Date: 05/27/09 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 20 Falling into Temptation partt II
omg!!!
Date: 05/26/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 22 the truth..
AHWWW I WANTED HER TO BE WITH TOM FROM THE BEGINNING.. AND NOW SHE IS!!!!:D more please
Date: 05/26/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 22 the truth..
I think this is the first chapter where there is no fighting and no drama just pure cuteness, I loved it =)
Date: 05/26/09 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 22 the truth..
Awww everything is coming together!.... But what's going on with bill, the slut, and the douchbag?!
Date: 05/24/09 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 21 Explaing.
Naawwl! x3
Date: 05/22/09 01:07 am Title: Chapter 21 Explaing.
ahh nice!! she fucking told that bitch off!!!! nice!! i almost want her to be with tom! hes such a sweetie in this lol
Author's Response: I know! it was about time that Tom was a such a sweet person!!!! :) lol thanks for the review!
Date: 05/21/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 21 Explaing.
Each time you update I wait anxiously for her to finally realize she has feelings for Tom.
Date: 05/21/09 05:57 am Title: Chapter 20 Falling into Temptation partt II
O.o Bill's jealous~~ He doesn't deserve her, Tomi does. :|
Date: 05/20/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 20 Falling into Temptation partt II
What does he mean that SHE'S the whore? When wasnt' it him who left her for someone else?! And technically cheated! I hate it when guys do that, but then again she shouldn't have led Tom on, and I would've turned down the coffee; especially if I knew I had something else planned beforehand.
Love this chapter!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/20/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 20 Falling into Temptation partt II
Wow I can't believe she got them confused...
Date: 05/20/09 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 20 Falling into Temptation partt II
good.. if i was her i would have been like im sorry tom loves me and hes the one who truss me and bla blah blah and i would have TREATED THE FUCK out of him. and he probably would have gotten a hand to the face if he called me a fucking whore. i would take the chance of walking home and i would have called tom and had him come get me. BILL IS A DOUCH! lol love it tho!
Date: 05/12/09 06:29 am Title: Chapter 17. What you don’t know, doesn’t kill you.
OMFG More! o.o
Date: 05/11/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 19 Falling into temptation part I
Oh poor Tom, I wish Maddie would get over Bill and be happy with Tom =)
Date: 05/11/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 19 Falling into temptation part I
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLZ FINISH THIS IS A VERY GUD STORY AND I WILL LUV IT 4 U 2 FINISH IT !!!!!!!! =]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
Date: 05/11/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 19 Falling into temptation part I
im gonna make you feel loved.. but you would be even more loved if u updated.. like NOW!
Date: 05/07/09 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 18 Disaster is inevitable.
Oh poor Tom =(
Date: 05/06/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 18 Disaster is inevitable.
awww I really like the story hope something good will come up for the character specially maddie.... sorry that you had to get tested, it must be really scarry for you... well till your next chapter then.
Date: 05/06/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 18 Disaster is inevitable.
ahhhhhh yay!!!! please dont take so long to update next time!!!! please?! :) i cant wait to read more!!!! UPDATE NAO!!!
Date: 04/16/09 12:25 am Title: Chapter 17. What you don’t know, doesn’t kill you.
I knew it. That amy grrrr.
Date: 04/16/09 12:17 am Title: Chapter 16. Are you ready to move on?
Lol bill and maddie's argument was so funny!