Date: 03/31/09 05:36 pm Title: a happy memory
That was so romantic! Oh, happy times!
Date: 03/31/09 05:28 pm Title: Picking up the pieces
Aw, Bill, don't cry...
Date: 03/31/09 03:23 pm Title: Unconditional
Geez, Billa, MY heart hurts, nevermind the heart of this so far unamed female! He obviously needs some help, but so does she, if she actually thinks that the apparent abuse he gives her is worth it...
Author's Response:
AW! i'm sorry lady, but really....thats the kind of repsonse i was looking for, i'm evil, i love to kill my readers, wheather by anurism *overlaughter* or heartbreak....
thank you so so so much for reading, thank you you have no idea how much it means to me! *lots of people won't rea djus tbecaus eits het*
Date: 03/17/09 11:51 am Title: Suicide note
im sorry i havent been there hunnie!!! but my life has been out of hand too!!! its slowly getting better!!! But soon, i'll be on all the time again soon!!! great chappie too btw
Date: 03/13/09 11:41 pm Title: Unconditional
That's the right word yummie lol
Date: 03/13/09 09:13 pm Title: Suicide note
this chapter definetly was scary... i thought bill was going to die!!!!! im soooo glad you didn't kill him! and i like the emotional conflict going on in tatiana, it sounds like something i would do in that situation. hating herself would seem to be the only solution for her, since this only happened after the babies had died, but i love that you actually didnt make it her fault, it was some disease, or whatever, i don't feel like looking up I.E.D. to see if it's real, so i'll find out what it is when you explain it, and it's okay that you decided to bring this chapter out instead of the part two chapter, because i was starting to go crazy without this story, waiting, checking everyday for an update, or something, but this chapter really does fit in, i mean, you did mention a suicide note before, so for me it wasn't completely unexpected, just different from the other chapter. one reason i love this story (even though i've given you sooo many reasons by now) is that you don't really have an order of chapters, so it doesn't matter what chapter comes out next, or whatever, so if you are stuck on a certain chapter, then you can still update by writing a different chapter, i think it's just amazing that i get updates on this story so quickly, i love it!!!
and i definetly hope your stalker issue gets better... stalkers are freaky and crazy... so if you don't update for awhile or whatever because of this situation, it's totally ok.... im scared for you.... DON'T DIE!!!!!!! (i really don't want you to die, so just don't....) but really truly, im gonna think about you and creepy-stalker-person-issue every day, until you say that it's ok.... hope that something good happens to you regarding it!
Author's Response:
goodness! *huggles* i lurv you dreamersalive! your awesome, ye si do have to say that that chapters being in no particular order deffinatly make it easier for me to update, like about 75% easier, lol, cause, i've been mostly stuck on a few of the chapoters i have suedo-written, and being able to post what ever is done, totes works the best!
he *the stalker* hasn't done anyhting illegal yet, but he's been really creeping me out, so i am safe i'm just really uncomfortalbe, and he's been perving on my rofiles, so i really really didn't want him finding htis one.
i do really write this story, just so i can get ur revews ;)
luv YAH!
Date: 03/13/09 08:49 pm Title: Suicide note
wow, i cried. :( thats so sad. poor bill
Author's Response: aw!, ye si know i feel so sad for him, he really i making him self suffer, and trutHfuly he vreally has himself to blame, even if he does have a disorder.
Date: 03/13/09 01:13 pm Title: Falling
Ok good because I love to read about bill all manly oh yea lol
Author's Response: yeah, he's sexy no matter how someone portrays him! lol, but manly is sooo yummi XD
Date: 03/13/09 12:19 pm Title: Ill boding blood
I loved it. It was sad but great.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 03/09/09 05:26 am Title: Used, Worthless, Unwanted: Part one
She really thinks he left her? Maybe he just went to cool down. So nice of Tom to come over. Sad, anyway.
Author's Response:
yes, no worries he hasn't left her, heck he didn't even take his cell phone! yes like most med he just went to cool down, but like most newly weds in thier first fight she assumes that he's left her. its a common thing for newly weds to assume in thier first fights that when the other leaves mid fight/dissagreement that they've elft them.
anyway thank you so much for the review, it means so much XD
Date: 03/08/09 11:32 pm Title: Unconditional
what do you mean by secondary summary? like a summary of what happens, or something else? i can probably do a summary, I'd just have to think about how to phrase it to make your work look as good as it is... if it is a summary, give me a couple days, and i'll be able to give you one... do you want me to email you?
