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Reviewer: viciouswrappedinsugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 03:46 am Title: Chapter 13

this is too good to worry about starbucks, loved it

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 03:21 am Title: Chapter 13

the story is mostly about tom and bill, i dont think the starbucks part is the most important part right now. i think poor bill and tom have enough to worry about, i dont want them to have a big fight soon, like you asked about in the last chapter. bill better retain custody, thats all i can say! keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: reireixgrr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 03:12 am Title: Chapter 13

No i don't care if it drifts from the starbucks theme, i love the story anyways :D I was soooooo happy when i saw you updated it and i'm still happy because that was a really good chapter. I love that Bill is preggers again, he's such a cute potbelly haha Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 12

I vote #1! Bushido tried to strangle him.

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 10

Why the FREAK would Tom bring Bushido into the picture?

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/10 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aw. Bill's baby looks just like him!

Reviewer: RissaTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

ohhhmygod!!
imscared! lol
love it though!

1) hm.. either... bushido had stragnled him.. or marked him

2) for bill to stop seeing bushido

(:

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm scared!

Reviewer: voldemortsworstenemy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 12

I actually don't think Bill should tell Tom about the marks on his neck. I think Tatiana should say something. Just sayin'.

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/10 01:13 am Title: Chapter 12

holy fuck wat happened!!!

Reviewer: tokioblue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 12

Good story so far...

Reviewer: Destry1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

1 Bushido choked him and hit Tatiana and was holding the baby
2 Bushido trys to get it tomss pants

Reviewer: im_his Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 04:42 am Title: Chapter 12

Bu raped him, with choking and no argument please, meh i know you will anyway so Bill wants to move far away and Tom won't budge . As always your stories are awesome

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 02:48 am Title: Chapter 12

B! Once again, you amaze me. At any rate...I, personally, love the drama. Makes the world go round. Just sayin.

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 02:39 am Title: Chapter 12

Please don't make Tom and Bill fight. Just let Tom tell Bill what he's feeling about Bushido and let them come up with a plan to get rid of him.

If Bushido hurt Bill, then Bill gets a restraining order and gets the courts to stop the visitations.

He needs to marry Tom quickly so that if Bushido starts a custody battle, it's a single guy going up against a stable married couple.

Author's Response: Love the idea of the custody battle idea! Thank you!

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 12:37 am Title: Chapter 12

oh shit!!!!

 

 

to answer #2, no fights. there have been way too many to be realistic. 

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 12

O___O Didn't see that coming! I think Bu ask Bill to come along so he could try to talk him into giving the baby his last name and when Bill said no-Bu was pissed.

Reviewer: RetteMichGegenMeinenWillen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 12

1... i swear to god bushido is going to get dropped kick if his dumbass did this ...*cracks knuckles*

Reviewer: Kenyatta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 12

omg!write more soon!

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 12

OMGT OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OPMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MORE MORE MORE MJORE MORE! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEI WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! DONT KEEP US WAITING A MONTH PLEASE!

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