Date: 09/29/24 11:43 pm Title: Lolita Lime
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 11/23/09 05:52 am Title: Lolita Lime
That was once an Innocent story
What happened?
Well... Is it messed up that I like this one more??
I think that'd be a great idea!
Shame you posted this, like, ages ago and that idea has probably been dismissed from your mind, but the thought of fucked up innocent stories sound good ;D
I loved it
xx
Author's Response: I still really want to do a fairy tale story thing xD Buuuuut, it'll take a while ~
Date: 11/21/09 07:12 am Title: Lolita Lime
sadistic bill is.. strangely sweet to read. well damn. i'm just as messed up for saying that, huh?
Author's Response: He just chopped someone up x) Very 'sweet'
Date: 10/27/09 04:56 am Title: Lolita Lime
ooooh, these are all so good!
please do a oneshot dark faery tale series, that would be the awesomest!
amazing writing.
Author's Response: Yay, I shall :)
Date: 04/02/09 11:30 am Title: Lolita Lime
wow! that was good but rly sickining lol
Author's Response: Haha, thanks...? :)
Date: 03/21/09 07:51 pm Title: Lolita Lime
You're sick... I love you.
Author's Response: Thank you, dear :)
Date: 02/27/09 08:53 pm Title: Lolita Lime
i love it
&& i think you should do fairy tale remakes
it kind of surprises me how you're able to turn such a story into such... Bill and Tom awesomeness
this is totally getting favorited
I was thinking of what I'd do if I came across a house like this
it'd be delicious
though not as delicious as your stories!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ahh, you're amazing :) Nowadays, teenagers would eat the whole damn house, kick down the little lawn knomes outside of it, and laugh as a pretty lady threatens to enslave them and eat them xD Hah. Yay! Favorite!
Date: 02/22/09 11:50 pm Title: Lolita Lime
ha...well i say if that is his hair then we have to get used to it (and wait a year for it to grow out) but oh god you noticed the weird hat thing too? that is so not him, AND he is wearing boots, Tom doesnt wear worker boots! sheesh..and their noses look HUGE! i dont think its them...>
Author's Response: I seriously hope not. I was like "AHH NO WAY!" They totally just sold out their style if it was real. I guess I'd still be happy.. but I'd be a little dissapointed on the inside. I mean, COME ON! Sighh.
Date: 02/22/09 11:38 pm Title: Lolita Lime
Definitely pursue that series/chaptered story of oneshot stories!
I think that'll be brilliant!
FAVORITE AUTHOR EVAR + FAIRY TALES + MACABRE = HEAVEN
I like this story!!
I think it's GENIUS!
MORE SOOOOOOOOON!!
please?
Author's Response: You're just too amazing as a reviewer :)Ahh, I HEART YOU! I'll write more oneshots like that, then I'll stream it together to make a series. I don't think every oneshot horror after I write this will be a gruelsome fairy tale, but some will! I just hope you like it :)
Date: 02/22/09 10:28 pm Title: Lolita Lime
I absolutly love your freaky-ass stories! x3
I'm not sure how you could "dissapoint" people but I guess if they have no taste...
Either way, I would totally Favorite you as an author if I knew how to do so! lol.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm starting to realize that my horror stories aren't as popular as they once were. I have no idea how ._. I guess my writing has gone worse? Hmm. Oh, and to add author to favs, just click on the lil button right above where you reviewed this story, and then you can write a comment about the author, then you just hit submit :)
Date: 02/22/09 07:36 pm Title: Lolita Lime
yay for 101 xD haha yeah they do have schools for journalism and photography and yesh theyre mega uber expensive o_o but omgsh Foreign exchange would be so fun but my parents wont let me :/ o__o omgsh! check tokiohotelrocks.com and look at the article about Bill and Tom getting new cars and how supposively...BILLS HAIR IS SHORT! it's like as short as mine! look @ the pic, idk if that's them or not...
Author's Response: OMG THE HAIR o.o I don't really like him with short hair though, I think his long hair is kinda his 'signature' look xD And what about Tom's little hat thing? It doesn't look... Tom-ish. I personally don't think it's real-- but it might be xD What do you think?
Date: 02/22/09 11:48 am Title: Lolita Lime
your stories are always so lovely.
I don't know why, but I thought of the mom from Coraline with the buttons on her eyes.
