Date: 02/05/10 07:46 am Title: Epilogue
What a sweet and heartwarming story, I really loved reading it. I don't ever think i could have imagined the twins in that kind of world, but I was pleasantly surprised how naturally you made the characters fit in. It was really good and I hope to read more of these kind stories from you. Thank you so much for writing this.
Love Ai
Date: 01/08/10 11:17 am Title: Epilogue
Om my gosh, that is so adorable! *squeaky voice*
Date: 11/13/09 01:28 pm Title: Epilogue
I think this is perfection. In fact, I'm certain. This is so wonderful, it's absolutely beautifully written and I enjoyed every single word. I have to say, I'm a sucker for the romance. I tend to get worried reading angst fics, especially those with unhappy endings but their relationship was so beautiful throughout, I couldn't help but smile. I loved how their relationship develops, blossoms and thrives, and such a sublime twist. I simply adore this fic. Thanks for writing it :)
Date: 10/26/09 02:48 am Title: Epilogue
ok...so now i get the whole Bill/Elizabeth ..."boy in dress" thing. VERY CLEVER!! This was a really cute story and i'm so glad i gave it a chance, because now i love it! I was so worried something horrably tragic would happen, the whole time reading this story i was so nervous, but it was just so sweet, and funny, and adorable and i just love the charachters you built for Tom and Bill. Great, great story. One of the best, for sure.
Date: 10/26/09 02:22 am Title: Chapter six
ok, you lost me...
Bill is Miss Elizabeth, i sort of guessed that earlier...but if Bill really IS a boy, why is his name Elizabeth, why does he wear dresses...I dont understand that part, it doesnt make sence. Did his parents want a daughter and decided Bill looked girly enough, or is Bill some kind of transvestite or somthing? I DONT GET IT!!
Date: 10/26/09 01:09 am Title: Chapter three
I really like Dunja, but Saki and Tobi are scaring me a bit. I dont want to find them mad at Tom. And i wish Tom would just get over Miss Elizabeth. He has Bill!!
Date: 10/25/09 11:21 pm Title: Chapter one
ok, in the beginning i TOTALLY thought Bill was Elizabeth in disguise, lol, but i think swimming may have given that away. and why can't horses have apples?
Date: 10/24/09 12:20 am Title: Epilogue
I don't really know what to say now, so I'll shut up! But I just wanna let you know that this fic was perfect and well, everything I wanted it to be! :D I was scared almost the whole time that something sad would happen xD I'm glad it didn't! And I'll shut up now! God natt :D
Date: 10/23/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter two
Wow... just wow! This is just too amazing! Love it! :D
I think it's fantastic that you're like, writing for yourself, because you love to write... I kinda have the impression that almost all the people here are like "Oh, I'm sorry I haven't updated in like a year but I had better things to do..." It shows in your writing too, that it's something you like doing. Makes the story more alive, I guess. And it's a REALLY awesome fic :D
Date: 10/23/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter one
omg, aww, that must be the sweetest thing I've read in.... I don't remember how long! Aww, srsly, I'm almost crying right now xD I love this! And I know that I'll stay up all night and don't go to bed until I'm finished reading it! :D
Date: 08/31/09 03:43 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow.
I dont know how you do it. But you write these epic tales. And..even when I ´have decided that I WILL NOT like it...I always end up loving it. I usually hate fics where Bill is a girl o is crossdressing. But this was just beaituful like any fairytale. And the sex scenes...my god so hot. And the final chapter was the sweetest thing. Thank you.
Date: 07/10/09 05:21 am Title: Epilogue
Beautiful story. I enjoyed everything about it. In the beginning I thought Tom was uber adorable with his pony Bruno. When Georg left him I felt so bad for him, poor kid.
OMG and when Bruno died, I actually cried. To love and care for an animal that is pretty much family and have him die is horrible.
Saki, Tobi, and Dunja cracked me up in this story. I didn't like Andreas for the fact that he beat his pony.
The ending was wonderful, really well written.
Date: 06/21/09 09:54 am Title: Chapter six
OMG! I knew it!!!! After reading the first chapter and seeing 'cross dressing' on the genres, I knew Bill must be Miss Elizebeth! This story is so moving and absolutly beautiful. I gave never read something quite as amazing as this one. Good job. Keep up the absolutly amazing work. Breathtaking! Should be featured without a doubt
Date: 06/01/09 03:18 am Title: Chapter four
I'm back from my trip and finally get to finish this story! And Lucy... I just have to say, this is one of the most beautiful lovescenes I've ever read, all catagories. Everything about it, every last line is so heartfelt and stunning that I almost can't breathe through it. Tom's greif and desperate want for comfort gives it all a whole new level. Every emotion, the hurt, the pleasure, it's so strong you can almost touch it. I seriously don't know how you do it, but I thank you for it. I don't have time to finish reading the story right now, but believe me I'll be back :)
Date: 05/23/09 02:30 am Title: Epilogue
"The last thing they hear before the door to the cottage closes behind them is Saki asking curiously, “How does that even work?” and then the telltale sound of Dunja’s palm meeting the back of his head…again." was absolute brilliance...I laughed really hard, don't ask why, it just struck me as hilarious. This is a great story.
Date: 05/14/09 06:40 pm Title: Epilogue
I just read this all in one sitting and it was a wonderful story. Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us. :D
Date: 05/02/09 02:34 am Title: Epilogue
FUDGE! That was sooo sweet... Like a romantic novel... If only life was like that... MAN I LOVE YOU STORIES!!
Date: 05/02/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter six
Awww... that was so sweet man! The "scenes" was sexy too!
Author's Response: thanks ,p means a lot! sorry for the late reply!
Date: 04/27/09 03:57 pm Title: Epilogue
Beautiful story with a happy end, just like I love them ;)
I like this story very much. I wouldn't say it's different, it's unique. Like most of your stories. Always waiting for the day when we get the new chapter.
This story just melts my heart. Romeo got his "Juliet" and in this story I hope they will life happily ever after.
"He will love Bill to the end of his days; Bill is his everything, his one and only. Bill is Tom’s."
"It’s a never ending rhythm, and Tom’s heart beats only for Bill."
What can I say, it's perfect :) You are very good with words.
Like I say after every finnished story, can't wait what we will get from you next :)
luv ya!
xx