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Reviewer: SapphireVampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 10:50 pm Title: Welcome To My School

I love it. I love, love, love, heart, love, heart, heart, heart, LOVE it!! X3 I love stalker gustav! X3 'It smells like his toothpaste...' XD loved it! I soooooo can't wait for the next chapter! ^^v

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I cracked up when I wrote that line. Glad you love it, since I'm really enjoying writing it! ^_^

Reviewer: Minibar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 10:47 pm Title: Welcome To My School

I'm liking it so far, update soon!!

Author's Response: Okay! Glad you like it so far! ^_^

Reviewer: icansho Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 10:32 pm Title: Welcome To My School

oooh...
Evil bil :D:D
Kinky

Author's Response: LOL, kinky. Yeah, evil Bill is definitely fun~

Reviewer: Karousel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 10:27 pm Title: Welcome To My School

haha i laughed at all the reason you had for making this story but i'm glad that all of that happened you know? oh wow this is amazing, i loved this! it's interesting how you made Bill be completely in charge and how Gustav grovels xD amazing! i cant wait to see what happens since this seems like it has a lot of potential! hn, do u think Bill will sa anything to Tom about living next to him or is he too stuck up?

Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, I wanted something new to work on. It's always a thrill starting a new story... And Gustav isn't the only one, the entire school grovels before Bill, I love it. XD Well, I wouldn't say Bill is too stuck up, (though he probably is, haha) but he's not going to say anything to Tom unless Tom is in his clique, you know?

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:48 pm Title: Welcome To My School

"Gustav eyed the envelope hungrily. “Can I have the envelope when you're done with it?”

“Uh... why?”

Gustav reached for the envelope tentatively. “Kaulitz's tongue was on this...”"

 

*laughs hysterically* Dude, honey, that has to be like, the best Gustav line ever!! Followed by the one about Billa's...erhm Kaulitz's toothpaste. I expect moar. Sooooonnn!! XD



Author's Response: XD LOL, I didn't expect people to find that line so funny! Personally, I was giggling over the toothpaste line, because it's so creepy and stalker-ish. XP But I guess both lines are kinda creepy and stalker-ish, huh? XD

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:47 pm Title: Welcome To My School

Good interesting. DEFINITELY good ;) Bill seems kinda creepy, and I like it, haha.

♥ Joo update soon! :)

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad it was a good interesting! And Bill IS kinda creepy, haha. I'll update soon, don't worry! Though I should update SMRM first... XP

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:32 pm Title: Welcome To My School

mwahahaha!
psico bitchy bill!!
LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad to know you like it~! You had me worried there for a sec... XD

Reviewer: Emeycia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:31 pm Title: Welcome To My School

*_*
Bill with power. I like.

Author's Response: I know. Aren't ya just sick of those high school fics where Bill is the abused outcast? I mean, they're okay, but the idea has been done to death, simply because he looks like outcast- material. Let's make him a power- hungry sociopath, mwahaha. >:3

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:29 pm Title: Welcome To My School

Just going a long and reading trying to break into your world and then Bam!! “Kaulitz's tongue was on this...” lol sooo funny *cracks up*

I love it! It’s a great start. I’m in already! I can’t wait to see what this “inspection” entails and what in the world awaits him there and on Monday?!

Author's Response: XD Yeah, I love that line, and also, “Oh God, it smells like Kaulitz's toothpaste...” because it's so stalker- creepy. XD I'm glad you like it already, and I hope the 'inspection' will be up to your expectations! ^_^rn

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:18 pm Title: Welcome To My School

wow!!! I absolutely drool over bitchy bill and this one is something I look forward to!!! I miss SMRM though but this fixed my slutty bill craving at least..ooohhh...ELITE..*drool*

Author's Response: Hehe, yay! Yes, bitchy Bill is seriously fun. And aw, don't worry, I'll update SMRM soon, okay? ^_^ And yeah, oooh, elite~ *grins*

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:14 pm Title: Welcome To My School

O.O

Author's Response: Um... Thank.. you...? ^_^;

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:02 pm Title: Welcome To My School

wow..thats scary how close this chap is to being like my old school...
keep it comin!

Author's Response: O_O Dude, I would hope this wouldn't be close to ANYONE'S actual school. That's just downright scary. XD

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:02 pm Title: Welcome To My School

Great start. Very interesting. I'm looking forward to reading this.

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you're looking forward to it! ^_^ Personally, I'm looking forward to writing it. XD

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 09:02 pm Title: Welcome To My School

Oh wow..

Author's Response: I'm going to take that as a good wow and not a bad wow, haha. XD

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 08:59 pm Title: Welcome To My School

*_* interesting...

Author's Response: ._.; Uh, 'good' interesting or 'bad' interesting?

Reviewer: dreamersalive414 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 08:54 pm Title: Welcome To My School

oooooooo... i like this!!!!!! please keep going!!!!!! it's interesting!! i love this whole beautiful clique idea, although it's somewhat mean, it's rather an interesting thought

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! There were originally going to be 6 cliques, and Bill's was the one based on beauty, but... The other 5 kinda evaporated, and I decided it was better this way.

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 08:52 pm Title: Welcome To My School

This story immediately caught my interest! I really can't wait to see how this will go!

Author's Response: I LOVE YOU! *hugs* So glad it caught your interest, I hope it keeps it! You comment makes me so happy~ ^_^

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 08:52 pm Title: Welcome To My School

oooo, this is such an out of this world fanfic. got me totally interested. great first chapter, now im hooked ;)

Author's Response: Yay, thank you so much! Out of this world at only one chapter? XD That's pretty amazing, thanks!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/09 08:46 pm Title: Welcome To My School

bwahahahahahaha. you KNEW I was gonna love this, so yea >.> I can't wait for the drama to start bwahahaha...btw, ily ^_^

Author's Response: Yay for drama... And smut! XP Smut comes, because I want some for this story... XD Though nothing too terrible, not at first, anyway... 'Cause Bill is technically a virgin in this story... Well, for a while... >.>

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