hng… yeah, that’s pretty much all that came out of my mouth as I read this. You know that weird feeling where something is so good and your eyes are popping out so much that you sort of swallow your words? Yup, that’s the hng noise, and that was all the sound I could make!

And I actually had to stretch at the beginning of this because it sounded so good when Tom did it. Kinda like yawning, very contagious.

Loved the comparison between the bus and the plane, easy to imagine

Good goddess…I could pretty much feel that tug in my own stomach. You sometimes write too good, you know, cause my body seems to believe that I’m the one feeling all these things

Oh…OO…~ “Tomi…have you fallen for me?” ~ I don’t think I’ve ever read something so cute as this part…the butterflies are tingling

Tom is so adorable ^^ and Bill is evil ,p but in a good way!

~ “Roll over,” he ordered. ~ I’m getting the feeling you’re gonna be owing me a new pair of panties by the end of this. Dominant Tomi…I think the butterflies are trying to come out through my bellybutton!

The massage…I’m getting a head full of Bill’s candygasm noises

lol ^^ lucky mattress indeed

~ “Mmm, that was better than…everything,” ~ I will have to agree! The butterflies have fainted by the way.

LOL oh goddess, what a way to ruin the mood Bill xD nice that you wrote in that rumor thing, makes it so very realistic

Tom will have herpes for Bill, how romantic ^^

For some reason I find Tom saying ‘shush’ extremely adorable!

Yup, you sent my butterflies to the hospital and me face first into my computer screen! Amazingly done! and I love you for it ,)

Author's Response: lol you are completely adorable ♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you so much ^___^

♥ amazinggggg haylzeeee, as always :D :D

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