tom gave them was brilliant, and hilarious, and it all makes sense now! "How does that even work?" lol xD I'm looking forward to your next project (if you have one coming)! Thanks for writing this great story. :)
Date: 04/21/09 05:57 am Title: Epilogue
I've been meaning to read this since about chapter 3 or 4 was posted and never got around to it. And now I've just read it twice; once last night and once this morning.
It was so beautiful and flowing, and it captured me from the very first chapter. Every single line was so well written, it was obvious much time and thought went into it; the amount of description was impecible and, can I just say, in chapter five I think my heart stopped. It was the more intimate and romantic scene I've ever read, and I don't think it was offensive in the slightest.
I really liked the ending, the twist. I was suspecting something like that, but I didn't guess about the Bill being born too early, so it wasn't all slyly given away. The epiloge was sweet, with Saki and Tobi bringing some light-hearted entertainment, and finished it off perfectly. I will definately be reading this again.
Date: 04/21/09 02:15 am Title: Epilogue
that was a perfect way to end it and a good explanation for the bill/elizabeth thing. i ended up hating jorg, but you probably planned that didn't you? sneaky. i was liking how he was acting towards tom in the last chapters too. oh well. every story needs a villain. i can't tell you how adorable this whole story has been. thank you for sharing, i can't wait for your next one!