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Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 10: Challenge

plzplzplzplzplz update sooonnn..thx soso much//i luvz thiz=] hurry plz=]

Author's Response: I/m glad you love it :D I'll try and update soon. So keep a look out for the next chappie :P

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/09 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 10: Challenge

Very good

i wanna kno if they make it out



Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :P You'll have to wait and see if they make it out or not.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/09 02:51 am Title: Chapter 10: Challenge

oh wow*hugs tom and bill*

Author's Response: :P I'm glad you like this story. :) I'll try and have the he next chapter up soon. (I'm currently writing a diff story right now.)rnrn

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/09 12:22 am Title: Chapter 10: Challenge

Ooh good chapter! You should reveal Tom being Bluey in the next chapter, or at least in the future, can't wait to read what's coming up next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) I already know when Tom will be revealing to Bill that he is Bluey. I just dont know what comes inbetween. I'm not even sure how long the story will be. So, if might be a while before that happens. I'll TRY and update faster, i cant promise anything.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 10: Challenge

GAH! This is SO not long enough! More? PLEASE?!

Author's Response: I know it isn't that long. I'll try and make the next chapter longer, maybe even twince as long...depends on what's going to happen.

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

OMG

woowish! well im loving this! ur idea rocks! i mean tom a half bird? a cute blue jay? oh god.. ^^
...u know im worried about geo's relationship... coin is leaving soon...*sniffsniff*

Author's Response: Blue jays are cute ^^ Yes poor geo :( BUT i got a plan for that, that your not allowed to know, just yet. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :D

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 10:27 am Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

I LOVE IT!!!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :D :) update will come soon.

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

Love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I AM glad you liked it :D :D , not sure when the next chapter will be up!!!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Tom

You know, I do hope you know I'm kidding?

I really do love this story, but just wish Tom would tear down his walls just a bit. Trust is earned, yes, but if he doesn't give a little, they won't go anywhere.



Author's Response: I am glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Tom

Oh...*sits back and builds a mourning shrine for next button*

Author's Response: ok, you do that.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Tom

:-(

 

next button is missing! bring it back and I'll believe you.



Author's Response: Next button wont be coming for some time. I am busy with my dance...

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

OMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I FRIKEN LOVE IT LOL update plzz

Author's Response: I'll try and update soon. Don't know when though. I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT!!! :D

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Tom

*sniffles* meany

Author's Response: ...i aint no meany...

Reviewer: Moshing_Monster Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

Damn right, you better not kill him. That's like killing Claire or Hiro off of Heroes. You can't kill the main character, cause that just is not fair (and mean).


I thought it was pretty good. You updated quick, and that's always a bonus.

Much much more chapters? Last time you were saying like two or three... what's the change (if any)?

Author's Response: I'm am not sure how many more anymore. I decided to add something that i wont be sharing till i write it. :P And i couldnt kill Bill, that is mean. I agree. :P Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

YOU CANNOT LEAVE THIS CHAPTER THERE!!!!

 



Author's Response: :D I couldn't help it. :P

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 11:23 am Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

Yessssssssssss!!!

Omg for a second i thought bill was dead wooo

and thank god, im glad ur not ending it so soon



Author's Response: I couldn't do that to my readers :P And no, i wasnt planning on killing off Bill, that would have ended the story. lol

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 03:41 am Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

Really?!?! It won't be ending soon?!?! YAY YAY YAY!!XD

Aww, Tomi...XD Hope the two of them will be fine..:O

Author's Response: Nope, not ending. :P Oh, i don't know if they will be fine. ;)

Reviewer: santilove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

more soon please!

Author's Response: I will try and have it up sometime this or next week.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

omg...........plzzzzplzzzzzzzzz upate soooooonnn plzzzzzzzzzz=]

Author's Response: I will try. :P Glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

*hugs you* YES! Best news EVER!!! *Dances* and thank you for not killing Bill

Author's Response: *hugs you back* :P Your welcome. I couldn't be that mean. :P Next one; not sure when it'll be up.

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