Date: 05/17/09 08:40 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
... this was magnificently beautiful and marvelous i love how you potrayed tom it's simply amazing
Date: 05/17/09 07:03 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
omg!! I loved that last part :) Bill was like so sweet, and Tomi :) Awwww :) I actually didn't know if I would like this one or not, and at the sixth chapter, I was like, ugh....it's going to be a perfect Bill story, and then this :) and I'm like :) awwww!!! :) so yeah... keep it up :) hehehe, favorite line so far right here
The Devil takes no Sabbath, Tom.
Omg!!! I can totally see Bill saying that so sweety and scarily, and like, omg, so great :)
A moment later he felt a tentative hand slipping around his waist, and the delicate body it belonged to snuggling as close as possible to him...his voice small and sincere, just above a whisper. “Thank you.”
I melted right there :)
Date: 05/17/09 06:58 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
yey! an update!!! finally! *dances* XD
i almost feel sorry for Bill...but i cant help the feeling of something else thats gonna happen....i dunno -__- thats what i love about this fic...it keeps my guessing :)
loved it! more soon pleeeeease??
fern xx
Date: 05/17/09 05:10 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
aww.. bill is slowly letting tom know more about him... please upload another chapter soooooonnnn!!!
Date: 05/17/09 01:14 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Tom's getting there...if he keeps this up, he'll get to know the real Bill in a few months...hopefully...i don't really know...wondering though...hope so...
Author's Response: Actually, I think the entire span of Vicious takes place over 3-4 weeks... And since we're already into Week 2... XD
Date: 05/17/09 06:56 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution
This was one of the most beautiful chapter of a fan fic I've ever read!!!!!
And I mean it, seriously. You can write bill's twisted thoughts and logic in such an amazing way.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. These two would make an amazing couple!!
But hon it's true that we would like the next chapter asap but I don't want my favourite writer to starve because of us XD
Have a nice day!
Date: 05/17/09 03:10 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution
i adore this.. i hope theres more soon-ish *Begs*
Date: 05/17/09 12:50 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution
Bill is despicable, disgusting, vicious, loathsome, and many other things. But, he is also confused, young, and disillusioned. What a mad world, no?
Loved the chapter. It shows that maybe Tom can overcome the negative, and strive for the positive. Wonderful.
Date: 05/16/09 10:49 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
awesome dude, loved it more soon please.
... oooh and I'll check out that fic, thanks for the heads up x
Date: 05/16/09 10:39 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
aww..plzpzlpzlpzlzplzlzp update soooonnn..thx=] i freaking luvz u and thiz=]=]
Date: 05/16/09 09:33 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
dude... i squealed when i saw this was updated... yes, you made me sqeaul like a fangirl.
i love this! your writing is just... gah i can't describe it. really i can't. there are no words comparable with this. except masterpiece.
so, now, i have had my fix, i am happy and now i must close down my computer and study because i have a massive math exam and all this brilliance is distracting me. i bid you farewell until next time. let's see what deprave twisted words you shall tyoe next time friend...
Date: 05/16/09 06:54 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
I was looking for something to read because I needed some serious story inspiration to continue writing. I saw this and the amount of reviews caught my eye. I didn’t know what to expect but as I started reading, I realized I was seriously in love with your writing style. I was talking to RetteLeana as I was reading and she told me to check out SMRM as well so I plan on reading that here soon.
I just wanted to tell you, I’m looking forward to another update soon. This is a wonderful story, really. Keep up the amazing work and I can’t wait to see another chapter soon. :)
I hardly review anymore so sorry for the crappiness of this.
Erika ♥
Date: 05/16/09 06:37 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH!!!! Just sayin'
Date: 05/16/09 06:31 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
awww so sweet
Date: 05/16/09 06:17 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
love it love it:D keep on writing!!
Date: 05/16/09 05:16 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
I'm only reviewing now since i just read all the chapters you have up so far, and OMG!!! I've squealed during every chapter and i must say your work is amazing!! This is beyond fav'ed!!
Date: 05/16/09 05:01 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
This chapter was amazing!!! The dialogue was perfection, and Bill's mental state is so intruiging, I can't wait to for more. Update soon please.
Date: 05/16/09 01:52 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
AW!!! I love how Tom doesn't want to take advantage of the fact that Bill would do stuff in bed for them. He's so sweet. Loving the story. Post more soon
Date: 05/16/09 12:47 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
Bill seems to have a lot of problems, but no one to care about him, it's sad really. Is there a reason why he doesn't trust people or is that just how he is? it's a great story and i'm so glad you updated, i really like this one.
Date: 05/16/09 12:41 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution
YAY! i love this chapter soooo much.