Date: 11/01/09 01:39 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
MORE. I WANT MORRRREEEEE!
Date: 09/26/09 07:15 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
caan you update NOW? :)
Date: 09/07/09 11:12 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
haha.
i love this.
too cutee.
Date: 08/06/09 01:21 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
LOVE IT!!!
update girl!!
=D
Date: 07/23/09 08:31 am Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
Honestly. Well, I like the developments - though it was a bit filler-y, but instead of using caps, try bold or italics, they express more than caps.
Type soon (I mean it.)
Date: 07/20/09 05:39 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!
OH MY GOODNESS GRAVY SOCKS!
thats right. gravy socks.
MORE MORE MOREEE !
:D
PLEASEEE ! :D
_Schrei.xx
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :D gravy socks ? xD that made me laugh haha :)
Date: 07/16/09 10:57 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
lol!
bill got a hooker!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 07/05/09 05:21 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
ha ha ha Bill you dumb ass xxx
Date: 07/05/09 05:17 pm Title: Bubbles.
heh heh awesome xxx
Author's Response: thankyou thankyou thankyou for your reviews :D
Date: 07/04/09 01:07 am Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
cute story!!!!
Author's Response: thankyou :]
Date: 07/03/09 07:48 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
Brilliant
loved it
Author's Response: thankyou so much :)
Date: 07/03/09 06:13 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
apart from all of the video tape drama...i'd LOVE to be Mandy. Staying with the hottest twins for 2 weeks would be HEAVEN. great story
Author's Response: haha me too :) thankyou for reviewing :D
Date: 07/03/09 02:57 pm Title: Operation: Take Down Ray.
more please! Tomi kissed her:D:D::D
Author's Response: thankyou for reviewing :D
Date: 06/28/09 10:54 am Title: Bubbles.
Oh, wow. Well, some of it is a little alien to me... What exactly is a body shot? Actually - don't tell, me I don't want to know. And the whole party thing might have been in Greek to me.
But I understand that I don't work like the rest of the teenagers on this planet. So, I'll ignorre the bits that make me squirm.
The rest of the plot, however, is brilliant. It's nicely original, with what seems a good character list. Your Tom and Bill are nicely thought out and and I'm slightly in love with this Tom.
So, on that note, update soon!
Date: 05/17/09 06:18 pm Title: Bubbles.
umm i would like to know when you add some more chapters cause the story was getting good then when i was about to click next it wasn't there lol i know it was kinda dumb.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry haha, i'm actually on a hiatus at the minute because i'm in the middle of my gcse's so it's basically revision revision revision for me ;[ it sucks haha, i will probably be updating about mid-june because my last exam is June 15th. Thankyou so much for reviewing and I'm so glad you like the story :]
Date: 05/05/09 01:35 pm Title: Bubbles.
WHAT! 0.O Oh my gawd!
me'z hearts it! I need more pronto!
Date: 05/05/09 01:35 pm Title: Bubbles.
WHAT! 0.O Oh my gawd!
me'z hearts it! I need more pronto!
Author's Response: thankyou so much (:
Author's Response: thankyou so much (:
Date: 04/14/09 11:57 pm Title: Bubbles.
o-o I really liked it... jsut thought I should mention though that Bill and Tom's names aren't really William and Thomas... they are, indeed, /just/ Bill and Tom. They've said t several times, along with the fact that they have no middle names. Just a note for the future. ^.^
Author's Response: thankyou for reviewing :D and thankyou for the tip, i didn't actually know that hahaa :) kind of glad bills name is just bill :]
Date: 03/21/09 12:25 pm Title: Bubbles.
it`s a fun story hope you can continue it soon...to know what will happen with the twins and amanda....so till your next chapter...take care.
Author's Response: thankyou so much and you too :)
Date: 03/20/09 11:00 pm Title: Bubbles.
i love it
im on the fence with who i'd rather see mandy with
Author's Response: thankyou so much :) and me too i just can't decide who haha xD