Date: 02/25/09 10:27 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
I just read all three of these chapters now. I'm almost speechless. I'd like to talk about your writing first, it's wonderful. The dialoague and descriptions are flawless and smooth. I don't feel bored for a single moment. The story line? So original and unique, I love it. Bill's character although deserves all the hatred I can muster is incredible. Tom, well, I just have a feeling his character is going to be incredibly important. Marietta is something completely different, the way she seems to loathe and love Bill at the same time, I'm interested in their past. All in all, this story is fantastic and I can't wait for more. Excellent job!
Date: 02/25/09 10:25 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
bwahaha. i love Marietta, obviously, AND.....Bill is so...just Bill xDD I can't wait for things to unfold ^_^
Date: 02/25/09 10:22 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
Very good story from Misa as usual!
Sounds very interesting and I'm curious to know what will happen. Will Tom join Bill's group or doesn't after what Marietta told him.
And of course Bill will lose his virginity. What a stupid question! ;)
Keep up the good work with all of your stories! :)
xx
Date: 02/25/09 10:22 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
Omigod, more more more!!!! I like Marietta too! :)
Date: 02/25/09 10:17 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
I very much look forward to reading the losing of Kaulitz' virginity. *winkwinknudgenudge*
Anyways, I love this. Srsly. XD
I'll have to try and keep track of it as it's updated. ^^
Date: 02/25/09 10:15 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
I like this one, its to funny...
Date: 02/25/09 10:15 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
i love this x100.000.000.000[:
Date: 02/25/09 10:12 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
God. I dont know of what to say now ... Maybe next chapter will hit my insomniac brain and make it want to be langthy...
Date: 02/25/09 10:11 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
This chapter was very raw with emotion and it actually made my heart clench.
Date: 02/25/09 10:08 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
I love the whole virginity development! It really explains the clique's motivations...plus it's just an interesting tid-bit! Can't wait for more!
Date: 02/25/09 10:07 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
This is getting better and better. xD
Aww Marietta, poor girl.
We'd love to be in his bed too. *wistful*
Date: 02/25/09 12:39 pm Title: For A Single Kiss
O_O
Omgyouhavetoupdatesoon!!!
*cough*
Date: 02/25/09 08:57 am Title: For A Single Kiss
Hope you update really soon ;]
Date: 02/25/09 02:57 am Title: For A Single Kiss
I still think Tomi wants to join. Cause damn kissing Bill would be like heaven :3
XD
Okay, a bit more serious. I think Tomi is disgusted by the idea but somehow he can't really get Bill out of his mind, so he decides that he'll go to the inspection, cause he doesn't think he'll get in anyway. But then he does and he falls in love with Bill. Mohahaha.
Author's Response: Yeah, pretty much. XD You forgot to add that Bill falls in love with Tom, too. And then Andreas is like, "...What...The...Fuck?!" XD
Date: 02/25/09 12:32 am Title: For A Single Kiss
YAY *grins like an idiot* this is awesome... you know, as much as it scares me, i could actually picture this actually happening...
I like Marietta. *nods* oh and btw, i'd do anything for a bit o' tongue from billa ;D
Author's Response: XD Wow, it'd be scary if this actually happened. It's like, Mean Girls multiplied by 1000. XD LOL, wouldn't we all? If it was as simple as breaking someone's nose, we'd all have bandaged faces. XD
Date: 02/24/09 10:39 pm Title: For A Single Kiss
ahahaah, i like marietta too =]
Date: 02/24/09 08:09 pm Title: For A Single Kiss
this story's really cool! it's like, really interesting! although the idea would really never happen in real life (obviously), you make it seem possible with your writing style.
it would seriously suck to be in that school.
Author's Response: I hope it wouldn't happen, but I did have another reviewer tell me this was similar to what her old school was like, and I was like, "O_O" It WOULD suck, unless you were Bill. XD And actually, even being Bill kinda sucks... >.>
Date: 02/24/09 07:30 pm Title: For A Single Kiss
interesting..... wow, this is verrrrry intersting.
Date: 02/24/09 07:09 pm Title: For A Single Kiss
ha,i dont mind what u did with the name it does sound way more professional! i love how you made Simone completely oblivious and tom a great liar xD oh yay Marietta isnt gonna die! i like her too but holy shit she did not deserve to get her face burned! xP thats mean...and wtf? all for a kiss? wow thats insane! ugh, this'll be reeeaaly interesting...
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ Yeah, I suspect Simone's slight airheadedness is what causes Tom's lack of respect for authority, which in turn causes his lack of respect for Bill, which in turn makes Bill like him, which in turn causes them to fall in love, which in turn makes Andreas mad jealous, which in turn brings us to the finale. XD SEE, IT'S ALL SIMONE'S FAULT!!! XD No, she didn't deserve to get her face burned, that's why it's all the more horrifiying. >:D
Date: 02/24/09 04:15 pm Title: For A Single Kiss
I really like the entire story line. The plot, while not exactly original has its entire original twist so it doesn't sound like anything I've read before. I love it, in short, and I'm looking forward to reading more, particularly with regards to Tom's inspection, which sounds quite frightening. I love the way you portray Gustav's stalkeerish mannerisms as well, you had me grinning and cringing at his behaviour. and I love Marietta! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Well, the SETTING isn't original, the plot is, though. I hope. XD Mostly, Bill is the weird/abused/gay/nerdy outcast- type. This is completely different for him. The inspection starts out kinda boring, but then it gets interesting... XD And yeah, I love StalkerGustav, unfortunately I had to hurt him in a later chapter... >.>