I really don't know why.
The black haired boy giggled and waltzed over towards the dread head, getting on his tippy toes and giving him a kiss that blew Tom’s mind.
“I was bored,” he whispered, biting down on Tom’s bottom lip.
Tom groaned.
“Fuck… yeah.”
^ heehee yay! x)
Author's Response: I still haven't seen Coraline, but I REALLY need to, because it looks amazing ._. Hah. When I read the little skipplet from my story, I was like "I really wrote that?" Cuz I don't even remember xD Time management sucks for me :)
Date: 02/22/09 06:25 am Title: Lolita Lime
more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: xD
Date: 02/22/09 05:17 am Title: Lolita Lime
Holy fuck. This was fucking awesome.
The most creative thing I've seen written here.
Seriously, my mind is blown right now!
And I loved the revenge ending...Revenge is my best friend haha.
On side note, I totally love the idea of remaking the fairy tales in to sick and twisted stories. GENIUS!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I'm glad you like it xD Revenge is my middle name-- well, I guess we're best friends then :) Ahh~ so you like that series idea,ehh? Woo! Maybe I'll do it :)
Date: 02/22/09 05:00 am Title: Lolita Lime
I love you so, so, much!!!!!!
This is kind of too awesome for words!!!! You should absolutely without doubt make a series of these ^^
Author's Response: Ahh, I am SO ready to do that. o.o But I've never made a series before, so I dunno how it's going to work! I love you too, darling :)
Date: 02/22/09 04:22 am Title: Lolita Lime
omgsh i know right? it's amazing that we met, like out of everyone we could have talked to we talked to each other and bang, instant connection, it's so cool! ha, i would soo do that too because it sounds amazing and hella fun!
Author's Response: BAM! BANG! Instant connection 101! :) Do they have schools like that for Journalism and Photography? If there is, it's prolly really expensive xD I wish I can go to a private school or a boarding school outside of the U.S, but my parents think it's too expensive. Foregin Exchange progs sound like fun too :)
Date: 02/22/09 03:56 am Title: Lolita Lime
haha yay for hype! xD and yay for so many names! we're just amazing bestfriend people y'know? yeah a nice OFC!, Im basing her off a person i know...i just dont know what to make her do at the school. hypatheical question: if u went to journalism/photography school what would u do?
Author's Response: Of course we are :) I can't believe we'd have so much in common~ Hmm, if I was in journalism/photography, I'd write tons and take millions of pictures of course! Actually, I'd make friends with really cute boys and just make them my models, taking them around town to the most dirty, scary places and take pictures of them there, because they'll make the place look FIERCE. Also, if there was a newspaper, I'd totally do reviews for the latest books or movies :)
Date: 02/22/09 02:56 am Title: Lolita Lime
haha i know right? it's like an interesting people/friend/twin telepathy or something! ur like my long lost twin/ best friend seriously! it's going alright, Bill just met his roommate which i made Georg and he'll probably meet Gustav next. oh! and i have another female character but she's a good girl, not a bitch like Jen :)
Author's Response: Oh, yay! I hope you release your story soon! I wanna read it so bad! Hah, Long lost twin/best friend/ person/ friendly/ etc xD We have so many names! Woo~ NICE OFC?! Those are really fun too :) Some of them don't really work out well, but I know you'll make yours great!
Date: 02/22/09 02:19 am Title: Lolita Lime
aww, you dont need to give me any credit for talking to you, you're my friend and one of the most interesting people to talk to that i know :) yes, go Bill :) he's just so amazing like that XD
Author's Response: Woo, I'm happy that I'm interesting xD You are too, dear. What can I say? Interesting people meet other interesting people. :) How's your story going?
Date: 02/22/09 02:08 am Title: Lolita Lime
I loved this. I have a thing for creepy twists on fairy tales, so this was just perfect for me. And the fact that Bill was a little crazy just made it even better! Actually, I love all your stories. Their all so dark, and yet at the same time they can make me smile and laugh. I would love a series or chaptered story full of common fairy tales turned dark. I usually just lurk on sites, so I hope this wasn't to bad of a review >.
Author's Response: Are you kidding me?! Your review rocks! Ahh, I'm glad you like it! :) I have a sick obsession with making the lightest things dark and sinister also, it's just fun xD I'm happy that you read more of my stories! You're freaking amazing x)