Date: 04/07/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww... the wildflower bouquet! Tom is so cute :D So adorable when Bill starts crying because he was worried about Tom. AND THEY WERE NAKED TOGETHER BUT NOTHING HAPPENED? WHAT? hehe... just kidding. I really love the innocence of this story and the characters you've developed. The kiss is...yummy :D
Author's Response: I'm glad the innocence got through, because that was what this whole story was revolving around. Innocent first love. Despite the nudity >_<
Date: 04/07/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love the interaction between Bill and Tom. My favorite is when Tom spontaneously invites Bill to his country / palace, or whatever - "You must come with me one day". *squee* that is so cute.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed their interaction. Poor Bill's just a little spazz, isn't he?
Date: 04/07/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hehehe... I love how the boys meet and how flustered Bill is :D It warms my heart and makes me giddy! LOVE IT!
Author's Response: I do love a flustered Bill, as well ^_^
Date: 04/07/10 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I seriously don't understand why this story doesn't have more reviews! It's sooooo good! I really love it. I read the whole thing yesterday but didn't have time to leave reviews on each chapter, so I'm back to do that :D
I really like this opening chapter and how you set everthing up. I have a little place in my heart that would LOVE to see a Benjamin / Gordon story here on THF, but this will have to suffice (even though they don't really do anything) :D
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 03/27/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5
This story? Made of awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/17/09 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
Super cute.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 10/08/09 06:52 am Title: Chapter 5
Awwww.. I truly loved this story. Reminded me a bit (only a teeny tiny bit) of Goose Girl. Have you read it?
I love when Tom tells the King that he cannot marry the princess (before he meets her/him) because he's in love with someone else. That was so adorable. This was such a great story, very cute and sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/13/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was delightful. I have a huge soft spot in my heart for stories where a beautiful boy has to masquerade as a girl, and the other boy falls for him. This was such a sweet twist, with Tom falling for Bill first, then recognizing him instantly in his Sophia get-up.
Happily ever after, right? =D
Author's Response: Oh definitely! I don't do sad endings.
Date: 09/12/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aaaaw. The ending was perfect! I loved it and I admire that it is a different look on Twincest (non-related)
Author's Response: Thank you ^3^
Date: 08/18/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw. I wish I could know what the wedding looked like. Or Bill's dad's reaction.
Author's Response: LOL! So would I! Who knows...
Date: 08/09/09 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
aww thatz soso kute=] y didnt u make a sequel girl=]
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ Maybe one day.
Date: 05/08/09 03:54 am Title: Chapter 5
i love this story~~ ^_^; sweet and touching~ :3 a bit of a cliffhanger though. i don't know what it's missing but it's like i was "aww that's all??" hehe but all in all it was a great story. i loved every unfolding detail ^-^
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^ It is open-ended, I admit. Perhaps, one day...
Date: 03/08/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5
That's so fluffy and sweet. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^
Date: 03/04/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
I still don't understand why Bill was dressing like a girl but I did like the ending. Quite a bit actually.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it despite that ^_^ Thanks for taking the time to comment ^_^
Date: 03/04/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, the kiss was unexpected, didn't see it coming but was pleased.
Author's Response: That's good ^_^ Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 03/04/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
That picture of their fathers sounds ridiculous. No one would ever have allowed something like that to be painted. Wrong era, I'm sorry to say.
And is there an explanation for Bill coming?
Author's Response: I'd have to wonder what era you were referring to, because obviously, those types of pictures exist in many instances throughout history in this world. What's to say it won't in an AU? LOL.
Date: 03/04/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
what was this about David? And why the hell is Bill wearing dresses?
Author's Response: *grins* I'll leave that for you to figure out.
Date: 03/04/09 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was an interesting start, however choppy. It was entertaining and had the tone of a drunk (not sure you wanted it that way though, but I laughed)
Author's Response: Yup. Supposed to sound drunken.
Date: 03/04/09 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww, so sweet ^^
Author's Response: Should put a dental warning there :P Thanks for reading ^_^
Date: 03/04/09 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww such a cute ending!
but I still don't get WHY Bill had to live in disguise... :/
Author's Response: LOL! The condensed version is that Gordon's ex-lover knew he'd never get Gordon for his own (this was way before Bill was born), so he said if Gordon ever had a son, he'd steal him away, just so he'd have a bit of Gordon with him. Gordon never paid this any mind, but when he did get a son (whom he of course, coddled and doted on, knowing how sappy he gets), he became paranoid and afraid that his ex-lover would make good on his promise. Hence, Bill became Sophia to the public. Only a few trusted staff know the truth about his gender. Even his best friend, Benjamin, doesn't know.rnrnGlad you enjoyed reading it, even if it was a little confounding ^_^