Date: 06/10/09 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
How could you guys how COULD you?!?!?
Date: 06/10/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Thanks so much for updating, I seriously love this story.
Date: 06/10/09 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
plzplz update like now..aww fix billa and tomi plz=]
Date: 06/07/09 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
:D
what can i say? that this is getting more interesting every chappie u write?! god, now its a dads' fight! never thought of that one b4 just the mom's fight for her grandchild n now wooo! XD gosh keep this up n hello poisoon! :D
Date: 06/03/09 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww poor Bill D: I got a romeo and juliet feeling of this :3
Author's Response: We never thought of that...LOL! I might have to use that! Thanks for that potential idea and for reviewing!
Date: 05/31/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yay! I'm glad you updated this story. keep up the good work, i look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! We're writing chapter 8 as we speak and it should be out shortly!
Date: 05/31/09 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
plzplz update soooon thx
Author's Response: We will! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/31/09 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
I've had similiar arguments with my mom about my house, my rules. Simple, don't live there.
I can't wait to see how Bill stands up to his dad.
Author's Response: Thanks! I believe we all had that fight! Lol! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/31/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh yay!! I was so excited to see an update on this story. I seriously love it.
:)
Author's Response: Thanks! I know it took forever! We promise that updates will come more often!
Date: 05/31/09 09:47 am Title: Chapter 7
aw i love it! update more soon!
Author's Response: We will! Thanks!
Date: 05/30/09 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
This gets better every chapter, I think. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/30/09 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
omg i thought u werent gonna update stupid jorg
Author's Response: I was.... I was just waiting for a co-writer and I found one by the name of Monika! Yay me!!!! Lol!!!! So working with her made it sooooooooooo much easier than by myself..And yes Jorg is acting dumb...but he will come around sooner or later.....Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/30/09 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh god! It was amazing! I loved it so so oh so much! Please write more soon!
Author's Response: We will friend! Thanks for always reviewing! It means a lot to us! Thanks!
Date: 05/30/09 11:58 am Title: Chapter 7
It may have been a long time for you to update, but damn it was a good chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! We tried! Lol! We're writing the next chapter as we speak! It will be up soon! Thanks!
Date: 05/15/09 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome, you're welcome!
Date: 05/14/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
You're welcome, I'll try to be quick with them. I'll be waiting ;)
Author's Response: Ok. I'll going to be writing it soon like after college is out. Next week. I'm waiting on my friend Monika to finish her exams and stuff. Plus I'm writing family portarit and forever right now. I'm going to keep you posted on my progress. Thank you!rn:)
Date: 05/14/09 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome, yes please. ^^
Do you just send it to me on here or to my email? I may be good at spelling but I'm hopeless at this kind of thing. I just wanted to try being a beta you know cause I don't really put any stories up on here.
I actually can't wait, thanks for not taking that the wrong way, i was scared you would XD
Author's Response: I'll send it to your email. I will find it on the site or you can send it to me. Just read it and change grammar and mistakes. I had a beta but she took forever in sending it but she was good. I would love if you beta this for me. If you have any questions email me! I'll be writing the next chapter soon. I'll keep you posted. Thanks again and hope to hear from you!
Date: 05/13/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
This story is good, i really like it but...can I maybe be your beta or something, not that i want to be rude but some of your grammar and spelling is terrible! ^^'
Not to be mean, this story really has potential but the mistakes are holding it back a little...
Just saying, if you do want me to be a beta or anything just tell me what to do 'cause I've never been one before.
Otherwise, keep writing okay? I really like this and I wanna find out what Mr. Ferchichi is gonna do about Tom and everything. ;)
Author's Response: Sure! All you so is read it and make corrections and stuff. I'll be writing the next chapter soon. If you wand I'll send it to you. Thanks for being honest with me! Can't wait to hear from you. Hope it's soon!
Date: 05/11/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really hope you update this story soon! I love it so much!! In reply to a poll you had posted a few chapters ago that I haven't seen happening yet: I think Bill and Tom's first arguments should be over Bushido or about Bill's dad!
Date: 04/26/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love your stories! they r fantastic n got so many hilarious things going on!
i lyk the idea really! more than family portrait! n well, i dont lyk anis, not at all >o< so if he leaves bill alone i will b really happy n what is tomi doing with that fake haired woman?