Date: 04/07/09 10:10 am Title: Chapter five
D: I was starting to like Leopold because he threw that lil' brat off, and now he died. *is heartbroken*
Anyway I thought Bill's slap and hug was so cute, just imagining it makes me smile all silly. xD
Author's Response: I liked Leopold, too, sorry for killing him! lol, so happy you liked the slap-hug ^^ glad that came out the way I wanted it to! thank you for this <3
Date: 04/07/09 09:10 am Title: Chapter five
i hate Andreas
what?miss Elizabeth loves Tom? but she doesn't know him
poor Billy
Author's Response: agree on the first one, the second one's a mystery ,p and agree on the last one! much love <3
Date: 04/07/09 06:58 am Title: Chapter five
You should be sorry! Reading what Andreas did to that poor horse... I've seen people do that to horses, and it makes me fucking furious. I want to give them a dose of their own medicine because, no, horses aren't people; they're better. And now you made me hate Andreas (which I'm not all that upset over, but still XD). Anyway, sad yet powerful chapter, and I love it. As always. (:
Author's Response: sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry !!! I really didn't wanna hurt Leopold, too, but it was needed for the sake of the plot! people who hurt animals are disgusting, first of all, an animal will not understand what's going on, most likely it will not be able to defend itself and they're innocent! thank you so much for this becca, you know it means a lot to me <3
Date: 04/07/09 02:44 am Title: Chapter five
that was so sweet! you just always write the sweetest chapters, i love it. the "i love you" scene was very cute too. i wonder about the next chapter though. i don't know if i want some conflict or not. on the one hand, it moves the story along, but on the other, everything is so nice right now and i like the characters so much, i don't want them to have to deal with the angst. of course, i'm sure you'll make me happy either way.
Author's Response: lol, you're just like me xD I think angst along the way is good, but I love the sweetness so much ,p hope how it turns out will please you, I think it will ,) I do hope I'll make you happy! that's what I want, to make people smile! thank you for this <3
Date: 04/06/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter five
Dang.... i wonder if Bill is elizabeth... :
Author's Response: guess you know by now ,p
Date: 04/06/09 07:21 pm Title: Chapter five
Aaaaw... so cute that it fills me with squeeee, even after I try to forget about Leopold -.- I'm a bit worried as to how their relationship will work, with Jorg and Andreas being pricks and all. Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much for this ^^ it makes me so happy !!! I really hope that you'll like how everything turns out, their relationship in particular ,p much love
Date: 04/06/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter five
I really do hate Andreas in this one. And Leopold being killed is just so sad...
Good thing that Tom's declaration makes up for that.
Author's Response: Andreas is a reather disgucting boyin this fic, yes! and I'm sorry for killing Leopold, I didn't really mean to kill that many horses oO thank you for reviewing, you know it means a lot!
Date: 04/06/09 07:08 pm Title: Chapter five
And I love Bill and Tom...together...forever. Shoot! We are getting so close to unwrapping some of the mystery I can practically taste it! You keep teasing and I find that rude. But while you tease, you tell one of the most beautiful stories ever. Thank you! I love it when you update because the chapters are always long and very very satisfying but still somehow leave me wanting more.
Author's Response: Bill/Tom is love ^^ LOL, you think I'm being rude ??? I am sorry for teasing like this, but I think you'll like how it all turns out ^^ and I'm glad you like the length of the chapters! it's not foten people comment on things like that.
Date: 04/06/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter five
Aw hahaha, I came back to read it again. Have I mentioned yet how much I'm really loving how you tease us with Tom and Miss Elizabeth? Every time they get anywhere close to being face to face, and then the moment dances away yet again I cover my mouth with my hands and giggle.
Also, I really like how deeply empathetic and compassionate Tom is in this. He seems to be the only one really moved by the animals' pain and suffering. He's such a loving soul and although there's more to be unveiled in the story, that seems to be exactly what a certain someone really needs...
Author's Response: LOL, you're awsome xD and I'm really glad you like how I'm reluctant to let everything about Tom and Miss Elizabeth out into the open right away! and as for Tom's love for the animals, it's just how I picture he'd be ^^ Saki does care, too, of course, but as Dunja he belives there are more important things. I think Tom's love for the horses in this is because all the humans in his life have left him in one way or another, except of course the people at Tokechester. The horses stay as long as they can, they don't betray him, you know? anyways, sorry for rambling, thank you so much for this, it meant a lot to me !!! love <3
Date: 04/06/09 06:49 pm Title: Chapter five
I want more goooshhh
it's just so gooooood
Author's Response: LOL thanks xD hope you like what more there is to come
Date: 04/06/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter five
this story leaves me speechless...its just so awesome...i wonder if my suspicions are correct about miss Elizabeth? (hmmm) I'm betting they are!
thank you!!
can't wait for another update..please don't keep us waiting for long 'kay?
Author's Response: lol, the elizabeth mystery is soon to be revieled ^^ really hope you'll like how everything turns out in the end! thank you so much for this !!!
Date: 04/06/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter five
Awe Luce, it's okaies :)
I just can't believe Tom hasn't figured it out by nowwwww! Urgh, it's pretty much killing me, but yeah. Another great chapter my love, enjoy your break :)
Author's Response: lol, Tom will figure some things out in the future, promise ,p thank you so much for this, love, you know how much it means to me !!!
