Date: 12/30/09 05:55 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
OMG you can not stop at this you HAVE TO continue
Date: 12/16/09 11:15 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
sigh...
You are a too good of a writer!!!
I really muched enjoyed it and I do hope you get to update soon! I'll be waiting ever so not impatiently...
Date: 12/14/09 12:56 am Title: Welcome To My School
Please update this soon? I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Date: 12/10/09 12:41 am Title: Farewell To Ashes
it ends there??????
why does it end
*cry*
Date: 12/04/09 07:22 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
updaaaate!
Date: 11/29/09 05:28 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
It's been far, far too long since you've updated this. Please, PLEASE, for the love of Bill, update this baby!!
Date: 11/29/09 12:19 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
OMG!! If you aren't busy, please, please coniue Vicious!!
Date: 11/23/09 02:34 am Title: Farewell To Ashes
Update? Please! PLEASE! I cant wait anymore for all the next chapter needs to bring!!
So Yea.. I Love this Fic tho.. Its amazing, and I have read thru it twice now.. I am dying for more tho!
Date: 11/19/09 02:22 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
Andreas laughed. “No, Bill. You forget yours. You forget who put you where you are, who keeps you there, and who, ultimately, you owe everything to. You know you’re just a figurehead, Bill. Just the pretty face we put on our merciless regime. You know it and I know it, and we keep it a secret because the system works. But when you start changing the rules, I have to step in and remind you that even you are slave to the Elite.” – oy how will Andreas remind Bill? The same way he reminded him with Marietta?
“Oh no. You are already quite cold-hearted. It is cool-headed that you are not.” – nice! Good line!
“Because if you were to let anyone else take you,” he murmured against Bill’s throat. “I’d kill you.” – Possessive much?
And then, for the first time in a long time, Bill Kaulitz allowed himself to cry. – awh poor bb!
FarewellToAshes: I’m making a bid for freedom in the only way that I can. – bid for freedom? How I’m so not thinking deviously that I don’t even have a clue.
“Maybe because you’re the first person I’ve ever met who really needed me.” – It’s very powerful being needed.
“I want you to make love to me.” – oh well um that’s going to throw off the elite just a whole fucking lot. Wow.
Date: 11/19/09 02:11 pm Title: In A Moment Of Rebellion
“And you are not supposed to lose control of the situation. And Tom is not supposed to rebel against the system. And Bill is not supposed to fall in love. Seems like no one is following the rules these days.” – oy I’d say this is a loss of control on James’ part. Oops.
“You have not noticed, then? It is written all over Bill’s face, in his eyes, when he looks at Tom. Honestly, I would not mind Tom taking your place. But Bill seems prepared to destroy everything, and I should hate to see a good thing go to waste.” – uh-oh Andreas didn’t notice and now he’s being told by James. This will not be good.
“If he is indeed in a fragile state,” he whispered softly, ominously. “Then he will be all the easier to break.” - eeeeeeeeeee
This was wrong. This was against the rules. This was something that had to be stopped. This was... so worth it. – lol
He couldn’t do this. He had to stop it, now, before he lost control...No. Fuck it. He didn’t want to stop it. – lol so funny
“No, Andreas.” Bill tried to sound self-assured. “It was actually a spontaneous action on Tom’s part, not that it’s any of your concern.” – oy I don’t think Bill is that smart. He needed to just go along with it to keep control of Andreas. This is not going to be good.
Andreas never intended to stop and help the kid out. When the bullies jumped him, Andreas meant to just keep on walking. Until he saw the wimpy little kid sock a bully nearly twice his size in the nose, pull out a knife, and dive for him. – lol I’m trying to imagine SchreiBill pulling a knife.
Andreas had built a tower for Bill. A tower that both protected and imprisoned him. – yes, yes very true!
Date: 11/03/09 10:39 pm Title: Welcome To My School
Mooooooooore, please! :D
Date: 10/31/09 03:22 am Title: Farewell To Ashes
I don't know what bill is going 2 do....
but I suggest he and tomi should run of 2 a safe place and have lots and lots of love and sex and fun!!! ^_^
Date: 10/26/09 07:57 am Title: Farewell To Ashes
ooohhhhh...... i cant wait till the nezt chapi :) dnt leave me haning !! :)
Date: 10/13/09 06:23 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
I love it, i hope tom says yes, man i hate cliff hangers but i love this story.
Date: 10/11/09 05:06 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
wow! i..wow! awesomeness :D
Date: 10/10/09 02:06 am Title: Farewell To Ashes
I love it. More than any story I've read so far. Amazing
Date: 10/06/09 08:52 am Title: Farewell To Ashes
oooo yee f*ckin amazing plsssss update sooon
Date: 10/04/09 09:49 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
ah fuck yeaah,i can't wait for the next chapter(:
Date: 10/04/09 12:26 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
It makes me so happy that they've found love in one another :) Bill seems like he's really significantly changed since the first chapter. I would never have expected this from him, but your characterization is magnificent! I'm literally on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter, because I'm sure it will be a great one. ;D
Date: 10/03/09 10:11 pm Title: Farewell To Ashes
what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH snap! tom and ANdi gonna trow down?
"Theres gonna be a wwe smak down in the fan fic story..."