Date: 03/10/09 12:20 am Title: Inspection
I. Loved. This. Chapter. The end.
P.S
"This is beyond a 'flair for the dramatic' he thought. This is more like... like... Damn, I don't even have a good sarcastic analogy I can make to compare it to."
I lol'd because that sounds like something I would say xD
Date: 03/10/09 12:06 am Title: The Devil Incarnate
Good chapter, rather short but very good. -reads chapter 4 now-
Date: 03/10/09 12:01 am Title: Inspection
This is getting really interesting, please update soon. I want to know what is happening.
Date: 03/10/09 12:00 am Title: For A Single Kiss
Yeesh, acidic burns on the face. Very good though. -reads on to find out more about psycho!Bill-
Date: 03/09/09 11:53 pm Title: Inspection
wow bill doesnt beat around the bush does he...lol keep it comin
Date: 03/09/09 11:52 pm Title: Welcome To My School
Okay, I'll be honest, I was scared to give this story a shot, but I am SO glad I did. So far so good hun! Keep writing!!!!!!! :D
Date: 03/09/09 11:39 pm Title: Inspection
You are dismissed... (O.o) *snorts* I love this Bill,lol.
Date: 03/09/09 11:38 pm Title: Inspection
Whoa-ho-hoooo!!! Steamy, no? Billa baby is one domineering bitch, and I am LOVING it!! <33 moar soon, please!!!
Date: 03/09/09 11:31 pm Title: Inspection
*dies happily*
keep getting inspired, i'm loving this!!
Date: 03/09/09 11:24 pm Title: Inspection
oooh! Lass mich dein Pirat sein ;) great song!!! I've never heard the English ._. anways =P great chapter! And I know how you feel about not answering all of your reviews. lol can be overwhelming sometimes =P can't wait for the next chap, love!
Date: 03/09/09 11:22 pm Title: Inspection
LMAO! Love the end chapter notes, don't ya just HATE when the Bill and Tom muses bug ya? My Gustav muse is bugging me now.
ANYWAY, I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story, its getting interesting, keep it up!
Author's Response: LOL, I know, they won't shut up, I swear! Yesterday morning my Bill and Tom muses were role playing, and Tom was pretending to be a stalker, and then he came over and poked me (At 5AM, mind you!) and was like, "Write a story about me as a stalker." and I was like, "No! I have too much to work on as it is! It'll have to wait!" And then he kept poking me until I'd at least listen to them role play it for a while. And then, because of that, I had writer's block the rest of the day while writing ch7 of Vicious. I finally kicked it today, but first I was bitching about it to my friend, and I was like, "No wonder I'm having trouble writing this scene. I have a sarcastic, cynical bastard and a sadistic sociopath, and I'm trying to make them cuddle. ._.;" XD It was hysterical. XP
Date: 03/09/09 11:21 pm Title: Inspection
wow.... that was intense!!!!!! i just can't imagine having an inspection like that... how amazing!!!!! the kiss had me in heaven!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 03/09/09 11:14 pm Title: Inspection
ONFG>>>update soon..plz i cant take this..*begs on hands and knees* plzplzplz
Date: 03/09/09 10:55 pm Title: Inspection
Damn, I never EVER review, but this is fucking amazing.
Gawd. You totally nailed the center of the Bill I've always imagined, fucking sexy as hell but cold and calculating. Though still a little scary :)
Amazing, babe. Amazing.
Want a snack? Though I burn everything I TOUCH if I even attempt to cook, I'm pretty sure I can get you some slightly burnt cinnamon rolls for you, dear xD
Wonderful. I'm going to be looking forward to this hell of a story.
Author's Response: Heehee, I'm glad you like my psycho Bill, he's fun to write and oh-so-cuddly. XP Ooh, cinnamon rolls? We'll just scrape the burnt parts off with a knife. XD I'm glad you liked it enough to review, I've read some of your stuff. 7 Days and Nights is awesome. I also read your oneshots Perfume and Circus. They were pretty epic oneshots. The kind of oneshots I wish I could write, I can't write a oneshot to save my life. Imma go read the rest of your oneshots... XP
Date: 03/07/09 12:58 am Title: The Devil Incarnate
This is a very interesting story. I really like, and its something I have never read. Please post more soon. I kinda want to know what happens.
Date: 03/06/09 04:48 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
Dear MisaMisaPepperoniPiza!,
Jesus Christ I miss having a computer.
I'm pissed because your story's have not been featured.
Pissed.
My computer effin almost exploded and I've been writing on paper.
It's been a weel and I half and I've done through two packs of paper. Jesus crist again.
I miss your stories like cocaine, nah.:].
The first thing I did when i logged on on my friend, Nickiee's, Computer was check to see if you had updated this! I was so mad that i had missed seeing this in the recent thing, it always makes my heart skip a beat. Gah, I love it.
Can you explain the whole "Tracked" things... I still don't get it, it's kinda odd to me.
haha.
Well, Imma go because Nickiee's reading over my shoulder and it's kinda freaking me out, hah.
Lovelovelovelove,
Russ!a.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry, I'll update, like, tonight. XD Well, I'm not pissed, I mean, I get disappointed every Friday, but I figure it's only a matter of time now, right? I hope? XD Maybe by the time my birthday rolls around on the 27th, SMRM will get featured. Uh, I don't know, 'tracked' is like... I think it just keeps track of stories you like so you won't have to favorite them. Or something. XD
Date: 03/02/09 01:02 am Title: The Devil Incarnate
I'm reading two stories of you and i have to say that u are an incredible writer, God i love how u write, the way that u describe Bill in this one is just Amazing! Definitely this one goes to my Favs like the other one that i am reading!... Continue soon please!! :D
Date: 02/28/09 09:15 pm Title: The Devil Incarnate
hmm and i wonder who will be taking iT??? *sarcasm* LOL
i loved it!!!
i love the way you've portrayed Bill in this...its kinda different to other secondary school (high school) fics ive read....
love it
more soon please
fern xx
Date: 02/28/09 06:09 am Title: The Devil Incarnate
oh my goodness, i am in love with this story please update soon im hooked xx
Date: 02/27/09 01:36 pm Title: Welcome To My School
I oh-so love ur story so far O_o
That's really amazing. Ur Bill is so unusual, i like that XD
& the fact he's still virgin like he's just waitin 4 Tomi is awww!
However, he seems to be so good in a bed according to Marietta ^^
& Andreas who can just beat a person up for... a simple kiss!!
One thing i just adore is the fact that T&B are neighbours & that they can watch each other through the windows of their bedrooms ;)
& it's a gr8 thing that Tom isn't just an asskisser or sth. He has guts & that's why he's so special 2 Bill i guess :p
I WANT MORE PLZ OR I DIE ^^
(Gonna c more of Marietta?)
Author's Response: Well, he has his reasons for remaining a virgin, and they go deeper than Marietta's explanation. They will be made clear later in the story, though. And yeah, Andreas is a violent psycho. o_0 Yeah, Bill likes Tom 'cause he's not scared of him. Not much more of Marietta until the end of the story, I don't think.