Date: 04/06/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter five
Oh Tomi...god, you break my heart, kid. <3
Sorry for the one line, which isn't really a proper review, but you know, I am blown away by this like I usually am.
Author's Response: he's breaking mine, too (which is ironic because that means I'm the one breaking my own heart oO) girl, any review from you is an awsome review! it just means so much to me to simply know you're reading this story! much much love <3 yours luce
Date: 04/06/09 05:06 pm Title: Chapter five
First of all, I'm so sorry not to have been reading / reviewing new chapters sooner. Gah. I've been horribly busy. But all caught up now :)
I love this story. I think maybe I have it figured out ... lol. Bill and Tom are just so adorable ... and aww, they love each other!
* melts *
It's so touching, because they are young, and it makes it feel pure if that makes sense ...
Can't wait for more. Excellent job as always. XX
Author's Response: no need to apologize, darling, although I should for not responding sooner -.- sorry! you do make sense, love! I really hope you'll like how this all turns out ^^ much much love
Date: 04/06/09 05:03 pm Title: Chapter five
Much love for this one :)
Author's Response: thanks ^^
Date: 04/06/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter five
The scene where Tom is roaming around looking for Leopold was so suspenseful! I also like how you made the whole Miss Elizabeth aspect even more mysterious. I have some hunches, but I can't wait to read more to see if they're correct. Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: have I told you how much I love that you seem to always review everything? I really admire you for that! I'm really glad you liked this and I'm curious to see if your hunches about the Elizabeth mystery will be correct ,p thank you
Date: 04/06/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter five
oh oh come on, when is bill gonna reveal he's libby? plz update))
Author's Response: who says he's libby? as far as I've understood, Bill's got a dick ^^ updating in a couple of hours
Date: 04/06/09 04:33 pm Title: Chapter five
Awww, love!!! I can't wait for the Bill/Elizabeth mystery to be resolved. And you're so mean to make Tom semi-unconscious when Elizabeth comes to visit! But I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next one, as usual.
Author's Response: the mystery will be revealed in the next two chapters ,p lol, and yes, I know I'm mean ^^ really hope you'll like where I take this! gonna update in a few hours
Date: 04/05/09 03:39 pm Title: Chapter four
I... erm... cry...
Yes, I do!
I know how bad it can get when you loose a very dear friend, and this chapter brought back a lot of memories!
I knew You would kill him! I said so in my first review, well almost anyway...
I can't believe You actually did that!
It was a spectacularly excellent and very well written chapter! I loved reading it!
Sex with a loved one, or even a very dear friend, can do wonders to relive tension in such a heartbreaking situation as the one described in this chapter.
That scene was very... I do not know...breath taking! Very beautiful... serene even... not rushed, not forced, but so very necessary for Tom! And Hot... No, not hot! It wasn't hot, but more like... comforting, loving and caring! Well, of course it was hot, but still...
Now Tom only has Bill... And, maybe Dunja and Saki..(?)
Nice thing with the horses in the beginning. Well, maybe not nice for the horses, damn stupid humans, to drive the animals almost to the brink of death, but nice to read about the happenings in the Tokechester household... Completely unnecessary, but as You know, I love those small tidbits of info, You hand out...
Still feeling sad about Bruno...
The clincher is that last line, Tom and Bruno back together, in his dream, forever...
You do know how much I love your story, right?
Thanks a million times :)
Anders
(Next chapter up tomorrow, Yey!!!!)
Author's Response: I cried when I wrote this, couldn't help it. You did say so, I remember because I wanted to tell you sinse you hinted at it. I can't believe I did it either, but it was important for the story. Also, I wanted to try out writing sorrow, because it's not something I usually do. lol, I think I get what you mean about the love making scene, about it being hot, but not being hot because it was so...innocent? maybe? Ah, yes, Tom does of course have Dunja and Saki as well, but they don't count as best friend material, more like people caring for him. I'm glad you think that the unnecessary things work well because I do love to write them ^^ thank you so much for being such a great and lojal reviewer, Anders, it means the world to me you know! much love
Date: 04/05/09 12:54 pm Title: Chapter four
Poor Tomi! I feel bad for him. To lose his pony, after he lost his brother. Just thinking, will he meet Georg again?
But Bill was there, that's good. And it was hot too... I really enjoyed the end of this chapter ;)
I'm curious to know how Tom thinks about Elizabeth now when he has slept with Bill. And what is the mystery behind it all. I'm really hooked :)
By the way, there should be puppies in this story too ;)
xx
Author's Response: I did feel so bad for making Tom go through all of this :'( and no, he will not meet Georg again, I don't know where Georg went, in my head he got a job on a ship and sailed off somewhere. So happy you liked the end of this chapter, I was really nervous about writing it like that. How Tom thinks about Elizabeth is one of the things that you'll get to know more about very soon, because you're right in questioning his affection for her after he's slept with Bill! lol, there really should be puppies in this, I was just scared to make it too much like Black Beauty ,p I hope you know how much your reviews mean to me Liz! much love
