Date: 08/31/09 10:23 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
dude omg bill is so odd! But i like it! Its different for the normal Bill we see in the other fan fics! Post more soon im dying to see where Bill and Tom end up now this is getting way good! post more soon.
Date: 08/31/09 12:24 am Title: A Change In The Wind
omfg, I was just laughing SO hard at Stalker Gustav! I love it!
Date: 08/26/09 02:09 am Title: Because Someone Had To
That is not sucky at all!!!
Date: 08/25/09 04:32 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
AYE LAIKS IT. VERY MUCHO.
:D *haz 4 more minz* Joo betta get me Crepe's number so that I kan freak him aut next taim.
Iz willz callz joo tunaight.
Aight?
Date: 08/25/09 10:57 am Title: Cryptic Warnings
Loving the HELL outta this fic. :D
Date: 08/25/09 12:57 am Title: Because Someone Had To
Aw. I hope you update soon.
Date: 08/24/09 11:53 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
YAY!!!!
Another chapter!!! God I love your version of Bill... have your read the Hell series? It three parts and it's by Majestrix.... Anyway, can't wait to read more! I'm looking forward to seeing how Bill and Tom turn everything on its head.
Date: 08/24/09 10:07 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
meh its all good :D at least we know this fic isnt dead lol
Date: 08/24/09 04:13 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
Awwwww. Tomi is too good for Bill... but uhm, when i read the dialogue there, i got pretty confused. I think that when you write dialogue you should still put on every sentence (or at least almost all of them) that who is speaking. The people who's mother language is English, surely understand who is talking what, but there is also a lot people who might not understand it all, including me. :)
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry! Well, they usually just go back and forth, but if you still can't tell, then this is one way to keep them apart: Usually, the one who is saying something that makes no fucking sense is Bill, and the one who's like, "That makes no fucking sense" is Tom. XD I'll try to remember to say more often who is speaking, though! XD
Date: 08/24/09 02:33 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
oh i think it was sexeh! i got MY pleasures from it...>_>
Date: 08/24/09 09:59 am Title: Because Someone Had To
finally, something happened between them. I've been waiting for ages! =)) update sooooon?
Date: 08/24/09 03:40 am Title: Because Someone Had To
And for some reason I totally predicted this scene!!!! I just somehow knew that after a few nights of innocent cuddling, Tom was going give a bj to Bill and make him realize what it was like to have someone care for him. I just knew. *psychic powersss* so yeah, I already reviewed, but this chapter totally made me really happy after months of lack of vicious-ness...poo. I also want to tell you that I love your characters. Bill is so complex and amusing and Tom is such a cute little rebel badass!
Date: 08/24/09 03:23 am Title: Because Someone Had To
You know, that whole deep death-related, human nature-contemplating, inevitable fate stuff kind of sounds like an AP English paper I wrote hahaha. Without the horribly pessemistic view, though... Bill has good points, but he's totally missing a huge concept: LOVE!! That's what makes life worth living. Tom can give that to him. He already is. And Bill's so caught up with his power and his universe that he is still blind to the thing he wants the most.. (romance novels under the bed...bahaha! that's great!)
I am basically inlove with this story. Beneath the pscyo-high school drama, you actually convey some really great life lessons!!
And what's with Bill's 'decision'? Is it the decision to abandom his "throne"?
Also I noticed something in the last chapter when the twins were talking about the "two major forces in the situation: Tom and Andi" and that makes me curious because from what I've gathered, Andi doesn't really seem like a threat, more of a stooge following Bill around like a puppy, totally bendable and replacable....but maybe there's more to him than we think?? is HE the one wanting to overthrow Bill's power? SO MANY QUESTIONS.
...need....answers! *caveman grunt*! wonderful story, just wonderful. I'm so hooked it's insane. :]]]]
Date: 08/24/09 01:13 am Title: Because Someone Had To
The smut was better than some I've read, so don't feel too bad about it.
Date: 08/23/09 10:31 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
Haha, "because someone had to," that's excellent. What an understatement.
Date: 08/23/09 08:36 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
It's the cutest blowjob I've ever read. It was so worth the wait!
Date: 08/23/09 06:08 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
ahahaha. i thought this was a witty convo that they had.
Date: 08/23/09 04:20 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
aww im so happy u updated gurl=]=] plzplzplzpzlpzlplzplzplzplz update again SOOON and. of corze my other fav story u must update=] RMSM that might not be right lolz...but u should know the story im talking about lolz=] HURRY GURL=]=]
Date: 08/23/09 03:33 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
Okay, I'm not going to lie, practically their entire conversation had me confused as hell. XD But I'm glad to see Bill having someone like Tom to really be there for him. :)
Looking forward to the next part. :)
Date: 08/23/09 01:10 pm Title: Because Someone Had To
okay I barely understood what they're talking about.. ugh.. -headdesk-
maybe it's just me..
great chapter though!