Date: 04/03/09 01:28 pm Title: Chapter four
like ...
this is a story that really makes me feel like im there, watching.
It's crazy.
Like if this story would be a book, I'd buy it. I'd read it over and over and over again.
It's like a Walt Disney kind of story.
I love it, the idea, the way you describe things. Really, I've read all your other fics and their just wow.
But this one...
At first, I wasn't too thrilled with the little résumé but then I gave it a shot and I can't wait for Monday to come and everyone that knows me, knows I hate Mondays. Wow...
Im a little pissed when I finish reading this story because I always want more and more and more.
It's like reading the book of your life and your into like crazy and then you have to stop reading because , you have to go eat or there is someone calling you and your friends are picking you up.
Wow.
I know I write a lot but I had to tell you all this.
Oh and by the way, this story is very important to me because I had a poney when I was younger, he's name was Bombary blue. But I used to call him BB.
He was a soft sand color and so beautiful, my uncle bought it for me. But then I moved in the city and I left my little Bombary blue and my uncle lost a lot of money and he ...had to sell BB. He didn't even tell me so I would not be hurt but you know..
I was damn attached.
So I kinda know how Tom feels.
Anyways Im gonna stop writing *shy*
Just, wow, your fic is sublime, keep up the good good work :)
Author's Response: OO wow, I didn't think I was able to blush this much ^^ you made me so so so happy with this, girl, thank you so much for reviewing! you didn't like the summary? why? any constructive criticism is highly appreciated ^^ that's the only way I can make it better in the future ,) and girl, don't worry about writing a lot, it just makes me insanely happy that you care enough to review and tell me what you think about my writing! I know how you feel about losing your pony, it hurts so much! I've lost so many horses in my life and I wish I could just bring them all back. When did you find out he had sold BB? again, thank you so much for reviewing this, it means so so much to me! lots of love <3
Date: 03/31/09 06:16 pm Title: Chapter four
oh god...i cried..couldn't help it...so sad..poor tomi.
this story is just...awesome, completely...totally...absolutely wonderful..good...and on..and on
i'm completely and irrevocably in love with this :)))
Author's Response: aw, I'm sorry to have made you cry. But then again, that was my intention. this review left me smiling so bad ^^ thank you for the sweet words, love <3
Date: 03/31/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter four
That was sad and happy and...I love this little romance. I don't like Bill hiding so many things, though. I don't understand this whole Miss Elizabeth deal! What's going on? Out with it, Bill!
Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing this, it means the world to me !!! a little part of the whole Miss Elizabeth deal will be explained in a couple of hours when I post the next chap ,)
Date: 03/31/09 03:06 pm Title: Chapter four
*sniff* i was so sad when Bruno died
but when they made love i forgot about the sadness
it was HOT
i hope more will come
Author's Response: hihi, that was my intentions for the love making scene ,) so happy you liked it! more will come, don't worry ^^ much love
Date: 03/31/09 02:42 pm Title: Chapter three
i was embarassed too when tom talked with dunja
poor tomi
i liked more bill's present than elizabeth's present
and i wonder if the handkerchief is really from elizabeth ?
Author's Response: lol, believe me, it was quite awkward to write that xD and yes, I would have preferred Bill's present if it was my birthday ^^ who would the hankerchief be from, if not elizabeth? ,) love
Date: 03/31/09 02:22 pm Title: Chapter two
they're so adorable
and nasty...but i like them that way
i hope that they get better at dirty things...
but i don't like that tom likes elizabeth,i hope that he'll forget about her cuz he has bill
Author's Response: oh yes, they will get better at dirty things ,) practice makes perfect, you know xD thank you so much for reviewing this, it means so much to me !!!
Date: 03/31/09 01:40 pm Title: Chapter one
i love horses and Tom and Bill of course
and i love u too for writing this sweet story
Author's Response: I love them, too, and it pained me to kill Bruno! thank you so much for this <3
Date: 03/31/09 12:52 pm Title: Chapter three
Reply to the response on my review:
Listening adoringly... Still can't see Tom doing that, to the sounds of folding paper...;)
A surprise for little old me? On my birthday? I hope it is a nice surprise...
Didn't notice the novels...
I did not mean that You shouldn't darken the story at all, I just meant that I hope it won't go all angsty, but then again... You always make it a happy ending, so I should probably not worry...
And I wasn't complaining when I said it was short... it filled it's purpose and didn't need to be longer!
I will hopefully manage to read the next chapter today but I will not make any promises...
Anders
Author's Response: lol, maybe listening adoringly was a silly way to put it ,) but you know what I ment with it ,p lol, wheither or not the surprise is a nice one depends entirely on how you feel about it ,) but I do hope you will like it! about darkening of the story, with this one I have been trying to add smaller pieces of angst rather than having the main peak of the fic an angsty one (for example Georg leaving, Bruno's death and so on) do you think that is a good way to do it? at least with this story? love you so <3 yours ever
Date: 03/31/09 11:56 am Title: Chapter four
Reading attentively to make sure I don't miss anything.
Author's Response: lol, thank darling ,)
Date: 03/31/09 08:21 am Title: Chapter four
This sort of reminds me of when I lost my dog, Bandit. (Minus the smut, haha) I'd had him since I was a baby...*sigh*
This was a really good chapter, though. I love how Bill helped Tom to forget, if just for a little while. He's so sweet =]
Aaannnddd, I started on the next chapter a couple of days ago, but I don't know when exactly it'll be posted :( I'll try to get on it soon, though! Wuv ya =]
Author's Response: it's always so sad losing an animal, and especially one that is a part of the family. Goddess, so happy you liked how Bill helped Tom cope, I was so worried about that scene! yay ^^ can't wait for your next post, you've been teasing us with all those delicious new details and the plot has thickened so much xD love it
Date: 03/31/09 07:25 am Title: Chapter four
Oh man, I nearly cried. I, too, knows what it's like to lose horses you love; or horses at all, really. It's happened too many times for me, and you're right, each time you react differently. Still, I feel so bad for Tom, losing Bruno. Anyway, the smut was hot and a pain relief. God, this chapter is so sad. :( But a joy to read, as always.
