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Reviewer: rachel1stevens Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

what im one of yours?? your one of mine.. i love this story :DDD and damn xd i still rekon it would of been funny 'Tom? did you know cookies are purple with yellow poca-dots?
tom: Bill.... are you okay?XD

Author's Response: Haha, that would be funny. Though i wouldn't know where the story will end up from there. XD I'm glad you like my story :D:D Thanks for the ... second review. :P

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

I'll take B for 500 Alex.
I wanted to have a temper tantrum when I saw the cliffhanger.
LOL to C, I had accidently chosen that one but I was teeheehee, wrong one.

Author's Response: hehe, the answer is e) btw. :P Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 08:10 am Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

either B or F. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!! :D :D :D

Author's Response: The.Answer.Is e) :P I'll try and update sooner this time, don't know how long it'll take since I'm a bit busy.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

i think B
plz update sooon thx=]

Author's Response: The answer is e), and i'll try to update soon. :)rn

Reviewer: rachel1stevens Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

definatly d :D just for a laugh then tell him he loves him xD hahaha

Author's Response: Omg! sorry. XD Your just one of my favorite authors. :D (thought i should mention that. :P) And the answer is actually e). Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Hani love Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

i dunno... i say it's either a or g... i'm just widening my chances here. i loved the chapter and i'm seriously lovin the story! i hope to read more in the very, very near future (if you don't mind.)

Author's Response: I will try and have a update up soon. Oh, and the answer is actually, e). I'm glad you liked it :) hope you like the rest.

Reviewer: toms muso girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 11:53 am Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

i think he's gunna say he likes tom back

Author's Response: No, Bill will be saying "Tom I... ummm." that would have been e). Thanks for trying though :)

Reviewer: ladysoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 12:04 am Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

e)"Tom I...ummm..." seems like a good choice to me. I picture Bill a little bit shy before announcing that he likes Tom too. I really like this story so far...it's different from alot of the other stories I've read so far...I like different! Was excited to see in my tracked stories that you finally added another chapter...wish it had been a bit longer! Oh well, keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: YOUR RIGHT!! the only one actually. The answer /is/ e). I plan on making Chapter 14 longer then usual. I'm glad that you were excited about my update :P Thanks for review, the next chapter is dedicated to you and the others that guessed correctly.

Reviewer: Kina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

I choose b) "Tom I... I like you too." But I wouldn't just rush them into a relationship... if I were you that is. Haha. And I personally love option d. Sounds like something I would say in a tense atmosphere.

Author's Response: The answer is actually e). I don't want to rush them into a relationship. I didn't know what to put for any more answers so i said what came to mind :P. Is i was to choose b) the story would be going faster then i want it too. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: hatexhurts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

b

Author's Response: Good guess, but the answer is e). :)

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

I think due to the intense way you left it, and the serious tone of it all, I feel option D is the best. It really captures the mood and I think Tom could benefit greatly from Bill informing him of that.

XD On a more serious note, I loved it. I love how Bill's eyes stayed closed, because I would totes do that too.

Author's Response: I would keep my eyes closed too. :P And the answer was e). :P Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

Hmmm....I'm gonna go with B, is it B? It's B isn't? TELL ME ITS B!! *Cries* Ok that was a tad dramatic, but yea...can't wait to read whats next.

Author's Response: I'm sorry, but the answer was...DUH DUH DUH ... e). I'm making the story a lot longer then what i planed. If he says B, it will go faster then i want. I'll /hopefully/ have the next chapter up sooner, it's just that i have been so busy.

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/09 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ranting

lol it doesnt matter woooooot

Author's Response: Glad you happy... XD

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 12: Asleep

awwww it's so sweet. At first I was confused about the parent's manes. So Simone and Jorg & Gordon and Violet, right?

Author's Response: I think thats how it is. .. I forgot myself and had to go back and check what it was. :P But, that sounds about right. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 12: Asleep

Yay! I thought you would never update! I hope the burns are not permanent.

Author's Response: I wasn't going to leave to story like it is without an update. lol. I dont know yet whats going to happen about the burns. I guess i better start thinking. :P

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/09 08:16 am Title: Chapter 12: Asleep

AWESOME JOB!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'll try and update sooner this time. So keep a watch out for Chap 13.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/09 12:28 am Title: Chapter 12: Asleep

awwwww

Author's Response: :) Next update will hopefully come sooner.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 12: Asleep

YAY for Bill being awake! I hope Tom doesn't chicken out and not tell him anything...

Author's Response: lol, You'll have to see if Tom tells him or not. And plus, thats not the only secret he's holding. :P

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/09 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 12: Asleep

I like it, I'm glad they both got alive and that Bill finally woke up!

Author's Response: Yeh, no way was u going to keep him asleep for too long. lol Next update with hopefully come sooner.rn

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/19/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 12: Asleep

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!

*melts and hopes Tom opens up soon*



Author's Response: Oh he will, he will. ^^

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