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Reviewer: gero_likia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 09:35 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution

Thank God! *dances* I'm really happy you said "yes" :)))))) I promise I'll do my best to save the charming atmosphere of "Vicious" in my translation.
And of course I plan on posting the "finished product" (it sounds funny, I must admit) in a couple of forums and communities. For example, here - http://www.diary.ru/~sexy-sexy-nice-nice-nice/
This community was created for translations only :) When I post "Vicious" I'll let you know and give you all the links. And I'll translate all the reviews for you :)
Though it won't be happening in near future considering the amount of chapters left...
But! *jumps around* 20 chapters! I'm going to explode with happiness! :)))) 20 chapters of the best fic I've read *purrs*
Hope you won't make me wait for long ^_^
Forever yours,
Gero

Author's Response: YAY, review translation too??? *hearts* LOL, at least you're happy, I was pissed when I realized this story was going to end up twice as long as I wanted it to be. XD I calculated it and was like, "Crap, Vicious is going to be almost as long as Seduce Me, Resist Me! ><" Since I'm a lazy slob, lol, and have never finished a fic IN MY LIFE, except for the 2 oneshots I've written. But then, I don't write a lot of fanfiction, I just started to really get into it last December. XD

Reviewer: jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 11:29 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

It's my birthday today, and you should post the next chapter! :) I just re-read the whole thing for lack of anything else to do, and it's re-vamped my fervor. So, update!!!!! I want to go like, "O NO HE DIDN'T!!!" or "LIEK OMG BILLS SO EVIL!" or something along those lines.

Maybe I'll write a dissertation on why we should both update our stories more often...

Oy....

Author's Response: LOL, happy birthday! Unfortunately, I need to update other stuff, but will a chapter of SMRM do for a birthday present? XD Because Vicious was updated most recently and SMRM has been glaring at me for two months now. XD

Reviewer: gero_likia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 02:27 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

Hello, dear Misa :)

You know, I only read this story yesterday... but I've already:
1) had a dream about it and it's possible plot development;
2) countless times cought myself thinking about what's going on in Bill's head;
3) checked twice if there is a new chapter.
Is this a madness? Or even an addiction?
Well, not that it really matters :)
What matters is that I would LOVE to translate this story in Russian (if you don't mind, of course) when it is complete. I don't want more people to suffer waiting a new chapter like I'm suffering now :)
I really hope you will permit the translation, but the decision is up to you and I'll accept any answer.

Truly yours,
Gero

Author's Response: WOW. This is the first time anyone's ever asked me if they could translate a story of mine. *is flattered* Not that I'd be able to read a word of it, haha. I'd be honored to have you translate it. What would you do with it after translating it? Post it somewhere? I'd love to see the finished product, even if I can't read it. XD Of course, you'll be waiting a while for me to finish, since I'm slow and I think this'll be around 20 chapters. Maybe more, maybe less, I dunno, that was my estimation last I checked. XD

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 12:37 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution

I love the chappies, hehe, I haven't reviewed in a while ^^' I hope you continue soon!! (oh, and a happy belated birthday xD)
xx Chi ^^

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/09 06:47 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution

*giggling in a whisper while bouncing on bed* oooohohohohohohohhooooooohohohooo.... *looks back at computer and moves to click 'next'...then realizes...theres...no...next...* o...crap. i think..i want...MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RWAWR ALL OF YOUR STORIES ARE SO COMPLEX AND ADDICTIVE!!! Why are you soooo goooood??? *whimpers* peaaaaasssss????peasies? fow mehhh?? JUUUSTTTT forty-two more chapters??? LOL jk but PLEASE update soon!! *snifflesniffle*

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/09 06:41 am Title: Challenging Authority

*starts giggling crazily* im pretty sure if anyone saw me right now, i'd be classified as a crazy mental case, cause i can't stop laughing at midnight while i'm alone in my room... o_O or AM I?? My imaginary friends are great excuses x] (SluttyBill & DramaticBill!!)

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/09 06:36 am Title: Damned If You Do, Damned If You Don't

ROFL Gustav reminds me of myself!! His character is so awesome in this one!! Usually he's the shy serious type, but in this one he's a stalker-ish funny type!!!! and Bill's so dramatic its AWESOME!!

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/09 06:32 am Title: Inspection

*smacks you, and kicks bill&tom muse* YAY!!! i shall be your sidekick in viloent happenings... *shneakeh luuk* EEEK i wanna kiss kaulitz!! OMG thats cool -KissKaulitz EEK i wish my username was that is just CLICKS!!!

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/09 06:26 am Title: The Devil Incarnate

i..think...that...i...iz...hoooked...already.....EEEEEEEEKRZ!!

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/09 06:23 am Title: For A Single Kiss

YAY MARIETTAAA!!! hehe she's my new favorite OFC character!!! sosososooo cool!

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/09 06:19 am Title: Welcome To My School

EEEK!!! i wonder how Bill's personality is!!! SO EXCITED MUST REEAADD ONNN!!!

Reviewer: melimoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/09 05:32 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution

OMW thank sooo much for updating i even belive i did a little dance ^^ your story is realy captavating plz continue

Reviewer: jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/09 08:33 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

My face hurts now, I was smiling so hard. THX for updating!!!! :) I go find predict a riot now.

