Date: 03/27/09 06:42 pm Title: Challenging Authority
Yesss :D
I love Tom's cheeky little attitude ;) It's awesome.
Date: 03/27/09 05:34 pm Title: Challenging Authority
I love this story a lot. But Bills attitude is extremely annoying. Reminds me of the stupid preps that think that they rule that school. ROFL. Enough about that shit. Yeah very well written and nicely done!
Author's Response: LOL, but in his case he actually DOES run the school. XD Don't worry, he gets better later in the story.
Date: 03/27/09 04:47 pm Title: Challenging Authority
Ohhhhhh daaayyumm!! He'd gunna have a sleep ova' with Bill. Mmm mmm mmmm. Partaaay. Get get get it on you two.
Date: 03/27/09 04:19 pm Title: Challenging Authority
WOOH!
i'm pumped
More more more sexxy vicious bill XD
please?
soon?
Date: 03/27/09 03:52 pm Title: Challenging Authority
ohh bill is so intense...i love it!!!
Oh!!! and.....happy birthday to you...happy birthday to you!!! be glad you couldn't hear me sing cuz I suck :P but whatever...happy b-day!!! :D
Date: 03/27/09 03:23 pm Title: Challenging Authority
WOW, tom really wants to push the limits. but I really like this story so much. this chapter was really good. I just want to read more. please post more soon.
Date: 03/27/09 03:12 pm Title: Challenging Authority
oh my... i need more of this! its the best ever
Date: 03/27/09 03:11 pm Title: Challenging Authority
i'm so addicted to your fic **,
i love bill and tom's character and the story; i wish you updated more often :<
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :D
Date: 03/27/09 03:07 pm Title: Challenging Authority
O____________O I love Bill lol. That was a lot of dialogue xD But that's okay. Can't wait for the next installment! =P
Date: 03/27/09 03:02 pm Title: Challenging Authority
Egad- love this story!!! I can't wait to see what will happen at Bill's house!!! OMG!!! Love this so much! And overly dramatic Bill is so hott!!
Date: 03/27/09 02:29 pm Title: Challenging Authority
uh.... >.< This made my day x2. for yesterday and today. Bill creeped me out this chapter. D: normally he doesnt but he did. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 03/27/09 02:26 pm Title: Challenging Authority
i agree with you overly dramatic is awesome. i can't wait til next chapter, this story is so good.
Date: 03/27/09 02:08 pm Title: Challenging Authority
yay!
and now make them spent a waonderful night in the next chapter ^^
ahahah i love it XD
Date: 03/27/09 01:29 pm Title: Challenging Authority
wow I love it! haha. I can't wait until the next update! I wanna know what happens noowwww haha. Great job! :D
Date: 03/27/09 01:12 pm Title: Challenging Authority
Happy Birthday!!!!
I love watching your Bill and Tom interact, like oil and water...but with an explosion waiting to happen!
Can't wait for more!
Date: 03/27/09 01:05 pm Title: Challenging Authority
wooooow, whats uo now?? :D cant wait till the next chapter :D :D
Date: 03/27/09 12:57 pm Title: Challenging Authority
O M G! OMG! I LOVE THIS FANFIC! It's my drug, don't you dare take much long time to write the next one. :D:D:D:D It's so awesome. i love it!
Date: 03/27/09 12:10 pm Title: Challenging Authority
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Erm... I dunno what you lyk so... *hands you a bag of money* go wild ;D
About the fic... OMG HE'S SPENDIN THE NIGHT WID HIM?!?!?!
*Shakes with antisipation*
Can't wait for the next update!
Hoshi xXx
Date: 03/27/09 12:07 pm Title: Challenging Authority
oh my gawd......this is like one of the best stories i've read in a while ! I was pretty much in a fit of laughter the entire time i was reading this. When i got to the last chapter i was so devastated TT_TT pleease update soon~!
Date: 03/27/09 11:09 am Title: Challenging Authority
“Purple. Your seat rank. We used to use numbers, but Yoko said it would be cuter to use colors, and Bill agreed.” - *snorts* that’s really funny!
A rainbow of insanity. – oh yeah!!!
“James!” Bill said sharply, and James, a quiet, dark- haired boy who Tom thought hadn't been paying attention, suddenly lashed out, striking Andreas hard across the face. Andreas let out a yelp of pain. – woah now that’s control! James knew what he was supposed to do without being told…interesting!
“Maybe the fact that Bill's hardly taken his eyes off you since you sat down?”
Tom glanced over at Bill, who appeared to be talking to the girl on his left, Yoko, but his eyes were on Tom.
“Okay, that's just creepy.” Tom said, turning back to Kayla.
“Creepy?” she hissed back. “Are you kidding? God, how I wish he would look at me like that.” - *giggles* I love the underlying humor of this story! You know how ridiculous this is and you take full advantage of the characters! LOVE it!
“Or I could just ask him.”
She stared at him, wide-eyed. “We don't ask Bill questions.”
“I ask Bill questions.”
She stared at him a moment more, and then smiled. “Ah, I think I know now why Bill let you join.” – Interesting!
Kayla giggled. “No. He's just that awesome.” - lol
“Tom, you are expected at my house this evening.”
Tom raised his eyebrows. 'What if I'm busy?”
“You aren't.”
“How do you know?”
“I don't. But you aren't busy.” - *giggles* I see why Bill likes him he plays outside the box.
“Right, whatever. When do you 'expect' me to go home?” – whatever made him think to ask this question? Hum?
“Tomorrow morning.” - *giggles*
“What if I don't show up at all?”
“That's your choice.” Bill stood up, slinging his bag over his shoulder. “But you will show up, so perhaps not so much a choice.” He smiled at Tom and walked away. – hum?
I can’t wait for more of this story. I love it so much. It makes me giggle all the way through!
Oh Can I be lime green? I want to be better then the twins but not too high up in the ranks.