Date: 03/30/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Oh snap... that is not good lol And just when it was getting cute! Haha oh and by the way, there are a few titchy grammar/spelling errors here and there. If you want, I can beta for you. =D Excited for next chappy!
Author's Response: There are!? Where!? Well, maybe that's what I get for having such an aged beta? She looked over it, but I guess that old age thing. . .? You'd really like to beta this?
Date: 03/30/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter Eight
*gasp* the shit had hittith the fan.. ith... yeaaaaaaaaaaaah. wow this is going to get odd here in the next few chapters but i'm so stoked about it all. I nearly squeed in my pants when i saw the update! Keep up the fabulous work and I hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Aahaha that cracked me up. Hittith the fan...ith. I really hope it's odd in a good way and no one hates me . .. and please don't squee in your pants O.O
Date: 03/30/09 10:58 am Title: Chapter Eight
Oh yeah, so this is 'the storm'? :P Sooo...Yay, it's great, again, like everytime ;) You ARE amazing, you know? So pleeease give me next chapter as soon as possible :)
Author's Response: *Grins* Yes, this be the storm. You are going to give me a big head, telling me how great I am all the time,.....keep it up! XD
Date: 03/30/09 09:38 am Title: Chapter Eight
OMG!!! Super cliff hanger!!! UGH! This could be so so so bad!!! update!
Author's Response: I feel special. Not everyone gets SUPER cliff hanger....
Date: 03/30/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter Eight
I was hoping that Bill would get a child ;) But that doesn't matter, I will keep reading. I like mpreg but I think there are so many who doesn't ;)
This is interesting! I can't wait to see how Tom will react to Bill when he finds out about him.
This is different and I always wait for the new chapter. Hope to get that soon :)
xx
Author's Response: I think you might like what I have in store. I, too, like mpreg, but if it's written well. I mean, no one (who's carrying one child) gets a baby bump at 2-3 months. You start showing at 4. Things like that bug me, so I don't read alot of them for that reason. Anyways, thank you so much for following this story so far!
Date: 03/30/09 02:38 am Title: Chapter Eight
oh noes!! 0_____________0;; but.. Bill and Tom were getting along soo nicely.. D: and now.. omg.. i really hope they don't expose his secret..(that fast?) Hopefully it will be Bill who is going to Tom about his gender.. D:
Author's Response: They were getting along, weren't they? I blame Godiva for it all
Date: 03/30/09 01:29 am Title: Chapter Eight
uh oh.... *waits for more* XD
Author's Response: Do you think now would be an appropriate time to play Jaws music?
Date: 03/30/09 01:06 am Title: Chapter Eight
ooh plz update sooooonnn th x so much=-]
Date: 03/29/09 01:22 pm Title: Prologue One: Modern Day Berlin
I know I've told you before, but I think this fic is awesome. I always look forward to another chapter. It's just so original. However I really really hope this doesn't turn into an mpreg. I can't stand mpreg. Of course, even if it does I'll still keep on reading. This is just too good to give up. Anyway, just wanted to let you know that you're doing an amazing job so far and that I can't wait for more. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much. As for mpreg, well, between us, I will say that Bill will not deliver a child. I'm so pleased that you like it that much. *much hugs*
Date: 03/29/09 05:04 am Title: Chapter Seven
Oh god:) It's so sweet:)
Author's Response: It's always calm and sweet before the storm, my friend XD
Date: 03/28/09 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Seven
U should write it all together now. Make it a billion words long. Write sequals. Do something. It's a baller story!
Author's Response: *laughs* If I could stay awake long enough to write this, and not get distracted by pretty shiney things, I would so write it all. As for a billion words...Isn't that a little much? and sequelS!? How aboutwe just finish this one first XD I love your enthusiasm over it though!
Date: 03/28/09 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I'm not sure if I wrote a review before? Well, I have been following this story from the beginning and it's very interesting.
They kissed! They kissed! Can't wait to see where this is going! :)
Will there be a mpreg? ;)
xx
Author's Response: No, you haven't reviewed before I'm pretty sure. Thank you so much for taking the time to. And yes! They did kiss. As for mpreg, well keep reading and you will see XD
Date: 03/28/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Seven
awwe that girl was so nice to bill, for some reason i really like her and the story is not even about her???i know i'm stupid=DDDD
and yay you updated, i missed you=(
*dancesFfinally tom showed some feelings toward "lady billa*-teehee-
and don't worry when i asked for bill/tom action i didn't meant sex, just some cuddles you know???!!!
DAMN i would've shit my pants when tom was talking about his tought side, i mean he has to tell tom the true eventually right? imagine toms reaction but then again he'll be too deeply in love then to care right???i hope so=DDD
HENS????LMAO
he's so funny=DD
i hope you update soon again=DDD
Author's Response: XD want in on a little secret? I totally wrote myself and some friends in it. I'm Hannah (named in honour of Hannah Howell), my friend Kaylee is Cloelia, my best friend Kara is Kara (I left the name cos its a Norse name), and my other bud Katie is Lorelei (who hasn't shown up yet) so SHH tell no one. But now you know why you love Hannah XD You love me XD I missed you too, and while I was gone, I wrote a huge new chappie for you. And oh Tomi's gonna learn the truth soon....dun dun dunnnnn...
Date: 03/27/09 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Yes the kiss was wonderful but I'm still waiting for the freak out moment w/ Tom. Bill should probably tell him at a point in time when he's not armed. And perhaps chained to a wall...
Author's Response: Haha. Chained to a wall. Don't worry, next chapter is huge. And I think the chappie after that might be the freak out one.
Date: 03/27/09 10:25 pm Title: Chapter Seven
MORE!!! GAH!!! It's soo good!!! >.
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Date: 03/27/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Aaaaaawwww.... exciting. Also like the fact that Tom's lack of surprise was explained. Update soon please!
Author's Response: I finally found a place to stuff it in. I'm glad you liked
Date: 03/27/09 06:36 pm Title: Prologue One: Modern Day Berlin
THANK GOD!!!!! DANKE DANKE DANKE
I cannot express how happy I am that you updated! *hugs* I am total sucker for period pieces. Loved this chapter please continue! :)
Author's Response: WEEE! *hugs back* Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! and aren't we all suckers for it?
Date: 03/27/09 06:32 am Title: Chapter Seven
except he's not really a lady.....
Author's Response: no, no he isn't
Date: 03/27/09 06:21 am Title: Chapter Seven
YAAAY!!! Kissykissykissykissykissykissykissykissy *faints from lack of breath* I needed some fluffy fluff right now, so thanks. Still, I'm worried about Bill's manly parts...
Anywaaaay, I'm sure you'll make it alright for us, right? Because I love this too much to be forced to kill you if you make poor Bill or Tom unhappy for too long.
So, thanks for the chappie, thanks for the kiss and keep it coming. I luvs it.
Author's Response: Of course I'll make it alright. I only write happy endings XD And your welcome for it all, though it makes it sound like YOU were the one who got the kiss *giggles*
Date: 03/27/09 03:44 am Title: Chapter Seven
*Squee* they smoochied indeed! *Dances around* I really like the bar wench... she makes me happeh! I get more and more nervous the longer bill keeps his little secret though... makes me soo soo nervous... poor thing. I really like that twist though so you keep it up! I love you! XD
Author's Response: Yes! Hannah is awesome. As for his secret, well, read the next chapter