Date: 03/02/09 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
0.0 This is amazing! =D
and...
1)I'm not quite sure. I think Bill should get a little mad that Tom said that he's the father. Like when Bill goes to see Tom's dad, have tom's dad say somthing about his son being an amazing father or somthing like that and have Bill flip his top. Or somthing like that. hahah
2)ARG! I think that there should be a few people who pick on him, but I also think that there should be a few people that befriend him in his time of need and help him out like standing up for him and stuff.
=]
Date: 02/28/09 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
1) NO FIGHT YET!! they just started, come one!
2)um, they should be understanding, because he's a foriegner!!!!
Date: 02/28/09 11:13 am Title: Chapter 4
Hey, I really like this.
If you still need a beta I'm more than willing to help, just let me know.
Date: 02/27/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
1) they should fight bout.......monkeys!!!!
2) they should....tease him and throw monkeys at him!!!!!! and then some should be nice and throw the monkeys at them!!!! d:)
if u havent noticed i like monkeys....d:)
ME LUVS!!!!!
Date: 02/27/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
1) About the baby...maybe about Tom saying he was the father...FCUK BUSHIDO!! >.<
2) Yep! And then Tom could come to the rescue!! Meeeeeeeeeew!!
Date: 02/27/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
1. they should fight about baby names rather. sounds silly but it's cute? but then again, it can be dramatic fight as well, oh well.
2. school is school. you know how it works. oh well.
Date: 02/27/09 10:12 am Title: Chapter 4
1. I think that they should argue over how to deal with bushido
2. i think that they should not tease him..... for once... but be on his side and support him
UPDATE!
Date: 02/27/09 09:20 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, when Bill goes to his appointment he should find out that Tom told his dad that he's the father, and then get mad at Tom, but they make up in the end.
Maybe you could make Bill be in a high school health class, and then akwardness ensues
Date: 02/27/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Awwww how fucking cuuuute!!!!
1) Bushido or the fact that Tom told his father that he was the father of Bill's baby, but Bill ends up with being okay with it!!!
2) I think that some should tease him and some should be really nice... like; "Bill? Can i touch your stomach" or "Omg! So you really are pregnant?`Wanna be friends? Then we can talk baby stuff!"
Lol, just random ;D
Loved this chappie!
Date: 02/27/09 05:27 am Title: Chapter 4
ooh, an argument this early in the relationship? That could kill them . . .
If they are going to have an argument Tom should tell Bill that he told his father it was his baby.. And then Bill should freak out but then realize how sweet it was and maybe say something like "Do you want to be the baby's father?"
Date: 02/27/09 04:41 am Title: Chapter 4
omg omg omg i lovee it so so so cuteee , made my ict lesson soo much more interesting haha tyyy xxxx.
1. umm they could argue bout Mr whats his namee (dnt like himm grr)
2. probably to make it more realistic :D hope i helped xx
Date: 02/27/09 03:47 am Title: Chapter 4
I happened to like this chapter a lot :]
1) Personally...I'd like to see Bill fight with Tom about Tom saying the baby was his...
2) If you DO do the teasing, keep it light.
Author's Response: Ok. Will do. I like your idea about Tom and Bill fighting about the baby being Tom's. I will write that out soon. Thanks!
Date: 02/26/09 08:24 am Title: Chapter 3
AWWWW! Tom and Bill are in luuuuv! YAY!
Date: 02/25/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
keep it comin!
Date: 02/25/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
more more more more more!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/25/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this story so much! It's totally awesome... can't wait to read more! If you'd like, I would happily beta your story... : : D
Date: 02/25/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh. My. God.
I dunno if I've reviewed this before, but if I haven't, I should have! Seriously. Your M-pregs are insanely, insanely, insanely good and I always sort of squeak whenever I see an update from you! You're an amazing writer, and this is absolutely no exception!
And as for the beta? I'd be more than estatic to do that for you, if you wanted, of course. I love betaing things...so...yeah.
I love this and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 02/25/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
interesting.....
Date: 02/25/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
omfg..i luvz this..BillT is awesome=] update soon plz thx
Date: 02/25/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG Anis is such an ass!! *slaps him*