Date: 03/26/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 2;; Labor.
O.O I actually guessed that they would be conjoined twins... but the other possibility was that they were another type of special xD nothing deadly or anything, just a little mentally special. And you do know that during C-sections O.O the person is awake right? Unless you already knew that, but Simone just fell asleep afterwards =P was that what you meant? And damn ._. it's like... you've met my father or something lol xDDD what a bastard (Jorg).
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew that, but I didn't want to go into details about it, that's why the babies were already named when she saw them. So yes, I meant she fell asleep afterwards. I think I should probably re-write that huh? LOL.
Oh dang, really? It must be pretty difficult. Haha, yeah, Jorg is a bastard.
Thanks so much for your review! I will definitely see what I can do about that little gap between Simone in labor and then her suddenly waking up!
Date: 03/26/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
;x Reminds me of my own father... But it's a good story ^-^ I shall read the next chapter! Although :O there was ONE problem. He had spilled wine on her light blue dress at the beginning of their date, so I had had a big red stain on the front. You should put the last part in 3rd person =P
Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry. Well, Thank you!!
ohmygosh! I guess I missed that. I should really use a beta, lol. Thanks so much for telling me! :DD
Date: 03/26/09 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 2;; Labor.
I knew it!
I was just late with reading this...
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, you did!
well, late is better than never, lol
thanks for the review! :DD
Date: 03/26/09 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
conjoined
Author's Response: Mhm:D
Date: 03/26/09 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 2;; Labor.
Ooooooh, conjoined. Okey doker pants...
But that can happen during any pregnancy though, right? It wouldn't neccesarily be a defect of drinking. But hell, I'm not a doctor.
Author's Response: Yeah, unfortunately. I don't even think drinking can cause it, I just needed something to be the cause of it.
thanks for the review! :D
Date: 03/26/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 2;; Labor.
oh, wow.
that was amazing.
very original idea.
Author's Response: Omg, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! :DD
Date: 03/01/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
wow! amazing chapter. very nice beginning. i love the fact that we could see the life of simone before the twins are born. i have no idea what's wrong about the twins but all i know it's that they can have a surgery and have a normal life. so it's good! see you next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Simone's life before the twins are born is important. Yeah, you 'll find out next chapter!
:DD
Date: 03/01/09 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
This is really interesting. I'm looking forward for the next chapter, and how this will develop.
So it's a defect that CAN be repaired in a surgery... perhaps they are conjoined?
Author's Response: Thanks so much:DD
yep! it can be cured in surgery:)perhaps...maybe(:
Date: 03/01/09 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
I'd say Fetal Alcohol Syndrome, due to the drinking OR Down Syndrome .. But just my opinion. I am just going to have to wait till you continue to find out. =D
*Rachael*
Author's Response: ohh dang. well, yeah just wait:DD you'll find out next chapter though:)
Date: 03/01/09 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
this sounds really good(: Update soon please!
Author's Response: thank you!
i will:DD
Date: 03/01/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
damn poor simone =[ are they going to have autism?
Author's Response: i know right:(
...whatever they have can be cured by surgery...
Date: 03/01/09 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1;; Are You Alright?
WHAT'S WRONG WITH TEH BEBEZZ???
MORE SOON, PLEASE?!??!
/end of caps lock abuse
Author's Response: Well, you'll find out next chapter:)
Most definitely.
:D