Author's Response:
well, yeah liek a summary, or something, like a review, you always leave such praise for this story and it makes me so happy. you know how sometimes on the back of books after the summary they have another persons view of the story, or how a commentator gives their oppinoion of a movie, somethign like that would be awesome.
yeah email me, i'd love that.
paarthea@gmail.com
Date: 03/08/09 07:49 pm Title: Used, Worthless, Unwanted: Part one
just keep going with it! i want more sweetie!!! lol
Author's Response: thank you sweet cakes!!!! *billa and tomi kisses 4 u!!*
Date: 03/08/09 07:20 pm Title: Used, Worthless, Unwanted: Part one
wow.... i don't know how you do this, manage to keep these chapters coming!!! this was such a good one!!! i'm guessing that the reason bill was harsh with her will come out in time. i can't believe that bill would just suddenly walk out on her, after all that perfection, something must've snapped in him. the way you wrote this makes the reader just... i don't know... feel all the emotions that tatiana is feeling. how you manage to put the emotions in there, is beyond me, but you do the BEST job of having them in your story. it really gets people hooked, with all those emotions just pouring out of your writing. i truly believe that if you changed your writing style to a happy style that i'd be crushed, because for some reason, i'm drawn to the darker stories, like this one. and most of the dark stories aren't the greatest, since it takes a certain kind of talent to pull off this, but yours is just... i really wish my vocabulary was bigger, because i have no way to describe how amazing this story, and your writing in general is. i didn't even notice this chapter was short until you said that it was short. i was too drawn in to the story to notice anything else, since it ended in a perfect spot. i really love that you wrote this story, and that i found it, otherwise, i don't know what i'd do with my life!!!! i feel like this story is progressing in a way that could happen in real life, which is what i love, when an author makes it possible for the readers to imagine, without going too far out there, what this would be like if it happened in the real world. and for the next chapter, just take your time, don't try to force it, just relax and it'll come to you eventually!!! i dont mind waiting a month for the next chapter, as long as it's written the way you want it to be
Author's Response:
oh, oh ,oh, you are just amazing!! i love you to a milion pieces!
i have to say, i had most of this halfwya, pre written, so most of it was only comming up with an ending, now i'm down to one letter *suicide note, i still don't know if the person dies yet or not...* and a few chapter outlines.
i'm really really wanting to write one chapter from bill's point of view, but i almost think i should leave that to the end, to finally clear everythign up.... anyway the next chapter, which is only a few minutes afte rthis one ends will preivew more of Bill's symptoms.
I hope by now *and by the length of your reviews* you know how verymuch your reviews mean to me, i basically write this story for you. i was wondering if you would like to write a secondary summary for this story, i'll plac eit on the banne runder my summary and quote you, but i'd like to promote the story like that, lol, let me know what you think about that.
i promise not to take a month is writing the next chapter, but it might take me a week, :) lots of luv
thea
Date: 03/08/09 05:03 pm Title: Used, Worthless, Unwanted: Part one
:(
bill is being a prick.
love this story, your a great writer
Author's Response:
ye si know, unfortunatly there will be a lot more of prick-Bill, :( i'm still unsire as to how this story will edn i have two endings planned but one is more finished than the other.
thank you so much hun, i do try to write well.
Date: 03/06/09 07:34 pm Title: Falling
i also like bill all manly, great chapter
Author's Response: thank you very much dear!
Date: 03/06/09 09:29 am Title: Falling
that was purly hot... seriously! lmao
Author's Response: AW thank you hun!!!!!! love you!!!!
Date: 03/05/09 11:05 pm Title: Falling
Oh yes! Manly Bill is a turn-on! xDD
WOOO!!! My eyes were glued to the screen.
I read over like 5 times - and still goin.
I love it! - Please Continue with more SOON! I cannot wait!
Author's Response: wow!! you lik eit that Much!!! i'm so glad, so happy XD XD XD !!! i'll do my best to update soon
Date: 03/05/09 06:22 pm Title: Falling
Awww wow that was so cute
Author's Response: thank you! XD XD
Date: 03/05/09 03:27 pm Title: Falling
that was a seriously amazing chapter!!!!! this happy chapter tied in the rest of the story, giving us the background that in some part of our minds we were wanting without realizing it. i love the structure of this whole story, i mean, like the first chapter being near the end, and working our way backwards, until we will reach a chapter which explains all the other chapters. i can tell that this chapter is leading up to that chapter where everything is cleared up. bill all manly was fun to read, and knowing what to call that girl (who is tatiana) is fun to know, even though not knowing her name was perfect for the other chapters, now i know what to call her in my reviews!!! i think that having their relationship blossom over one tour, condensing the long story into one chapter was good of you, i probably wouldn't have read this story if you had this chapter spread over like 3 chapters, and if those three chapters in the beginning of the story rather than the middle, so this is where your awesome structure of the story comes in to help the story be as good as it is. i like that this has all the good qualities from your other chapters in one happy chapter, just goes to show how great of an author you are. im soooo glad that this chapter was up today, i wasn't expecting another chapter until at least saturday, and this one came as a surprise!!
oh, and btw, im happy for you about your puppy!!!! i love puppies!!!! my friend has a shih-zsu (or however you spell it), so i know that they are soooo cute!!!!!!! im sorry about your dog and puppies dying, that's soooo horrible.
Author's Response:
wow thank you so much again dreamersalive!! you reviews i swear are the only thing that keeps me writing right now, i even have like half of the next two chapters half written for you *but only half each* so i'm not sure which one will be up *no particualr order in posting really lol* but it is a sad one up next, iether the first step or the second last step in Bills regressing.
so once again thank you for your review! I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS!!!
Date: 03/04/09 09:50 pm Title: Ill boding blood
nah. not horrible. but wasnt there more? nd sorry i couldn't beta!
Author's Response:
lol, its fine hun, it worked out cause claire did get back to me.
yeah there is more but it doesn't really go with this chapter, its just what i had done, lol