Date: 03/16/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
i don't want a big argument between them! and what happened to bill! keep up the good work and please update again soon!
Date: 03/16/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
WHAT WERE YOU THINKING WHEN YOU STOPPED RIGHT THERE? Ö
I want the next part, now, right now!
You have no idea how much I love this story
and Bushido's an ass, a really big one!
and uhm, about the bruises, Bill has to tell Tom that evening, while Tom's cooking, or after that. But Tom has to make dinner for Bill, because that's cute, and just because he loves him.
And I don't know a topic for an arguement (or how do you write that? -English isn't the language I speak during the day, you see(a)-).
Hmm, that's a hard one... I think they just have to fight about something that has to do something with Bushido. Maybe Tom who is unsure about his future with Dylan and Bill together because of Bushido... I have no idea.
Byeee
and write the next chapter as quick as you can, for me, please (a).
Author's Response: Love the idea of Tom still cooking dinner for Bill. Thank you!
Date: 03/16/10 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! ;D
Date: 03/16/10 11:05 am Title: Chapter 12
I hope he just fell? :(((( I don't want bushido in this story anymore, and I don't think Bill and Tom should have another fight! This story is getting really dramatic .__.
Date: 03/16/10 09:21 am Title: Chapter 12
1)bushido tried to strangle him for sure:O and bill will just cry and be hysterical and Tatiana will have to tell tom what happen:D
2)i don't like arguments but they should fight about whether or not bill will press charges agains bushido(that is if he tried to strangle billxD):P
Date: 03/16/10 07:13 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh, god. Did something happen between Bill and Bushido? I hope not. But it was a great chapter still. :)
Date: 03/16/10 05:46 am Title: Chapter 12
I think Bill should be some what ashamed to tell Tom about the bruises, and when he finally breaks down admit he kissed Bushido but he wanted more and he refused causing Bushido to go into a stage of rage choking him. Crazy...yes, drama...yes, but that's what makes a good story.
Date: 02/10/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
heyho :)
i love this story! really!
hope you'll post a new chapter soon :)
greets b29;
Date: 01/24/10 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love this baby!
Date: 01/21/10 04:01 am Title: Chapter 11
I'm in complete love with this story! The characters are probably my favorite of all the fictions i've read. And this is by far one of my favorite m-preg stories and over all fan fictions i've ever read. Keep on doing what you do best and i'll be sure to review!
Date: 01/18/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
wii i likw
por cierto chikas aki una lectora mexicana
Date: 01/18/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awesome chapter! Write more soon! Live this story!
Date: 01/14/10 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awe so coot! more more!
Date: 01/14/10 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
sure they aree!! i remember the week my sis spend at my place after she gave birth... i guess i was as tired as her from helping her with all the baby stuff... geh... n my nights... goodby to them! since my sis couldnt move i brought the baby to her side everytime he cried... still i luv my nephew! lolz
Date: 01/14/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
awww.. Tom want's Bill to have his baby!! I love this story..:D