Date: 06/25/09 10:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I'm crying so hard. why did you have to kill the baby i wanted him to live so badly. can you please give them a healthy pretty baby. they deserve some happinnes
Author's Response: *hugs tight and offers kleenex* I can promise you a healthy child is not fully out of the equation yet *smiles*
Date: 06/25/09 07:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Nooooo how could you kill the baby! :O I did not see that coming D': Poor Bill, poor Tom...
*cries*
Poor baby...
*cries again*
hmm maybe I should say something positive now... Tom looks really hot ^^ but... the baby D: *cries AGAIN*
Author's Response: I'm glad you think he's hot. I'm in love with the vesty thing he wears. But yeah, the baby, unfortunately, has died. *huggles*
Date: 06/25/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I didn't cry but I'm so sad right now. How I had a feeling that it was too good to be true that Billa was pregnant. I hope this won't come between him and Tom. That they can still be happy even if Billa can't get children.
xx
Author's Response: *Frowns. Grabs a pointy stick and jabs you repeatedly* Cry! *shakes fist* XD Just kidding. Anyways, yeah, there will be a happy ending. All I'm gonna say.
Date: 06/25/09 02:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty
NO! i wanted them to have a bay. please let them have a baby.
Author's Response: Babies aren't totally out of the equation yet, don't worry.
Date: 06/25/09 02:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty
ooooh -sniffles- damn you, but i knew it was happening, only thing is Bill has to know that he was poisoning the baby, its not cause he can't sustain life its becuas ehe as using the lead!!! he has to find out! most peple know lea dis bad, someone should tell him the makeup is lead....and i could go on but i won't
girl you have me addicted.
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think Bill has realized yet what his make-up is made of. Otherwise, I'm sure he'd have gone around naked-faced. XD I'm glad you're addicted.
Date: 06/25/09 02:04 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I was really wantung Bill to have the baby. Oh well, this was a very emotional chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I tried really hard on this one.
Date: 06/25/09 01:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Oh god... that was... that was torture! As soon as Bill started getting pain while riding, I was like, "Oh no." Damn, that friggin sucks. I cried. I was just kinda crying when I realized the baby was dead, but then reading how broken Tom and Bill were, I was devastated too. Poor Tom and Bill.
You better give them something happy now. Haha.
Author's Response: I promise you, they WILL have a happy ending. It was poor them, but don't worry. It'll all work itself out.
Date: 06/25/09 01:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty
ah!! their baby died.. ;__________; that is soo sad. but for some reason i had a feeling that might happen or the baby being born but dying couple months later. I think the second might be worse. 0_o;; ah.. i don't know how long it might take both Bill and Tom to recover from this. It is a very tragic loss especially for Bill. :[
Author's Response: The second would be worse. It changes so much the second the baby actually comes out and you've held it alive. I've seen first hand how someone can be affected by that, and it's heartbreaking. Worse than miscarrying. But all in all, remember I write happy endings.
Date: 06/25/09 01:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty
oh my god i cried thats so sad
Author's Response: *huggles and offers tissues*
Date: 06/25/09 01:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty
i cried! i'm such a sap. lol
Author's Response: *hugs* Aww!
Date: 06/25/09 12:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty
awwww that wasn`t fair why did he lost his baby, hope he can get pregnant again and this doesn`t leave a big mark in their relationship....now hope you can update soon, take care.
Author's Response: It wasn't anyone's fault. He just didn't have the right internal combination to carry it any longer. Thanks for reviewing
Date: 06/25/09 12:35 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I did! I cried! OMG! You...you...OMG! That was so heartbreaking!! And...why the fuck was Bill riding?! Why?! That's very fucking dangerous for pregnancy! Still...I wonder what's going to happen because that's a hell of a trauma and...OMG I don't know what to think anymore! *cries hard*
I hope everything goes ok later...*sits alone mourning for the fetus*
I-I...*sobs* will wait...*sobs* for the next c-chapter! *starts crying again*
*goes into a depressive mood*
Author's Response: *hugs and offers tissue* Bill was riding because A)he didn't know any better B)think about the time frame this is. . .They thought they could get rid of the Plague by whipping themselves. . .*hugs tighter* I didn't think I made it that sad. Keep in mind, I write HAPPY endings XD This story is only like, half over.
Date: 06/24/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
*raises hand* *is still totally crying so hard that this review is going to blow* I... can't believe the babbeh died... I think I died a little on the inside too... *sniffle* that was beautifully written though.... absolutely perfect... thank you
Author's Response: Oh no! I didn't mean for part of you to die too! I'm glad you liked the writing though. I tried so hard.
Date: 06/24/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
-raises hand to wipe eyes- I CRIED! -sniffles- poor them. -runs to you for cuddles-
Author's Response: *hugs tight and offers tissue*
Date: 06/24/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
why couldn't you make there baby survive....why?
Author's Response: Because I'm mean? No actually it's because Bill's combination of male bits and female bits make him unable to carry for the full term. I'm sorry.
Date: 06/20/09 02:07 am Title: Prologue One: Modern Day Berlin
I feel like such a freak telling you this but I really don't care! XD
You should listen to Therion's Secret of the Runes! It's really good!
Each song of the album talks about each one of the 9 worlds that exist in the Yggdrasil and the secret on the runes of them. Along with a prologue called 'Ginnungagap' and a epilogue called 'Secret of the Runes'
This is the one dedicated to the Schwarzalbenheim...it's not viking metal but it's pretty good in my opinion
Hope you like it! :D And if you need the translation just tell me!
Author's Response: That was actually amazing! Thanks so much for introducing me to it.
Date: 06/19/09 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
yay they are back together! when's the next chapter.
Author's Response: The next update is on wednesday. Thanks for the comment!
Date: 06/19/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
what a great story. been there since the beginning. to awesome i must say. anyways i hope that Bill survives the birth of his and Tom's son....
I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for following this. It's been quite the journey so far. Thanks so much for leaving a review.
Date: 06/18/09 11:51 pm Title: Prologue One: Modern Day Berlin
You're never nerd enough! XD I love myths SO fucking much! Actually I knew the nordic ones thanks to an anime called Saint Seiya! I fell in love with Sigfried character and well...I NEEDED to research about it more!
You know Amon Amarth!! Finally someone that likes good metal!! OMG have you heard Therion's Secret of the Runes?! I love those songs! :D
Dethklok rocks!! *headbangs*
Author's Response: WOOO! I feel cool now. And yes! I loves myths. Greek and Egyptian ones are my fave. To me, the Norse stories are just how things are, so I don't really count them as myths XD And no I haven't heard Therion's Secret of the Runes.
Date: 06/18/09 11:50 pm Title: Prologue One: Modern Day Berlin
I can agree with that. lol >.<