Date: 04/21/11 10:23 pm Title: Epilogue
Hm, so what was Bill apologizing for?
Date: 04/21/11 09:57 pm Title: Revolt
Could something like this really happen in school? Somehow it doesn't seem possible. Who would try to kill on someone's command?
Author's Response: Of course it couldn't really happen. XD It's fiction for a reason - to have fun with. Lighten up, man. Why'd you keep reading it otherwise? XDDDDD
Date: 04/21/11 09:46 pm Title: Sacrifice
Oh God, is Andreas for real? What was so precious in Bill's virginity? Wasn't he valuable enough when he lost it? So why Andreas didn't try to claim it earlier?
Date: 04/21/11 09:02 pm Title: Happy Endings Are For Fairy Tales
"To be safe... you need to give up your freedom..." Bill stared into Tom's eyes as he spoke, gaining control of his voice so it became steadier. "Haven't I said as such before? He built me an ivory tower, Tom, to protect and imprison me."
Here's a good comment to this:
"He who sacrifices freedom for security deserves neither"
Benjamin Franklin
I can't deny that Bill's behaviour annoys me and I don't like this character. I understand people may lack of personality but it was his decision to become a puppet.
Date: 04/21/11 11:12 am Title: Inspection
I can't understand how Tom could stand this "examination" without laughing. How old are they, 5? It's so childish! Living in this reality I wouldn't admire Bill and his clique, I would laugh at them because they're oh so serious, while in fact they are simply stupid.
Date: 04/17/11 02:33 pm Title: Epilogue
i really enjoy this story...i didnt sleep becoz of this...but im still confused...is it about demon or evil or what?...or is it just about some high-popular group?....can u explain to me about this story?...please...i love ur story...
Date: 04/07/11 01:21 pm Title: Epilogue
I thought it was but somehow also knew it couldn't be him, I didn't wanted it to be Tom, I would cry my eyes out if he were.
Date: 03/20/11 01:15 pm Title: Epilogue
that was a very pretty ending... ~~
Date: 03/15/11 03:10 pm Title: Dream Of A Better Tomorrow
Haha nice poem!XD *cant stop laughing*
*finally stopped laughing 20 minutes laters*
*reads it again*
*still laughing*
Date: 03/13/11 08:31 pm Title: Epilogue
One tip... I saw that you have written a comment on top of every chapter... Try to make some space between the comment and the actual chapter... it gets kind of confusing when you are so into reading and you have to look for the start of the cahpter ;) except for that it was genious =3 good written dude ;)
Author's Response: o.o The skin I use shows a line between the author comments and the chapter text... XD
Date: 02/26/11 10:52 am Title: Epilogue
That story was gorgious.. I really don't know what to say, but it was beautiful.. Thank you!
Date: 02/23/11 05:23 pm Title: Epilogue
OMFG as though i missed the epilogue!!???!!?!?!? 0_0
*holds hand up* i thought he was dead :S
an absolutely thrilling fiction, i loved every chapter and i look forward to reading your future stories
Date: 02/22/11 01:35 am Title: Epilogue
That was absolutely beautiful and so well written. Bravo!
Date: 02/21/11 03:01 pm Title: Epilogue
oh puh-lease, I knew Tom wasn't dead, I would've been pissed if he were. When it first started I thought he was going to Marietta's grave. And then it was Andreas', and I was all "yea, that makes sense". This was a beautifully awesome fic. I must say, I read your profile, and I don't think you give yourself enough credit. You do write awesome fic. I mean, sure you could flesh a little of the background out more. B ut you know you can find something to complain about in ANY fic. Awesome work. I really liked how the twins and James stuck by Bill in the end. IK know James just did it to not side with Andi, but at least he had good friends in the twins, at least thats how I am choosing to see it as opposed to it just being thry knew they were safe in Bill's regime
Date: 02/21/11 01:07 pm Title: Epilogue
Holy Fucking Shit.
Yes, this story kept me on the edge of my seat (actually, bed, because I'm that comfy). Fucking amazing. :D BAJEESUS MY ALMOST MOST FAVOURITE BIRTHDAY GIFT EVER. The feeling it got in me was terrific yet so annoying. And it was only a story. I will surely read more from you. :D
Date: 02/21/11 01:29 am Title: Epilogue
Oh God.....I can't believe it's over. ;'
) Officially THE best story EVER. I loved this, from the beginning all the way to the end, how it kept me on my toes and inspired me to be cleverly devious. ;D Thank you Misa for writing this story! You are truly brilliant! (Though I had to push you to finish it! XDDDDD)
Date: 02/20/11 11:50 pm Title: Epilogue
A great end to a great story! Update SMRM and meat house now! :-)
Date: 02/20/11 07:21 pm Title: Epilogue
I totally thought it was Tom!
Date: 02/20/11 06:08 pm Title: Epilogue
I did! *raising hand awkwardly* :D I love the ending, though. Great fic! Now you have to finish your other fics. :|
Date: 02/20/11 04:28 pm Title: Epilogue
I thought tom was dead and Bill and Mari were going to end up comforting each other lol well done x