Date: 06/19/09 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 12: Asleep
awwwwwwwwwwww so cute
Author's Response: lol, yeh. :) I'll try and update sooner this time. :P
Date: 06/19/09 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 12: Asleep
plzplzplzp update soono..aww let billa and tomi tell eachother..they should kizz=]=] plz update soon thx
Author's Response: lol, I'll try and update sooner this time. You'll see what i have in mind when the chapter is posted. :P
Date: 06/07/09 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: Out
it was awesome!
that was the best way to end the chappie! i mean how tom blacks out at the end carrying bill! geez! thnx god they are out of the fire now! :D
Author's Response: Well, i couldn't leave them in the fire now could I? :P Glad you liked it, i'm not sure when the next chap will be up anymore. I am soo busy and will try and get it up when I'm not. Hopefully you can wait till then. :P
Date: 05/27/09 06:24 am Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
*gasp* Tom!
Author's Response: XD lol
Date: 05/27/09 06:23 am Title: Chapter 11: Out
NNNOOOO!!! THEY HAVE BURNED SKIN!!! NNNOOO! Sorry... I'm just so into this story hehehe
Author's Response: :D Yeh they do have burnt skin. Poor them.
Date: 05/27/09 05:59 am Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
*gasp* Tom!
Author's Response: XD lol
Date: 05/27/09 05:37 am Title: Chapter 3: Moving away
I wonder who the blue bird is... OOOHHH! CHEESE! I love cheese.
Author's Response: You'll find out who the blue bird is. :P
Date: 05/27/09 05:25 am Title: Chapter 2: Meeting Bluey
I see you so you can't hide!! Jk. Anyway... I hate how Bill gets hurt! Damn bullies!!
Author's Response: Yeh, but that`s what bullies do.
Date: 05/27/09 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Tom
Bullies... I hate them. Why does awesome stories have to be rated R?? Love this story by the way!!
Author's Response: There`s reasons to why stories are rated R. lol. I`m glad you love it. :)
Date: 05/26/09 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 11: Out
woooowww love it!! update plzzz!
Author's Response: Gald you love it. :D I'll try and update sooner then before. :P
Date: 05/26/09 12:31 am Title: Chapter 11: Out
That was intense. I really liked it! Glad to see an update:)
Author's Response: Gald you liked it :) I'll try and update sooner this time.
Author's Response: Gald you liked it :) I'll try and update sooner this time.
Author's Response: Gald you liked it :) I'll try and update sooner this time.
Date: 05/25/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 11: Out
awwwww yay they got out! okay update soon, im happy
Author's Response: Yup, i couldnt kill them off. I`m gld you're rnhappy. :P
Date: 05/25/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 11: Out
Oh gosh yeaaaaa they made it!!!!
Author's Response: Yeh they did :D I couldnt kill them off, that would have been mean. :P
Date: 05/25/09 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 11: Out
Aw yay! They made it out alive,! I'm really enjoying the story, ooh! I keep meaning to say, everytime I see a blue jay, I think of this story XD Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Yeh, they did :) I'm glad your enjoying teh story. :) Same, here. Whenever i see a blue jay my story comes to mind. And the fact that i hadn't updated in a while. lol
Date: 05/25/09 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 11: Out
That was amazing. I was so scared they were gonna die. I love how you showed various POVs.
Author's Response: I couldnt kill off the main characters. How mean do you think i am?? :P Yeh, i like putting different POVs. It lets the readers see what the others think about the sitation. I`m glad you liked it. :)
Date: 05/25/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 11: Out
pzlpzl update sooon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: I`ll try and update soon. :) Your welcome.
Date: 05/21/09 01:04 am Title: Chapter 10: Challenge
goood! i missed this storie really *teary* now i really wanna see how they make it thru!
Author's Response: You'll have to wait for the next chappie :P I dont give anything away. :P I`m glad you liked it.
Date: 05/18/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 10: Challenge
ughh suspensseee! update sooon pllz
Author's Response: I'll try and update as soon as i can. :)
Date: 05/18/09 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 10: Challenge
Oh! I can't WAIT for the next chapter! And yeah, it makes perfect sense, being at a loss for what to write. Just give it time, a muse will come. :)
Author's Response: I'l try and have chap 11 up soon. I decided to write another story because i couldnt think of anything good to do with for one. :)
Date: 05/18/09 03:46 am Title: Chapter 10: Challenge
very good!!!!!!!!!
even if I'm barely awake to fully grip what I'm reading, but I'm going to assume that there isn't a bunny in a story. I add in details that arent necessary in the story, in my head.
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Author's Response: lol. That's nice. :P and yeh your right, no bunny appeared in this story XD. I sometimes add in unnecessary details when i'm reading too. Then i re-read it am im like 'oh, i guess i read that wrong.' lol. I'm glad you liked it. :D I'll try and update soon. This one will be updated before the others i have posted.