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/19/09 07:06 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

aw i love it! thanks for update finally!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 04:59 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

“I'm sure it was.” Bill turned to walk up the stairs. “Probably several thousand dollars, at least.”
Tom choked. “I hope you realize that I can't afford to buy you presents that cost thousands of dollars.”
“I don't expect you to. That would be ridiculous.” Bill turned the knob and walked into his bedroom. – that’s a very confusing thing. He doesn’t expect it but…there was something more in that then what was said.

Determined to maintain some semblance of control, Tom wrapped his arms around Bill's waist, pulling their bodies closer together. “Is that a real question, or are you just distracting me while you try to get into my pants?”
“Not at all. That's not how the system works, as you'll soon see.” - *squeaks and looks confused*

and quickly began smearing on under- eye concealer. “Uh, no, I'm fine.” – before bed?

But as they say, no rest for the wicked, yes? – I like that song too!

“The Devil takes no Sabbath, Tom.” – to people really say sabboth? I don’t, do others?

Tom stared at Bill, and felt a swirl of emotion curl up through his soul. It felt like a mix of sympathy and nausea, and he took a deep breath, trying not to choke on it. – nice description!

“I think you must be the saddest person I've ever seen.” Tom said softly.
“Sad as in depressed or sad as in pathetic?” Bill's voice verged on apathetic, as if he didn't really care about the answer to his question.
“Sad as in tragic. What a miserable existence yours must be.” Tom replied. Bill cast his eyes downward. - awh

“Come.” He turned away. “Let me taste your carnal side.” - *grins* great line!!!!

Bill stilled for a moment. “What reason would I have have for trusting people?” woops double haves

“Are you always this straightforward with people?”
“Who says I'm being straightforward? I'm merely acting the way I sense you want me to.”
“Why would I want you to act this way?”
“That's not my concern. My concern is merely to be what people want me to be, when they want me to be it.” – oy and this is when I figured out that Tom was getting played.

At this point Tom began to wonder how much of his sympathy was real, and how much of it was a trap that Bill was capturing him in. – yeah! What you said.

“What do we do now?” Tom asked finally. It seemed a silly question, but otherwise nothing would happen.
“We do whatever you want.”
“And after that we do what you want?”
“No. We always do what you want. That's how it works.” - Hum?!

I like how Tom works out with Bill’s reason for being submissive in bed with Bill’s help.

“You're selling yourself.” Tom said quietly.
“Bingo.” Bill whispered, tapping the end of Tom's nose. “Despicable, isn't it? Depraved. Devious. Sexual favors in return for power, can you think of anything more sickening?” – He’s testing Tom.

“Why is it that someone like you,” Tom murmured, gently stroking Bill's hair. “who has the whole world in his hands, needs to seek absolution from someone like me?”
In a flash, the defiant barrier was erected again. “Don't try to read me, Tom. I don't like it.” – oops!

“Then it's a deception. What do you really mean?” – way to question the ultimate authority.

Bill glared at Tom, possibly one of the first true emotions he had yet shown. “Nothing scares me. But that doesn't mean there is nothing I fear.”
“What do you fear?”
“You have no right to ask me that.”
“I have every right. No one said you had to answer.”
“Then I refuse to answer.” – I love that Tom keeps pushing his buttons.

Then he understood: Bill relied on people following predictable patterns. No one dared ask him questions like these, and it screwed up his manipulations. Tom smiled. All he had to do was do things Bill wouldn't expect... – I can’t wait to see what Tom dishes out for Bill!!!!

“Well?” Bill snapped, irritated. “What do you want me to do?”
Tom pulled Bill closer, nuzzling into his hair.
“Nothing.” he said softly. “Just this.”
“Just... this?” Bill's voice trailed off, small and surprised-sounding. - *Giggles*

A moment later he felt a tentative hand slipping around his waist, and the delicate body it belonged to snuggling as close as possible to him. He smiled in the darkness. – ha ha now Tom’s controlling Bill *Grins*

“Thank you.” – I want more. I want to know what in the world is going on in Bill’s head.

Author's Response: Bill's putting on the concealer before bed so Tom won't see his dark circles, but OH WELL, too late, he failed. XD And, in my house, "Sabbath" is actually a fairly well-used word, not that we're really religious, but we mean it in the context "to take a period of rest" And ho craps, double haves, didn't even see that. XD

Reviewer: LoveGaneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 01:24 am Title: Sabbath And Absolution

this is like the most awesomest story[:

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/09 11:43 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

Nice ! its been sooo long but it worth it :P love this story very very much

Reviewer: SpringNicht_Ashley Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/09 11:26 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

AWWWWW!

So, since the beginning I've absolutely loved this story...and I wasn't sure what kind of story it was going to be.

But, honestly, I loved this chapter! Ah! You didn't make Bill this totally sappy lame creature underneath it all, but you did let him show a little bit of emotion.

Definitely worth the wait.

Keep writing awesome installments. ;D

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/09 10:44 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

Ahh! Misa's back!! And with a fabulous chapter!! That Tom is a sly one, but I think it will help Bill, because we all need a break from stuff like that, right?

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/09 09:23 pm Title: Sabbath And Absolution

So Bill's not as big and bad as one would like to think...I like this, I like this alot. I hope you update soon!

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