Author's Response: I hate losing horses, because yeah, you react differently and I never know quite hom much it will hurt until it happens. lol, that's exactly what I wanted the smut to be, a pain relief for Tom ^^ I saw you've posted a new story and I will read it as soon as I have the time, I'm still grumbling because holiday is over -.- I have no doubt you will leave me a shaking mess with your dark but beautiful way of writing (because I am assuming this one is not a fluffy one either?) much love
Date: 03/31/09 01:28 am Title: Chapter four
yay! i always look forward to updates for this story. it was so sad with bruno dying, but sweet too, that bill came right away. he always seems to be there at just the right times... i love how you write the characters. everything just seems to fit so well. i'm looking forward to tom meeting miss elizabeth. i'm still not exactly sure where this is going, but i know i'll like it!
Author's Response: you don't know how much it means to me to know that you look forward to the updates ^^ that makes me so happy! hihi, and so glad you like the characters, I've been working on improving those ,) next chapter you'll meet Miss Elizabeth ,p so you won't have to wait long now, only a couple of hours
Date: 03/31/09 12:03 am Title: Chapter four
I think this is the most perfect chapter on the entire website bby. Absolutely nothing should ever be changed with it. I'm a little speechless, so that's all I'm going to say. *hugs tight*
Author's Response: I think I just died OO and you say you're speachless? well look what you just did to me! good goddess...thank you so much <3
Date: 03/30/09 11:16 pm Title: Chapter four
:( tom, i'm ever so glad bill is with him.
Author's Response: me, too, love <3 thank you for reading
Date: 03/30/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter four
My heart is absolutely broken over the loss of Tom's dearest friend and I cried just as hard as he did.
However, I cannot regret in all honestly, the comfort that Tom sought in Bill and the way he went about getting it. This chapter blew me away in its intensity and you make me cry with the description of their first time and what each boy was feeling from each other. I almost felt how Tom felt when he was inside Bill with how well you did it.
You blow me away and I cannot believe you dedicate this to me, for I fear I am not worthy of such beauty and perfection.
Forever yours, dearest Lucy. You take my breath away with such words. <3
Author's Response: girl, I cried, too, when writing this! I couldn't believe I was going to be so cruel and kill Bruno :( and you do know that your ability to make me blush astounds me most times, yes? thank you so much for this, girl, you know it means the world to me! you are worth this and more, my love, for you mean so much to me! now, you say I have taken your breath away, I feel it is time you steal away mine ,) where is that next chapter, hm?
Date: 03/30/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter four
you make me love Mondays. *_*
this chapter was long and detailed; I can imagine everything that went down with the boys in the attic. It's very sweet, what Bill did for him.
It's also not unusual for some people to react the way Tom did when there was a loss. xD
Author's Response: all these reviews make me love them, too ^^ I'm glad to hear that Tom's reaction didn't offend you, I was pretty nervous about it. But I think you're right, there has to be someone who would react this way. thank you so much for this <3 lots of love
Date: 03/30/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter four
I'm really glad that Bill was there for Tomi. *sniffles* Poor Tomi, his pretty pony. His Bruno.
I love horses, always have and always will. I've had two ponies in my life, an Appaloosa named Penny and her colt, Dime. Penny died when I was fourteen and it was one of the worst pains I've ever felt, only made worse because my dad sold Dime a few weeks later. :(
I guess, I just know Tom's pain and I'm really glad he had Bill. I was afraid he would have to go through it alone.
Author's Response: when horses die it's like you lose a piece of your heart, however dramatic that may sound. They're amazing, and it kills me that I have had to lose so many of them. But I did feel Bruno was luckier than most, at least he got to live a good life and died of old age. And girl, not even I would be cruel enough to make Tom go through something like that on his own. much much love <3 yours ever
Date: 03/30/09 08:13 pm Title: Prologue
Awww! Are you sure? This isn't some guilt thing over the unmentionable thing that didn't really happen from that post, is it?? *clings to you like mad*
I love you, sweetheart, and I feel honoured that you dedicate this to me, since Forsaken is all for you in return, but ultimately, what happens after is yours too.
So, yay, we exchanged fic vows to each other!! <3333333
Author's Response: lol *hugs you* fic vows, that does sound rather nice ^^ and girl, this is no guilt trip ,p it's a birthday present. It may not be much, but I've always believed that it's the thought that counts ,) love you <3
Date: 03/30/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter four
Oh... I hate it when animals die. The sadness was perfect... and while you may think it may be offensive how Tom reacted with Bill after that, but come on, I totally would want Bill to sex me after something bad happens. Admit it, we all want that. xD
Author's Response: I hate that, too, and I hated myself for killing Bruno :'( which is silly, 'cause he's only a result of my imagination oO LOL, I must agree with you, love, if Bill was to sex me up every time something bad happened, I do believe it would ease my grief ^^ thank you!
Date: 03/30/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter four
I'm really sad that Bruno is gone, but fuck, the lemon was good. It somehow feels adequate that their first time, which is an important event, would be somewhat caused by another event as important as Bruno's death.
And poor Bill having to travel in incomfortable dresses...
Author's Response: goddess, you have no idea how much it means to me to hear you say that, I was so nervous about the love making scene coming right after Bruno's death! and lol, you seem pretty determined that Bill is Elizabeth ,p *hugs* thank you for this!