Date: 06/06/15 07:51 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh wow this is heart-breaking :( You really put the emotions across well how they are literally just out of hope and right on the edge... that feeling of absolutely nothing to live for. Really interesting to see about their relationship too and how they kind of overpower their mother, like she can't do anything and doesn't even say anything. Really sad :(
Date: 06/06/15 07:25 pm Title: Prologue
Whaat i'm confused- what did Bill do/where did he go? And ooh Placebo ♥
Date: 11/01/13 12:30 am Title: Chapter Three
AMAZING!!!!!!!
Date: 12/20/11 12:11 am Title: Chapter Four
please update soon? please? I really really really really really really really really really want to know what happens next. im kinda a book worm. please update!
Author's Response: Wow. This isn't a late response or anything, lol. I've just recently (as in /last night/) started attempting to write again. I've started adding an old story I never did justice, so we'll see where that goes and maybe I'll be inspired to continue this one. Thanks for you adamant pleas, lol
Date: 06/13/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Four
oh god you cant leave us with a cliffie like that!!!
poor georg...he's in for a bit of shock isnt he....more soon please this was great!
Fern xx
Author's Response: *giggles* You've noooo idea.... XDDD
Date: 06/09/10 01:01 pm Title: Prologue
Mmmmmkaaaaaay. ^^
I'mma review every chapter. 'Cause I have no life like that. :3
I believe I've told you already that I like this part, so I'mma go ahead and go to the next chapter and schtuffs.
Author's Response: *giggles* Such a dork..
Date: 06/08/10 08:01 am Title: Chapter Four
It's an amazing story.. Really catching, I really hope you're gonna write a new chapter soon! I can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: Well, I can PROMISE that it won't be another six months because I know how the next chapter begins, but it SHOULD be in the next few weeks. Thank you! *hearts*
Date: 06/08/10 01:21 am Title: Chapter Four
I have not read yet, BUT I WILL... I just wanted to thank you first for your acknowledgement! It means so much to me. Thank you!
(Btw, I'm working on that beta submission stuff. Thanks for that too :))
Author's Response: *beams* You're totally welcome. I meant every word I said, babes. Wasn't trying to stroke your ego. You REALLy are amazing, and I think you'd be perfect as a beta. XD
Date: 06/07/10 06:08 pm Title: Prologue
O.O Trying not to cry...
Author's Response: *nuzzles*
Date: 06/07/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Four
finallyyy
Author's Response: *giggles* I'm sorry!!!! Here, you get four segments of my raspberry soul! *doles out and luffles on* You've been with me since the beginning, so you get to be spoiled! *hearts* And it has an actual plot now, and a direction it wants to go.. so.. YAY!! *dances*
Date: 06/07/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter Four
O.O OMG! What happened to bill?? It's getting good.
Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter.. because I already know what's going to happen! *flails with giddiness that this story finally has a plot and WILL NOT DIE*
Date: 06/07/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Four
ee oh god mis -huglovenudseverythings- I love the story really its hauntingly entertaining, its like graphic and bittersweet and just really interesting. the way you portrayed bill and tom was absolutely amazing
Author's Response: *failstackleluffles* Siddeh, you're amazing! *present soul segment on a burgundy platter* It's raspberry flavored! *winks*
Date: 06/06/10 11:29 pm Title: Prologue
godh thisd looks to be so heart breaking!@
Author's Response: *giggles* Thea! *tackleclinglicks* Yes.. tis going to be a tear jerker. Thank you for inspiring me to revise and update this baby, even if you weren't aware that you were responsible. *luffles*
Date: 05/02/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Three
Moreeeeeee.
Author's Response: I hope to find inspiration for this story again soon, seeing as people seem to honestly like it. Cross your fingers!
Date: 05/02/10 07:58 pm Title: Prologue
So... I looked up the song while I read it... and it made me cry. :'[
Author's Response: :0) Made me cry as well a few times as I wrote.
Date: 05/02/10 07:58 pm Title: Prologue
So... I looked up the song while I read it... and it made me cry. :'[
Author's Response: :0) Made me cry as well a few times as I wrote.
Date: 01/18/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Three
I'm still reading this, still loving it (: I wanna know what happens next *-* x
Author's Response: No worries, hon. This story isn't going anywhere. :0) You know about as much as I do about what happens next. Suggestions are MORE than welcome. I'd originally started it so people could review with their suggestions and I'd follow their lead with it, but no one has ever done so. :-/
Date: 01/06/10 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Three
Thanks for the update.
This story is good but so sad
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. :0)
Date: 12/23/09 12:46 pm Title: Chapter Three
MORE!!!!!!
dont leave me hanging like last time!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol, I never intended to!! I won't make any promises, but this story is fun for me again so I'm going to try to get something else out soon. However, since it doesn't have a plot, anything goes. Suggestions are AWESOME!
Date: 12/22/09 10:04 pm Title: Chapter One
;_____;
Author's Response: O_________________O ...is that good or bad?