Date: 08/16/14 04:08 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
I hope there will be more in this story :)
Date: 09/30/11 02:41 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
this sounds like a good story!!
u really need to add the rest!!
Date: 09/20/11 08:34 am Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
this sounds like a good story!
u should add the rest!
Date: 11/14/10 09:19 am Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
this sounds like a very interesting story so far, sounds like there might be a thick line between love and hate..... update soon!
Date: 11/06/10 05:55 am Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
I like it but... where's the second chaprter? D: I wanna know what happenes Dx Update soon please? :3
Date: 08/16/10 12:22 am Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
Yes! continueeeeee
Date: 06/19/10 09:52 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
you can add as much smut as you want, but unless the whole island catched fire and a plane flies by and radios it in to save them, you will loose readers babe. im only saying this to help you cause i started reading this then the first chapter came out and stuck with you. what you should do is get the boys so in love with each other, that when they are saved, they stay together, then save them. i gave you one scenario, you can use it or think up something else. if you let them just die on that island, there would be no point in writing this story. like i said before, im just trying to help you sugar.
Date: 03/30/10 03:20 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
If you don't...I'll cry, lol. You don't want to make your readers cry do you?! Haha.
Author's Response: nope thats why i updated
Date: 01/06/10 01:06 am Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
this chapter is not so much a filler as you may think. The reader fids out that this is a school trip and that the twins are not related. The Gs are a couple and where this is headed.
Author's Response: ooo ok thank you
Date: 09/21/09 09:45 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
YEAH ME!!!!! Idk I just had this feeling that they were alone.... And I mean there would have to be some sort of other drama on the island.
Author's Response: True true, there would be no point without it lol
Date: 07/28/09 02:36 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
Yay! Ill read it when I get back from Hawaii
Author's Response: Yayy!
Date: 07/28/09 02:23 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
I am and I'll read it asap. I really like that series. Thank you for remembering me! Thanks!
Author's Response: You're welcome.
Date: 06/30/09 05:48 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
okay
i will get right on it :)
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/25/09 03:31 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
ahhhhh Bill reminds me of Kiro!!! ahhhh love it so far!!! :)
Author's Response: i kno!!
Date: 03/02/09 04:57 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
i love this chapter =] i'm looking forward to the second!
Author's Response: thank you im going to try to update by the end of this week rnbut im going to rewrite this chapter put a bit more detail in it rnthank you
Date: 02/24/09 11:14 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
love it ! keep it comin!
Author's Response: thanks im going to try to update tomorow nite
Date: 02/24/09 10:30 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
Okay start. Seems like a good plot and I'll definetly be interested. :) There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes here and there, though.
Author's Response: thank you i plan on updating tomorow night :)
Date: 02/24/09 10:24 pm Title: Getting ready and meeting your partner for the trip.
good start, but i felt it was a little rushed. overall, im looking forward to reading this.
Author's Response:
can you tell me how it was alittle rushed?
thanks im planning on updating tomorow night