Woooot he got accepted!! *jumps up and down* Oh .. wait, should I be happy about that. LOL.

Owtch!! A pencil, Gusti. Owwwie!!

This is getting better & better with every chapter..

ooh...woah...ive been waiting 4 this 4 so long;...thank u so much=] plz update soon pzlpzl thx so much=]=]..happy early bday..how old??

AHHHH!!!! so AWESOME!!!!! the end just had me squealing for joy!!!!!! HE KISSED TOM'S HAND!!! that was the sexiest thing i've heard of. just kissing his hand made me giggle and scream!!!!!! can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Hand- kissing is sexy and dramatic and WE NEED MORE OF IT. XD I kiss people's hands, when they let me. >.>

Such an awesome chapter and I must admit, Bill does have a flair for the dramatics! So can't wait for another update...the suspense of what will happen next will kill me!

Author's Response: He does. XP I would be like that if I could get away with it... XD

Told you, Bill should always have a cetain showgirl type essence.
It's amazing.
You know you have to update soon or I will hunt you down, which won't be to hard to do!
haha, now, DO IT!.

Author's Response: LOL, I don't remember you telling me that. XD How am I not hard to hunt down? OMG, DO YOU KNOW WHERE I LIVE????

OMG
You are beast.

Gustav was his usual stalkerish self, and Tom was coming to realize that Gustav's actions were not considered odd at this school. If anything, they were quite common, one could even say they were expected. While stalking Kaulitz and his followers outright was severely discouraged, obsessing over them was a common practice, and Tom was mildly surprised that there was no club dedicated to discussing Kaulitz- induced wet dreams. – ha ha this is just funny!

“I think they looked to her as a kind of leader.” Gustav said thoughtfully. “She was the only one who knew the inner workings of Kaulitz's group, and I guess they thought she'd want revenge after what happened.” – OMG you made Gustav talk? Ha ha ha I’m teasing you cause I read your bio. Ha Ha Ha!

Gustav shrugged. “You never know, sometimes you have weird ideas.” – lol, I love that Gustav thinks he’s normal and Tom isn’t.

He rang the bell of the Kaulitz house at 2:57. It took precisely three minutes before the door was opened. – ha ha!

Kaulitz opened the door wide, as if to invite Tom inside, then turned and began to walk up the stairs. Assuming that he was meant to follow, Tom hurried after him, into what he assumed was Kaulitz's bedroom. - *eye roll* Bill is so meh!

Velvet on the walls? Dramatic much?! lol

Tom stared around the room with raised eyebrows. This is beyond a 'flair for the dramatic' he thought. – ha ha

“Yeah,” Tom retorted, a trifle defiantly. “You want to see if I'm good enough to join your little clique.”
Kaulitz smiled slightly. “I see you don't mince words. That's good, it will make this easier.” – lovely right to the point!

And then he was off, pacing back and forth, hands clasped behind his back, explaining the rules that were imposed upon the school under his reign. At first, Tom tried to pay attention, but eventually he simply let himself slide into a state of half- consciousness. – lame I want to know what the rules are!!! *stomps foot* ok tell me the rules I’ll read them all!

He watched the shift of Kaulitz's hair over his shoulders, the flick of his dark eyes as if they emphasized what he was saying, the curving and flexing of his lips as they interacted with his tongue to form the words he spoke. Tom let the enchanting, melodic voice flow over him, losing himself in the sound, if not the meaning.

“Any questions?”
… “Uh, no.”
“Good. Because now you're going to have to actually pay attention to what I'm saying instead of losing yourself in you fantasies about me.” – ha ha *snorts* Bill’s cocky and funny!

Kaulitz's eyebrows shot straight up. “You're pretty fearless, it seems.” He smiled again. “Reminds me of someone else I used to know.” – I wonder if that’s a good thing or a bad thing?

“Jump right into the personal ones, huh? Bisexual.” – nice!!!!

“Of vaginal, anal, and oral sex, what do you have experience with?”
Tom smirked. “All of the above.” – nice! But giving or receiving of the oral and anal? *grins* these are important follow up questions!!! *nods head*

“What the hell are you looking for?” – yeah dude that’s weird!

He took hold of Tom's wrist, extending and examining the arm connected to it. – what is he looking for???

“I play guitar.”
“Oh, really?” Kaulitz actually looked interested for a moment, then went back to his examination. – nice he got Bill interested. *smiles*

Kaulitz suddenly leaned in and pressed his face into the crook of Tom's neck, breathing in deeply. Tom jumped back, taken off- guard by the intimate behavior.
“What the hell are you doing?”
“Testing for scent. Hold on, I'm not finished.”
Tom fidgeted uncomfortably while Kaulitz smelled him, but jerked away again when he felt a warm, wet tongue on his neck.
“Did you just lick me?”
“Yes.” - *giggles* I like this part of the test best! I think he’s just doing it to fuck with him! lol. I don’t think that everyone gets to this part of the test.

“What the fuck are you doing?”
“Examining.” Kaulitz replied, sounding slightly irritated. – oh oh more more bitte *giggles*

“What is the point of this? Why can't you make friends the way normal people do?”
“I am anything but 'normal', Mr. Trumper, and I like to know what I'm getting myself into.”
“Oh really?” Tom sneered. “Well, Mr. Kaulitz, if I like knowing what I'm getting myself into, do I get to examine you?” - *flutter claps* oh oh that sounds like fun!

He reached forward, wrapping his long-fingered hand around the back of Tom's neck, pulling him forward and pressing their lips together. And then Tom discovered why a person would break someone else's nose just for a kiss from Kaulitz. - *grins* so perfect!

Kaulitz smirked. “The inspection is over. You will receive information regarding your status on Monday. You are dismissed.” – he’s so totally in!

“When I was with them, mine were perfect too, and even before I joined, they were damned close. I was at the top of my class, I had my future laid out before me. Now...” Her smile turned sadder. “Now, that's gone. I can turn in work that deserves full marks, and I'll be lucky to get it back with half that. His doing, of course.” – why didn’t she just switch schools? I’m sure there are other schools…and if necessary she could have moved in with an aunt or other family someplace else. *frowns*

He's got the entire school in the palm of his hand, including the staff.”
“How does he manage that?” – yes how does he massage that?

“That... That's Kaulitz's personal insignia. I... I'm sorry, I just hadn't seen it in a while...” She looked away, her face reddening. “He's got a tattoo of it on his right hip.” - *smiles* yes he does.

“Worse. Good ones. Oh, fuck, he's looking over here...” She quickly ducked her head, and Tom noticed everyone in the line of fire also looking away from Kaulitz's table as Kaulitz looked over his shoulder, straight at them.
Tom didn't look away. He stared right into Kaulitz's eyes, his expression mildly curious. Kaulitz's face was expressionless, passive, and the world seemed to fall silent around them. Then Kaulitz smirked and turned back to his table, and the world began to move again.- I love Tom’s reaction to Bill, he treats him like a nobody which is awesome!

“Remember the hierarchy? Andreas and I used to vie for the top seat beside Kaulitz, and I usually won it. Now that I'm out of the picture, he thinks Kaulitz is all his. Andreas adores Kaulitz, and he's determined to be the one to take his virginity.” - *snorts* ok I kind of love that Bill is an evil virgin.

“Apparently he wants to save himself for someone he's in love with. - *giggles and shakes head*

She glanced at Tom, who was staring at her with incredulity. “I know it sounds crazy, but you've never been there. So yeah, he's an arrogant, sadistic, manipulative prick most of the time. But he becomes a different person when he hits those sheets. A gentler, sweeter, more compassionate person you couldn't find. He makes you feel so... treasured. Like you're the most important person in the world to him.” – nice this should make for some really hot sex scenes *grins*

Would you believe that I still have dreams about that asshole?” - yes I would!!!!

“You'd better go, before hanging out with me screws up your chances. Assuming you still want to join, that is.”
Tom watched her for another moment, then stood up to go. – oh so Tom is interested, hum? *nods*

omg pleaseeee post the new chapter soon!!
This fic is absolutely amazing! I think I'm gonna read some of your other fics!
I've read the note you wrote before the first chapter.. now I'm afraid you'll get tired of this story. Don't you dare! XD kidding :P but really this is too good to be left unfinished!